I Was Accepted into a Cultivation School

? This is not normal, is it not finished?

This is my favorite cool plot flow! The pace is very fast and fast, and the plot points come one after another. It must have taken a lot of energy to write this one, and I was even more rushed later (a bit too rushed, but I like this book, so I can't hide the shortcomings), but seeing the author's first time writing such a long article, it's great to be like this now. It's the first time to write like this, so the future is promising. I read too many stories about this kind of heroine's journey to immortality and got stuck in it. Some of them didn't get stuck, but they ended hurriedly with unclear explanations. But compared to the ones that got stuck, it's not bad. I'm at peace now after reading the article for many years. This film is a real plot flow. When I watched it, I felt like a lot of information was poured into my mind. I felt very happy after watching it. This shouldn't be collected. Maybe it has something to do with the title of the novel? I feel that the school of cultivating immortals seems to be biased towards modern immortality, and the introduction does not reveal too much information. I thought it was a light-hearted one at first, but actually the plot is more towards traditional immortality. This title may not attract readers who want to watch the traditional female protagonist's upgrade process, and readers who are attracted by the title will want to watch something more relaxed. The ending was a bit rushed, it would have been better if it had stayed at the same pace as the beginning. But the article is very good. I haven't seen such a good article in a long time. It can be regarded as an upgrade. It's just like National Day. I'm very happy after reading it. Nowadays, there is often a controversy that the heroine of the female channel has no highlights. This problem does not exist at all. The highlights of the plot are basically driven by the protagonist. But when I watched it, I felt that Yu Xing might be a little tired, as if he didn't get much rest. The plot points are too dense. I often finish here and go to the next secret realm. After going to the secret realm, I will go to the next secret realm again. If there is something that needs to be dealt with, you can give Yu Xing a model worker in the cultivation world [laughing] Although it is an upgrade stream, and there are many things and conspiracies to deal with, one after another, but there is no sense of embarrassment in the growth process, and we who follow the heroine's perspective will not feel aggrieved. It is great for me who likes refreshing novels. However, because it is too plot-oriented, the character creation seems to be lacking. The basic characters, including the protagonist, are all shaped by the plot, and the characters themselves have relatively few anchor points. For example, the heroine has a bird standing on her shoulder (the bird has a bad temper). This anchor point is very clear, but otherwise it will be weaker. For others, maybe I didn't pay attention. There are too many plots. Just accepting the plot alone contains a lot of information, from the mortal world of the Immortal Talisman World, to the cultivation world of the Immortal Talisman World, to the true cultivation world, interspersed with various things about human demons and spiritual masters, and then following time to the cultivation world tens of millions of years ago (? Or the fairy world, the one with immortals), and then to the cultivation world of the war ten thousand years ago. Because the heroine controls the power of time, she runs around everywhere, and there are plot points everywhere. There are very few emotional points (it doesn't matter). I started to think that the bird is an ordinary spiritual pet. It's a classic plot of upgrade flow. There is an egg at the beginning [dog head]. But after writing so much, I still feel that there are still things to explain, so treasure, what about the extra [kiss]

Very good, the flowers are finished! ! ! At the end, I did feel that the pace was too fast, and I felt like I was just living the plot all the time [laughing and crying], but it was still a very interesting article! ! ! Keep up the good work [Cat's Claw][Rose][Good Luck Lotus]

Extras are faster and faster! ! ! ! !

Wow Taisu came to the cafeteria [dog head]

So what about the extra chapter? I'm really looking forward to it.

It's not an open ending. It's too open and sudden.

Haven't updated since the end of June? No follow-up? Is this already over or what does it mean?

Did I remember it wrong? Why do you remember that the life and death curse was not broken?

I have forgotten what was in front of me