My Skill Is Touching Corpses [Infinite]

For the first time, I felt a little angry. The ending was too open and I couldn't stand it. Everything was left to be determined. I was really speechless. And in the end, it really ended for the sake of the ending. I even hated the heroine. Especially when I was poisoned, I really felt that my character was broken.

The poor data is your fault. The early framework was too big. During the period when you stopped updating, you rewrote all the frameworks. The story at the beginning was indeed very good, but you can't get it back. Or maybe you don't want to spend time writing a long story, you dug too many holes but didn't fill them, and even after resuming the update, it was unfinished, with an inexplicable emotional line. I'm speechless. We have so many readers who have been waiting for so long.

You're finished... It feels like it didn't take long after the update was resumed, and the updates in the middle were still very bleak. Although I didn't want to read it when I stopped reading (because I didn't like the previous article before it was revised), but it gave people the feeling that you didn't want to write anymore. What the author said seemed to be quite genuine. But the problem is that there is still a lot that has not been written before it is finished. It is still an open ending, but that's okay.

I really want to say that the ending is too bad. It was written in a hurry and makes the readers confused. It's not fun at all.

. I also didn't expect that in a novel written in 2024, there would be a novel heroine who has different views from me, a long-time reader of Infinite Flow. The comments downstairs are very objective and gentle, so I tried my best to express them in a gentle way. (May contain spoilers) The early stage level is neither up nor down, but it can still be watched. At the beginning, I felt that the heroine was quite crazy and a bit abnormal, but as the author said, she was not happy and relied more on luck and character card skills to save her life. In the early stage, other than the feeling that the heroine was very poor at passing the test, I had no other impression. By the mid-term, I started to feel a little uncomfortable. (The timeline of events here does not guarantee the order of events.) The author himself forgot to set it up, so I won't say anything about it. He also said in the sanatorium that the text fell apart and he is rewriting it. I thought that the old singing lady introduced before this dungeon was for some purpose, but it turned out... It was just to give the heroine connections. I don't understand the point of having a miserable editor-in-chief grandmother. In addition, the relationship between Zuo Ran and the heroine is also very blunt. The heroine said to the second elder, "He is just a reward." When the second elder said that she could try to help him recover his memory, her face turned dark. Hmm... I can understand the possessive outburst... But the description is very low-level, and the image she portrays is not the image of a heroine at all. The spiritual pet incident really made me lose my mind. I originally thought it was a non-CP with emotional descriptions. Zuo Ran appeared for a while and felt that there were signs of an emotional drama. As a result, the author came up with a humanoid demon spiritual pet who is "100% loyal" and extremely clinging to the heroine. Um? Open a harem? No, it's just that the heroine loves "100% loyalty" ~ This is a rare thing that can give her peace of mind and comfort ~ After that, it is a primary school love drama, jealousy + misunderstanding + cold war + reconciliation. It seems that the author has not thought about the emotional line. He originally did not know who the heroine will rely on emotionally next. (Zuo Ran is very much like Long Aotian's green plum, special, I think about it, but I can't give it 100%) Mr. Yan is too lazy to say anything. His image throughout the entire episode is unflattering. I don't understand why he still has an emotional scene with the heroine. His role: serving as a network + helping the heroine with things + causing problems for the heroine. Finally, after Zuo Ran left, the heroine could still get along well with him, it was... Like a stick in her throat. In addition, I don't know if the author is playing with abstraction or something. Once the heroine returned to the ghost world and found that Zuo Ran was not there, she suddenly had a need for control and thought, "He shouldn't be allowed to go out and show his face" (the beginning of more than 200 chapters). Just, it smells very strong, like a classic male version. I checked the Infinite Streaming Heroine, and I saw that I was right, and the 2024 article, too, was wrong. Did the author do this intentionally, or was he limited by his writing style and could only express it this way? What makes me most uncomfortable is that the people around the heroine are all tool people. They may have their own character arcs in the beginning. Once they become the heroine's people, they become the heroine's foil and background. What a cool start our sweet sister had. After she analyzed the situation, she went straight to the butcher and faced off against the two bosses one after another. Later, he was betrayed by the organization and rescued by the heroine, so he took the opportunity given by the heroine to form a new organization "carefully, like a child who gets a chance for the first time" (roughly the same meaning), our sweet sister is super stable, okay? Moreover, the heroine had an inner drama at that time, thinking that Sister Tian was betrayed by the organization, so that they could devote themselves to building a better future, and she would give Sister Tian a family. (Chokes) (Don't want to talk) The same goes for Dead Water. In the early stage, he was there to protect the undeveloped female protagonist from harm. In the later stage, neither of them thought about it or said anything about it. The ending feels like a hard concave arc, and oh, by the way, the heroine is gifted with another talent. The heroine's premise is really broken, and the author wants to write that the heroine is a scumbag with a beautiful man, and also wants to portray her feelings for Zuo Ran (Zuo Ran's ending is also confusing). The heroine's hard-charging, truthful, benevolent and beautiful character won her a reputation in the Holy Court, but in the end, it was not mentioned at all in the secret realm. The heroine received a mission to go to the secret realm to collect a top-notch egg. The heroine took the egg away, but she couldn't beat the guard () so she walked around the secret realm surrounded by dark guards, causing many people to miss their original opportunities. When the heroine came out and saw someone saying this, she felt aggrieved, "It's not my fault." (That's what the author wrote, although I don't understand why he portrayed it this way.) How did the guard solve it? We gathered a group of brothers and sisters to solve the problem together, and there was no other expression except a thank you, because it was a task given to the heroine~ In addition, I feel that it is limited by the author's writing style. Many things happen as casually as the heroine touching a corpse. Not to mention that there is no foreshadowing problem. It is very far-fetched. I will make an outline next time. There are actually more shortcomings than these, this is just the first thing I can think of at the moment. The author said that the meaning of this book lies in completeness rather than perfection. This sentence is really rude. I hope that the next book will not have these problems.

How can I put it? The first half is very interesting, but things start to feel a little different in the middle and back. I feel like I am unable to follow up. But the author's first book is also great. I look forward to your new work.

It doesn't have so many shortcomings, and it doesn't have to be perfect. It's very powerful, and the world view is well shaped. The other map is slowly opening up. I like the yard in the ghost world the best. In fact, it's good to slow down the pace and slowly enter the dungeon. The world and the ghost management are parallel. It's a long story with a thousand chapters. Don't take the author's ideas too seriously. Your imagination and writing skills are already very good.

? Didn't my brother spend dozens of dollars after watching it for so many days, and if he said it was bad, it would be bad? ?

It's unfinished. The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good. The author still needs to improve his writing skills. It's a pity.

It feels like it ended in a hurry, I don't know what to say