My Junior Disciple Has Something Wrong with His Brain

After looking at the author's other writing scores, it doesn't seem like he can't write well. Why is it like this... It doesn't matter if it deviates from the copy. As long as you tell a story well, most of the time people don't really care about the copy and just treat it as a joke. But this article is no longer as simple as deviating from the text, there are too many problems. 1. The combat power collapsed. I wrote a lot of details about the initial growth of the protagonist group in the previous chapter. I finally wrote that just after leaving the novice village, I directly used time magic to reach full level and directly killed the villain; 2. The logic is broken. As mentioned earlier, the male protagonist negotiates with the way of heaven and becomes the villain. However, when he comes back, there is no explanation at all and he is directly HE. Except for the red moon in the sky, there is no villain at all. Good and evil are balanced inexplicably; 3. The scenes are unbalanced. It was originally a micro-group portrait drama. The writing was based on the senior sister, and the literary name was based on the junior brother. There were also many roles for the junior brothers and sisters in the early stage. As a result, the male protagonist almost became a missing person in the second half, and the junior brothers and sisters became passers-by. It was as if the master and the ancestors had never existed, and no one's story was clearly explained; 4. The relationship develops abruptly in the later period. The male and female protagonists were obviously well-written in their previous fights. They have been together for so many years without breaking the window, as if they have not awakened. In the later period, the female protagonist has lost her memory for several years and has nothing to do with the male protagonist. I know there are extras, but extras are to supplement the details after the end of a story, rather than patching up a story that was cut in half and full of errors and omissions. I like Fuguang and Xiaozhu, and I have glimpsed a corner of this huge worldview in the first half. Unfortunately, halfway through unrolling the scroll of mountains and rivers, someone used a muddy mop to draw an

Ah? To be honest, I waited until the plot reached the point where I worshiped Kunlun, thinking that this would be the right track, and I would finally become a junior brother and junior sister. What happened? Kunlun is just a tool for you to play, right? Copywriting is just a tool you use to fool your readers, right? I was attracted by the copywriter, the sassy senior sister, who went down the mountain to kill love. What is this that you wrote? I came here from the sword repair book and collected almost all your unpublished articles. Are you really disappointed? Do you not need an outline when writing articles?

The title, copy and main text are all separated... The most sick person is Zhou Changying. Fuguang and Xiao Zhu have never regarded each other as brothers and sisters. The words and deeds of the protagonist in the copy are not consistent with the main text... If you continue to write, you can slowly round it out. How can it make sense to end like this...

You changed your name again, emmm, you didn't change your name because you were worried that your previous unfinished books would have a bad impression on readers, right?

You are in the annual report^ ^Now that I think about it, you really changed your pen name to the right one. You are a good umbrella and I am such a bitch. I deserve it that I followed you for two articles in a row.

Ah? I'm going to be created. The writing was clearly excellent before, and it can be said to be top-notch among the n works I have read. Why is this happening? I hope there is an explanation.

I don't want to follow the serialization anymore… I won't read any more Amway novels in the serialization period.

I was thinking why it wasn't updated, and when I checked in, I found out, oh, I forgot it was finished... I was so angry. I have read other articles you wrote, and it's not like you can't write well. Now take a look at what you wrote in this one. I was so happy at the beginning but now I am so hurt. I even recommended this book to netizens, and now I want to apologize. The comment that "an immortal descended to earth and landed on his face" is really appropriate. The introduction didn't match the description. I thought the content would be interesting. When I said the progress was fast, I was still thinking about returning to the Kunlun Mountain dungeon quickly. Oh, it turns out it's finished. Can't laugh

I threw this article directly into the derivative column. Is it difficult to give an explanation?

This book is really like an immortal descending to earth and landing on his face. Not to mention what is written in the copy. At least I can write another two hundred chapters from the beginning. It ends like this, with the feeling that nothing is written in the outline. I have read more than one book, and the writing is really good! I also really like the author's heroines who are all great! But I really feel like I need to sort out the outline and fill it in a bit.