Saving a Whale

It's really beautiful, I read it in one sitting. It's like entering a wonderful world, the same as when I watched Spirited Away when I was a kid. It's weird, interesting and vivid. The world view setting is also very large. For the first time, I saw a world full of monsters and no humans. I really like the cunningness of the little cub and the stability and orderliness of the emperor. The story is so wonderful that I don't want to get out of it. The only pity is that it is a bit unpopular. The writing is great and not many people read it. I want more people to see this good story. ——Zhong Xiaoyu The longest comment this post has ever received!

My wife is really pretty! I really like this wonderful world you built. It feels like such a world really exists in an unknown place. However, I personally feel that this article has some shortcomings. I feel that the details of some places can be adjusted. For example, the emotional line between Xie Heweng and Zhenjun is insufficient, the love is rushed, and the love process is less. After Zhenjun regains his memory, they become lovers inexplicably. (I still wonder if I missed some parts). After I regained my memory, I felt that it would be better to detail the mood fluctuations, interactions, and process of being together between the two, as well as add a little bit of daily love. When it comes to the plot, I feel that some plots are not appropriate to omit, resulting in insufficient emotional impact. For example, in the later stage, the part where Xie Heweng and Zhenjun, and the pottery figurines are killed by the gods, I think it can be written in detail to strengthen the emotional bond between Xie Heweng and Zhenjun. Otherwise, after reading it, I feel that the love line of this article is not enough. The wife's world view is very well constructed, and the plot design is good, but the sense of bonding is not enough. The above is purely my personal opinion. I hope I didn't offend my wife. I really like this article and wish my wife better and better!

I use my more than ten years of experience in reading literature in Jinjiang to guarantee that this novel is definitely a masterpiece. Although the ending is a bit rushed, the flaws are not concealed. This novel has a compact plot, smooth plot, and rich imagination that can be made into a movie. To be honest, I was surprised by the number of collections. It was really too small and this article was indeed buried. Let me talk about the possible reasons. The biggest reason is of course that the author has not signed a contract. Without a contract, there is basically no traffic and he can only rely on readers' recommendations. However, the title of the author's novel is the title of a traditional book, including the beginning. It is actually the beginning of a movie, not the beginning of an online novel. It is inevitable that readers will not adapt to it. And those novels that were not signed in Jinjiang but became popular were probably signed on other platforms. For example, Misanthropy was actually put on WeChat for reading at the same time. In short, if the author hopes that the novel will be seen by more people, he still needs to recommend it on the platform. It is unreliable to rely entirely on readers to discover it on their own. I actually only saw this book by chance when I saw it recommended by Xiaohongshu. I couldn't help but give the author money. It's a pity that such a good novel has not been signed.

Very nice! I just felt that it was a pity later on. It was like reading a synopsis. The plot was very fast. The part where Ho Weng rescued Lian Bai was the best. Even the villain had a lot of personality.

It's a pity that I only wrote more than 300,000 yuan. I think it could have been more than 500,000 yuan. Is there a web in Da Da?

It's a rare good article to come across recently, and I highly praise it!

From the annual recommendation of Tieba, the world view is grand and magnificent, and I am still satisfied with reading it. I feel that it is a long novel with three to five hundred chapters. Keep up the good work, author, and stay tuned!

Oh my god, 500,000, madam, you deleted more than 100,000 words!!! Come back soon ah ah ah

Very, very good, as mentioned at the top, this is a weird, fantastic, rich and real world. However, the ending of the plot is indeed a bit rushed. The two protagonists did not have enough time to grow up (of course I believe that the teacher has the writing ability to write it!), And the emotional line also needs to be developed. However, I am lucky to see such a novel in Jinjiang that observes the world in detail and has bold and fantastic imagination! Thank you teacher for bringing this book to the world!

No wonder everything was in a hurry later on