[The most terrifying thing in the world has happened: you’ve seen what this author wrote at sixteen.]
I still don’t know how to write a blurb. Please spare me /. (playing golf)
As I remember it, this story was very sweet, and the plot was simple. The timeline and scene descriptions are a bit like a montage (ah, that’s not how you use “montage”). The whole thing feels very episodic, basically only describing scenes that matter, and the descriptions are extremely piled-up (I still haven’t fixed that). I cut a lot of plot after revising it, so there are empty chapters, because it was way too edgy (kneeling and crying.jpg).
Theme: Keep chasing the wind and moon; don’t stop along the way.
The setting is pretty good, thank you for your hard work, madam!
The setting is pretty good, thank you for your hard work, madam!
Author, you are waiting for me to take winter vacation. I'm still in school. I still come back once a month. I have to go to school again tomorrow. I must watch it when I have a holiday 😭 😭