It's Knocking on Your Door [Nonhuman]
祂在敲响你家门[人外]
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The copywriting is beautiful, and the main text does not have that scary feeling, and the folklore and cyber future settings make it even more confusing. It feels like I know that everything is fake, and there is no sense of surprise if there are no arms and blood. The setting is still very good. It would be great if it could be written according to the copywriting level. The main text is a bit long-winded and messy.
The introduction is well written, but the main text makes me confused and a little confused! But generally speaking it's okay! Touch your head
It's so strange, I can't really understand it (it's my problem with my low cultural level), I can only say, come on, ma'am.
The narrative of the article is a bit complicated, and the characters are not three-dimensional for the time being, but I think folklore + cyberpunk is quite novel and very creative 💪
I was originally thinking about why my classmates had such good names but the heroine was so simple. Later, when I thought about the heroine's life experience, her father did not love her mother, and she understood. How could a child who was born ordinary have the thought to give her a meaningful name?
Let me talk about it, there are two problems: first, the background introduction, including the characters. It feels like someone's name always pops up suddenly, which is quite confusing; secondly, there is the problem of taking over, the heroine suddenly returns to the house, and the head teacher calls someone (I skipped here, maybe I didn't read carefully. I thought the head teacher called at first, evil god? Knocked on the door outside, but later found out that the article said the head teacher was present? It's a bit confusing here, so I skipped it later). I think it would be better to be more detailed here. This is just a suggestion, I hope you don't mind. Would mind
Ah Na ordered a group of classmates and then the heroine named Zhou Yiyi? A little difficult to stretch...
Doubtful about life, don't understand
Does the heroine's "memory" come from the male protagonist?
Teacher, you are really a superman who writes about love... I love reading it. I feel several years younger after reading it. Is this the nourishment of love? (Hey