Falling Blossoms Shine on the Water, Leaves Topple the Sky

It seems that everyone has regrets.

I've dedicated two long reviews to you! Because I feel you have a lot of room for improvement, I decided to write a long review for each article I read. I hope you won't mind. Some of the comments in the short reviews made some valid points, but they weren't explained in much detail. The story's plot was a bit rough; given its short length, it could have been more refined.

This short story is short, but it's really too rough. It feels like a story that should have been a novella or a longer piece, but many details were cut out, resulting in this kind of story. It's short, but it doesn't feel concise. However, I'm very curious about Mr. Wei Yu. I'll go to his column to see if the overall framework has been filled in.

Huh? I thought the medicine was for my junior brother...

I always feel so bad that Fei Hua and Du Shen could be together... Because their interactions are so cute and sweet, it seems like there's a real possibility of a relationship between them.

... All I can say is, this story is truly morally corrupt... The only likable character in this story is Mr. Wei Yu...

Feihua's personality is too vague. With the author's skill, it would have been better to portray her as having a more extreme personality. It seems the intention was to create a refined and elegant character? But then she becomes obsequious and such = = And that wicked smile in front of Weiyu? I can't remember clearly, not to mention her sudden dark turn, and such a mindless one at that.

Why, why, why, why? I don't understand!

An interesting story; looking forward to other stories within this framework :)

It's so well written! What a wonderful young master, Fei Hua! I love him, but he's dead.