There is a color photo of the deceased on the big red wooden cabinet at home.
The person in the photo is smiling kindly.
——That was what she had prepared for herself early in the morning,
——At that time, she would even smile and say: This photo is really good.
Actually I don't understand,
I don't understand how someone can prepare their own funeral so calmly.
But that doesn't stop me from feeling sad.
Reading tips:
1Enter with caution.
2About family affection.
3First person.
4Diary format.
Intention: Cherish the moment.
Reader comments
I have read the entire article and the plot direction is pretty good. The funny, sweet, uncomfortable and helpless scenes in the middle also attracted me to continue watching. Overall, the writing is great~!
I hope the details can be greatly improved. Here are a few detailed questions:
1. Why are the male and female protagonists rich? The heroine's home was demolished? But why was the original house in the name of the heroine, and how did the money end up in her account? During the demolition process, three to five years was actually considered fast, and the demolition process was also full of twists and turns. If the parents knew that they could completely control it, it doesn't make sense here. The same goes for the male protagonist. In the end, I have no idea why the male protagonist is rich and can spend money in the game. He is just a sophomore and can also raise a single Lin Fei. It is not stated clearly and the reader can only rely on the reader's imagination to figure out whether there is compensation or inheritance after the death of his parents.
2. The relationship between the male protagonist and the Marriott Lu family was not clearly stated in the end. It was originally written about friends, and it only appeared twice, so it didn't matter at first, but when it comes to Tan Yue, that is to say, the process of buying an account is the male protagonist → Lu Liyang → Tan Yue → waste, and then follow this process to return to the male protagonist, and then give it a thought. Then the relationship between Lu Liyang and Tan Yue should be described, whether it is because of a good relationship, or because of a transaction, etc. It is impossible for a single circle (especially a wealthy circle) to implement it with just one sentence. Because of this, the relationship between Lu Liyang and the male protagonist should also be made clear to what extent the relationship is good. At the same time, this also raises a question. The male protagonist should be different from the people in these circles. He should not belong to the wealthy circles, have his own industry, etc.
3. The relationship between the doting sister and the male protagonist is not clear. Sister Chong Ai here has helped a lot. Without a certain understanding, it would be impossible to achieve this kind of cooperation, raise the price to the final p price, etc. The male protagonist here has put in a lot of effort, because the male protagonist does not have his own industry, so he should not be in the same circle as Chong Ai, Tan Yue, and Lu Liyang.
4. The male protagonist has not received professional training before and relies on facial recognition to get into the A-circle. This is too far-fetched. It's just a boy of eighteen or nineteen. So many professional DJs have failed to do it, but he did it. . This. . A bit exaggerated. .
It feels like it's only been a year since the male and female protagonists truly opened their hearts and loved each other, but the female protagonist has been asked to wait for five years. . Um. . I can't think about it carefully, it feels like every detail is leaking.
I hope the next work will be better.
I have read the entire article and the plot direction is pretty good. The funny, sweet, uncomfortable and helpless scenes in the middle also attracted me to continue watching. Overall, the writing is great~! I hope the details can be greatly improved. Here are a few detailed questions: 1. Why are the male and female protagonists rich? The heroine's home was demolished? But why was the original house in the name of the heroine, and how did the money end up in her account? During the demolition process, three to five years was actually considered fast, and the demolition process was also full of twists and turns. If the parents knew that they could completely control it, it doesn't make sense here. The same goes for the male protagonist. In the end, I have no idea why the male protagonist is rich and can spend money in the game. He is just a sophomore and can also raise a single Lin Fei. It is not stated clearly and the reader can only rely on the reader's imagination to figure out whether there is compensation or inheritance after the death of his parents. 2. The relationship between the male protagonist and the Marriott Lu family was not clearly stated in the end. It was originally written about friends, and it only appeared twice, so it didn't matter at first, but when it comes to Tan Yue, that is to say, the process of buying an account is the male protagonist → Lu Liyang → Tan Yue → waste, and then follow this process to return to the male protagonist, and then give it a thought. Then the relationship between Lu Liyang and Tan Yue should be described, whether it is because of a good relationship, or because of a transaction, etc. It is impossible for a single circle (especially a wealthy circle) to implement it with just one sentence. Because of this, the relationship between Lu Liyang and the male protagonist should also be made clear to what extent the relationship is good. At the same time, this also raises a question. The male protagonist should be different from the people in these circles. He should not belong to the wealthy circles, have his own industry, etc. 3. The relationship between the doting sister and the male protagonist is not clear. Sister Chong Ai here has helped a lot. Without a certain understanding, it would be impossible to achieve this kind of cooperation, raise the price to the final p price, etc. The male protagonist here has put in a lot of effort, because the male protagonist does not have his own industry, so he should not be in the same circle as Chong Ai, Tan Yue, and Lu Liyang. 4. The male protagonist has not received professional training before and relies on facial recognition to get into the A-circle. This is too far-fetched. It's just a boy of eighteen or nineteen. So many professional DJs have failed to do it, but he did it. . This. . A bit exaggerated. . It feels like it's only been a year since the male and female protagonists truly opened their hearts and loved each other, but the female protagonist has been asked to wait for five years. . Um. . I can't think about it carefully, it feels like every detail is leaking. I hope the next work will be better.