I once envied the clouds in the mountains, where every stream falls at the wind's whim.
Also known as A Mountain Half Wrong
After a roadside fortune-teller read her fortune, Yue Chusan returned to the mountains and began living a life of gloom and despondency.
Her life had always seemed carefree and easy, but that was only in the past.
Now she seemed to understand her fate, and decided to leave the mountain for good and search for the truth about her origins.
After descending the mountain, she traveled a long way, yet somehow felt as if she had returned to the mountains.
Life moved slowly. Rumors spread through her clan, conflicts erupted one after another, and a boy she had just met lost his memory and grew anxious and insecure, always afraid she would abandon him at any moment. A beautiful new friend was constantly suspicious, always feeling that danger lurked nearby.
The fortune-teller glimpsed the secrets of fate and went blind that very night.
She lost her beloved, her friends left, and she struggled desperately in solitude between life and death, yet no matter what, she could never unravel her fate.
Many years later, Yue Shisan gazed at the full moon and remembered the day she had first left the mountain. That night, too, she had looked up at a moon just like this, her heart in a daze.
Now, it was as if she stood atop the Wrong Mountain.
This journey is arduous, and the mountain stretches on without end.
Theme: Turn the tables against all odds!
I found a problem with your novel, that is, the conflict is not obvious enough. If you look at other routines, the whole family dies at the beginning, they are framed miserably at the beginning and then reborn, etc. They all want to bring out the most intense conflicts in the first three chapters to attract readers. Your writing is good, but you don't know the routine. You need to study more of the tricks of popular articles to survive in Jinjiang.