The Mystic's Legacy

At the end of the ending, I felt a bit unfinished... But the extra was so good. And, look at my mark(.

It is both a rehabilitation work and a work of accumulation. You can easily find elements in "The Rules of the Silent Gentleman" and "The Dating History of Blood Tribes in the New World" by the same author. The author's XP is as good as ever, and I feel as happy as ever while reading it. 1. Characters: The author sets up a mysterious organization as usual, but this time there are more descriptions of specific characters in the mysterious organization. It would be better to say that all the characters appearing in the article have more or less promoted the development of the plot, especially the development of the team battle plot. No character who appears is a simple tool person who appears and goes away. All of them have been reused twice or even multiple times. The characters are set up as tightly as a sophisticated secret mechanism. I was already stunned by the author's powerful creative ability. The settings of the two protagonists still follow the author's preference, and are configured as "mysterious and powerful attacks x fresh and upgraded enemies". Looking at it this way, you may feel that this is just the most classic setting of being stronger when attacked by force, but what if I say that the author likes Gong to be more worried about gains and losses in this relationship, and sometimes even in a psychological inferiority! Alas, in short, those who love this pairing relationship will find it very annoying. Although the master is not good at exaggerating the emotional atmosphere, as long as the setting and plot are casually tossed, the CP party will defend it (hey). I prefer this writing method of "two people work together to push the plot, and the emotional line will naturally develop in the process of pushing the plot", because I believe that emotions are the product of "instant impulse + trickle of water". Instead of suddenly starting a long period of purely emotional tugging and tugging in the middle of the plot, it is more natural and smooth for the two to merge with each other and the emotional line to embellish the plot line. The rhythm arrangement of the plot and emotions in this book is much more advanced than that of "The Silent Gentleman", and it is not achieved by pure plot reversal like "The Turing Test". It is very admirable and shows that the author is consciously learning how to write emotional lines and has gained a lot. Going a step further, apart from the two protagonists, a character I also like very much is Xenophon, and I also like the author's description of the CB-oriented interaction within the Night Watchmen. It is said that literary works have "writing without writing", and I feel that authors are also approaching this writing method intentionally or unintentionally. Readers can rely on the parts that the author has written to imagine the unwritten parts that the author has left blank. This is not common in online novels, and it also requires courage and skill. Although this book has only 600,000 words and only four "copies" of content, after reading it, you will feel that the plot is complete and the ending is satisfactory. Of course, there are still some unfinished meanings, but that is what readers can imagine on their own. I'm going off topic again, but in fact, there were parts of Duan Feizhuo's character that I didn't really like at first (for example, he seemed cold, mean, and timid). I think this is also the essential reason why some readers would think, "How could Z fall in love with him?" But maybe this is a manifestation of the author's so-called difficulty in writing about rehabilitation in the early stage, because this phenomenon completely disappeared in the middle and later stages. After reading the entire book, you will find that the author is not trying to create a cold and mean character, so there can only be one reason: the author uses too much force in some paragraphs, causing the character to give priority to descriptions that are not conducive to establishing the image when the character cannot fully stand up, which affects the overall impression of the character in the early stage. The way to solve this problem painlessly is also very simple. If you read the early part again after reading it for the first time, you will feel that it is not so subtle. And, although this point of view is the main one, I slightly thought about Duan Feizhuo from the perspective of Z in the early stage, and it felt very funny: in the eyes of Z in the early stage, Duan Feizhuo was a sickly doctor and junior who was loved by everyone, but his health was so poor that he fell into coma and disappeared once. He always had a righteous face and spoke uprightly to fight against evil forces (referring to mystics) and he also cared about his friends. He was really a completely different and pure good person from himself! 2. Plot: My favorite chapter is the final part of the team fight. It is so exciting that I am willing to be knocked unconscious and re-read it a hundred times. The author admitted frankly that rehabilitation caused the plot to get stuck in the early stage, but perhaps it was due to the emotional bonus, and I didn't feel too many jerky parts. The whole book has the tight framework and compact rhythm of "The Blood Tribe", as well as the ups and downs and interlocking links of "The Silent Gentleman". The battle section contains quite a lot of damage, especially the one where Duan Feizhuo is in coma, and there is even a section where he enjoys being attacked to death. Master, why do I, a layman like me, like to eat this! If you think about it carefully, the plot mode is relatively traditional, and you can basically guess the follow-up direction. But the author's writing style had a firm hold on me, and the cold humor throughout could always make me laugh. Even if there is a blood-pressure-raising "forget-it" plot and some minor logical holes, it doesn't hurt. ("Throw it behind": In a certain novel, in order to ensure the order of the plot, the author often arranges for the heroine to think of key clues but then "throw it behind". This is used to refer to Duan Feizhuo who has noticed an abnormal phenomenon but is forced to "ignore" it.) 3. Feelings: As a reader who read four free books by the author in a row before reading this book, I almost burst into tears when I read the emotional line in this book: Oh my God, Bard Exorcist Master, when did your emotional line skills develop to such an extent! In the past, the master was only good at writing settings and climaxes, and turning points relied entirely on blank spaces and blunt inferences. In this book, many writing techniques were consciously used, which showed me how moved the author was about painlessly developing emotional lines at zero cost (hey). The CP pairing in this book is still the "soul mate + comrade-in-arms affection + long-lasting love" that the master is good at. Several times when the two people fought side by side and supported each other, they did not forget to deliberately write some emotional interactions. Although there was some embarrassment in the early stage of "excessive force but in the wrong direction, which caused the audience to think of Chu Zhongtian as a vertical version of Lin Dan", in the middle and later stages, once you are immersed in it, it becomes very exciting and touching. Yes, this is because the author finally started to "carefully" write the emotional line. Before, he was only at level A and now he finally uses elemental combat skills! Although the author is occasionally arrogant, please read the most sincere and touching emotional description section in the full text - Z's reasons for falling in love with Duan Feizhuo and the pull of his inner emotions: "He once had a ridiculous dream. He dreamed that he had been walking alone in this world for a long time and finally met someone who could express his sincerity. That person has the gentleness of a doctor and the fortitude of a warrior. It looks like a finely carved gem on the outside, but it is burning with fire on the inside. When he walks through the dark night with a lamp, people can't help but want to kiss the shadow behind him. (This echoes the previous article, implying that the two have a hurt&comfort relationship) But it's all a scam. It's all an illusion. "

After so many years, I finally finished reading the remaining photos. I thought there would be a wedding in the end like in The Ultimate Wife, haha

This is the second book by the author that I have read (the first was Turing). The logic, perception, and emotional lines are all better. But the hasty ending has to be changed... Keep working hard.

To be honest, I really like this episode about the agent and the doctor!

It's so beautiful. Why is it so beautiful? I really like my wife's writing. Why is it so beautiful? Come and check it out. Taijiba is so beautiful.

What a fragrant rice. I haven't had such fragrant rice in a long time. Mom, ah!

Your writing style is really good. When will you write something like this again (???)

Nice! Woohoo! It's just a bad TAT

So romantic, oooooooooo (biting the handkerchief)