The Female Side Character Got Together with the Dominating Male Lead

So helpless, the plot is very good, but it feels a bit unfinished, and the portrayal of the supporting characters is also a bit lacking, especially the second senior sister who is supposed to be a rebellious character who can't help but follow her fate, but for some reason she always seems like a stupid young man who has a soft ear and believes everything indiscriminately. I'm a bit disappointed...

After carefully writing my review, overall I feel that the supporting characters are not vivid enough. For example, the second senior sister, who becomes stronger and takes revenge to kill the master, can be regarded as a standard villain. In the finale, Xie Juan is still killed. I thought there would be any changes. I was disappointed. There is also Xie Juan, a standard tool man, who needs to be moved wherever he needs to be. The author's writing is too subtle or something. I feel that the relationship with the heroine is ambiguous without explaining clearly. That Bai Wujiu thought he was very charming, but in the end, he lived in other people's mouths. The other supporting characters are more or less psychopathic and I don't like them. The previous barrage and the mountain explosion were very interesting to watch, the way of heaven and the demonic energy were also very interesting, and the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist was also very interesting. But did it end too quickly? The ending felt almost interesting. The female protagonist and the male protagonist can be regarded as saving the entire world of cultivation, but what is described in the epilogue does not receive the honor and respect they deserve. There is not much description of the five things in the front, and then the epilogue says that he wants to kill the child of the male and female protagonist, which is a bit confusing. After everything ends, the readers' feelings should be considered.

😚 Congratulations on the completion. Let's make a quick complaint. The plot seems a bit confusing at the end, and the heroine's indecisive character in the later stages made me a little anxious. I personally think that the biggest highlight of this article is the emotional line. You, the author, really know how to write it. The male and female protagonists are really cute [kissing], the two cute babies fall in love, and the supporting characters also have their own interesting points. They are all a group of good babies. Also, the setting of awakening consciousness is quite interesting.

The young couple falling in love is particularly interesting. The rest of the plot is a bit like daddy.

It feels a little bit unfinished, sorry.

I think the female master failed very, very badly in raising children.

I took it. I don't know why. I was not happy with it. Tang Hua and Wuzhi were a couple and had a child. Wuzhi almost killed the child of the male protagonist and the heroine. Hiss, Wen Tanghua drugged the heroine and the male protagonist again because of Yang. I really took it. I thought the ending of the male protagonist was just a joke. He thought he was going to die but hey, it turned out to be a whole life. The heroine was killed by her master after raising a wolf. In the previous life, the heroine fell in love with her master. The master who raised the heroine in this life is in danger, so the heroine helps her master forget about the hero. If the hero hadn't kept her alive, she and her lover would be in trouble. I feel a little angry.

No, who can find fault? Oh my God, it's over. I can't bear to let it go. Let's put some more candy in it.

After a lot of effort, the extra story turned out to be a child. . . . .

It gives me the feeling that the heroine is telling the hero and the master: Stop fighting! Everyone is my wings!