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Chi Jianan was a textbook cannon-fodder character. On the very first day the real young master returned home, he was kicked out of the house.
The scum gong and slutty shou of the original story weren't satisfied with that. Together, they set up Chi Jianan, who was trying to make a living in the entertainment industry, with a minor director. In the end, amid the fake young master's anguished cries, they lived as a celebrity couple envied by the entire internet.
Chi Jianan, awakening beneath a bridge: ****, get lost!
In response, Chi chose to play the dating-reality-show card.
The retirement project of a top industry bigwig, and his only variety show: I've Been Waiting for You
A proud top-tier star singer, a hugely popular actor, a poisonous beauty of a writer, and the three-time Best Actor whom the scum gong feared and the slutty shou admired: Lu Yangqing, the Lu family's power behind the scenes, and the man ranked number one on the whole internet's list of people they'd most like to bang.
The scum gong and slutty shou expected Chi Jianan to be viciously attacked online. They never imagined that Lu Yangqing and Chi Jianan would suddenly become a wildly popular CP.
Scum gong: He's just acting. Who would ever like Chi Jianan?
But at a Lu family dinner, the scum gong's father pushed his head down and made him call Chi Jianan "Little Auntie."
Chi Jianan: I don't dare accept that. It might shorten my life.
Lu Yangqing smiled faintly. The next second, the scum gong's father grabbed him by the ear and dragged him off to face the family discipline.
Lu Yangqing smiled and kissed the cheek of the person in his arms. "Feel better now?"
Chi Jianan waved a haughty hand. "It's fine, it's fine."
[1]
The dating show's deserted-island survival episode.
During the livestream, everyone noticed that Chi Jianan and Lu Yangqing had quietly disappeared from the cameras.
The director pushed through the thick undergrowth and finally spotted the missing couple at the shore. He didn't go too close, filming quietly from a few steps away.
The people in the livestream were going wild, the comments flying by at lightning speed.
The night was tranquil, the moon and stars bright, and the gentle sea breeze carried waves that lapped softly against the sand.
Chi Jianan gently stroked Lu Yangqing's cheek. "Do you like me?"
The bonfire blazed, its flickering light illuminating Lu Yangqing's calm, tender face.
He held Chi Jianan by the waist with one hand, his expression devout, like a believer offering up a sacrifice to the gods.
"My soul belongs to you."
My master, my love.
[2]
For Chi Jianan's nineteenth birthday, he released a set of photos cosplaying as a lop-eared bunny agent.
In the photos, the beautiful, proud agent sat on a tall table, her slender legs crossed, her shapely calves encased in combat boots.
Part of a suited thug kneeling on the ground also appeared in the photos. Chi Jianan's toe rested on the man's shoulder, pressing down ever so slightly.
The most-liked comment asked: Baby, tell Mom who that man is.
Chi Jianan replied: He's a staff member.
Not long after, a fluffy ear briefly appeared in the background of Lu Yangqing's livestream from his study at home.
Netizens: Wait, why does that look familiar?
Chi Jianan's Weibo was lively again: Baby, tell Mom the truth. Who is that man?
Half an hour later, the most-liked comment got a reply.
Lu Yangqing: Sorry, I think that's me.
1. From public enemy to everyone's darling.
2. A naturally alluring, dark-lotus shou * an older gong who dotes on him and carefully lays his plans.
3. One-on-one, both virgins. No characters are based on anyone in the entertainment industry!
Completed sweet-doting stories with intersex shous:
Cross-Dressing and Online Dating My Roommate Went Wrong
The Pretty Boy Tried to Win Over the Big Shot's Heart and It Went Wrong
Theme: Stay positive.
Suddenly I discovered that A-lin has a kind of sadness that suits Wan Fangqian very well [crying]
Great, the welfare extra story finally made Yan Bailian pay a real price. He was too vicious in the book and in reality. The real Jianan didn't inflict real harm to him who was also awakened even if he had the script. But the Jianan in the book was actually killed and ruined, and finally died tragically. If the Jianan in the book had not used the method of soul annihilation to help the real Jianan, the real Jianan would have followed the same path as in the book. It makes no sense that both Jianan suffered, but one Yan Bailian lived peacefully. It's a pity that Yan Bailian in the book was not exposed until his death. His frame-up of Jianan was not exposed, and he was not directly punished for it. It was still too light. He should have been ruined, accused by thousands of people, and reviled by thousands of people. He should also have a taste of hell.
Oh yo yo, you are young and have a lot of thoughts, no wonder kidnapping your wife went so smoothly [touching head]
I stumbled across it by chance and have watched most of it. I really like the big settings and it really tickled my xp. There are some small suggestions that you might want to pay a little attention to (of course, it's okay not to pay attention, as long as you like it!), Such as the rhythm of the article or the writing style. I can't say much if I don't write the article. It would be better if I wrote more. But there is one most basic thing that you may want to pay attention to, that is, there should be no contradictions in the plot settings in the article. For example, when I saw that Wan Dongque said at the beginning that the investigation found that her mother's death was related to her father's cheating, and later said that her mother's death was caused by the three-year-old Wan Dongque's wandering around. There is also Xiao Chi's character. At first he said he was ambitious, but now he said he would quit after working for five years and win the Best Actor Award (but this is okay, because he also said it was to take away Yan Qiu's trophy). Also, I said earlier that the book Reverse Parasitism was good, and later I said that the plot of Reverse Parasitism was mediocre, etc. Inconsistent descriptions in the article are not particularly rare, which will make readers lose the reading experience.
(Allow me to add my A again) This is the first time I have written this kind of comment. I don't know if the author can see the past comments. This is the first time. I really like the author's setting. I have opened a lot of new holes when I saw it. Then I interacted with the comment area quite frequently. I feel that I like it and want to develop it. If the content should not be inconsistent, it will be easier to remember the key content, otherwise the attention may be focused on the contradictory areas. Then I really, really like the author's setting, and I hope it will be good!
Ps: This is really the first time I post such a comment. If you feel uncomfortable in any way, please report it directly! ! !
"Establishing imagination" is a big bug for the author~
"Qianpanpai" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
"The old department is aloof" is a big bug for the author~
"Can you be angry with me?" This is a big bug for the author~
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It tastes good to me, I like it, I like it??
Suddenly I discovered that A-lin has a kind of sadness that suits Wan Fangqian very well [crying]
Great, the welfare extra story finally made Yan Bailian pay a real price. He was too vicious in the book and in reality. The real Jianan didn't inflict real harm to him who was also awakened even if he had the script. But the Jianan in the book was actually killed and ruined, and finally died tragically. If the Jianan in the book had not used the method of soul annihilation to help the real Jianan, the real Jianan would have followed the same path as in the book. It makes no sense that both Jianan suffered, but one Yan Bailian lived peacefully. It's a pity that Yan Bailian in the book was not exposed until his death. His frame-up of Jianan was not exposed, and he was not directly punished for it. It was still too light. He should have been ruined, accused by thousands of people, and reviled by thousands of people. He should also have a taste of hell.
Oh yo yo, you are young and have a lot of thoughts, no wonder kidnapping your wife went so smoothly [touching head]
I stumbled across it by chance and have watched most of it. I really like the big settings and it really tickled my xp. There are some small suggestions that you might want to pay a little attention to (of course, it's okay not to pay attention, as long as you like it!), Such as the rhythm of the article or the writing style. I can't say much if I don't write the article. It would be better if I wrote more. But there is one most basic thing that you may want to pay attention to, that is, there should be no contradictions in the plot settings in the article. For example, when I saw that Wan Dongque said at the beginning that the investigation found that her mother's death was related to her father's cheating, and later said that her mother's death was caused by the three-year-old Wan Dongque's wandering around. There is also Xiao Chi's character. At first he said he was ambitious, but now he said he would quit after working for five years and win the Best Actor Award (but this is okay, because he also said it was to take away Yan Qiu's trophy). Also, I said earlier that the book Reverse Parasitism was good, and later I said that the plot of Reverse Parasitism was mediocre, etc. Inconsistent descriptions in the article are not particularly rare, which will make readers lose the reading experience. (Allow me to add my A again) This is the first time I have written this kind of comment. I don't know if the author can see the past comments. This is the first time. I really like the author's setting. I have opened a lot of new holes when I saw it. Then I interacted with the comment area quite frequently. I feel that I like it and want to develop it. If the content should not be inconsistent, it will be easier to remember the key content, otherwise the attention may be focused on the contradictory areas. Then I really, really like the author's setting, and I hope it will be good! Ps: This is really the first time I post such a comment. If you feel uncomfortable in any way, please report it directly! ! !
"Establishing imagination" is a big bug for the author~
"Qianpanpai" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
"The old department is aloof" is a big bug for the author~
"Can you be angry with me?" This is a big bug for the author~
"Continuous waste" is a big bug for the author ~