Is It Wrong to Slack Off in a Team Built on Passion and Bonds?

Hahahahahaha Haru-chan turned into a ghost and loves to fish even more haha if Xian Wumei: Why is this subordinate so useless? It's such a waste of my blood. Main story line protagonist: Haru-chan has always been an excellent Demon Slayer swordsman. Text line Wumei: Ahhhhh this person! This person! He is scarier than Yuanyi. She killed me. It's so scary! If line protagonist: I feel it! In my generation, Ariharu and the children of the Demon Slayer Squad will definitely annihilate the evil spirits!

Hahahahaha, it's a shame that I have no time and elegance to look at the life of every ghost, otherwise: this turtle is so weak that he can actually walk in the sun! The vampire technique obviously doesn't look very useful. Can I live in the sun after eating her? Or is it that she ate the blue Hibiscus flower behind my back? ! Damn it! Even though he has become a ghost, the essence of fishing cannot be lost! I'm really curious about what Haru-chan's Vampire Technique is! Emm, how did Qingjiang become a ghost? I kind of want to see her interaction with Momotou. QwQ After all, Momotou: Qingjiang and I are close friends, haha.

"Is it wrong to fish in a team of unfettered demons?" Hahahahahahaha

Cyan Higanhua: As long as there are no miserable students, they won't be able to find me hahahaha Technology changes everything! Isn't that ore also able to kill ghosts by absorbing sunlight? It's very reasonable, very reasonable! In this case, modern sunscreens should also be useful in preventing the sun's rays? Midouzi and the others are going to separate.

It's over. I know the author probably doesn't want to read it. But I still want to say that the pace of writing before chapter 60 or 70 was pretty good. But by the time I hit six, something was wrong. First of all, the Demon Slayer Corps has spent hundreds of years killing ghosts. It has been more than 100 years since the last time I killed the string. And in this article, the ghost is really stupid enough to follow the protagonist's ideas. And it really burned directly when the sun shined a little on a mirror. In this case, the ghost doesn't even have any power to move. It doesn't mean that it can't kill ghosts. But if you use just a few lines in one chapter and the ghost dies, doesn't it feel too fast? When you realize that the mirror may hurt you. This ghost actually admits being burned without doing anything? If you say that this logic makes sense, or that it is a private design, then that's fine. But other than that, the rhythm is not good. The rhythm of writing, when you are fighting, at least you have to go back and forth. In this way, when you win in the end, you will feel more involved and excited. This is the cool point of this article. Serious dramas also need to be cool, after all, you are not a popular science writer. From the beginning to the end, the ghost has been subduing his wits. In the end, the ghost king was such a coward and went to the meeting alone? Not to mention that he actually did what the protagonist expected throughout the whole process, and it ended in a few sentences within a few chapters. The final explanation was that there was no need to give the Ghost King too high a level. Not you. . The Ghost King did die very easily, but he also made everyone in the Demon Slayer Squad look like clowns. And some of the words in the previous article can be seen as showing the perspective of modern people looking down on the era of demon slayer. To be honest, those who read the fanfic all like the original work, and we have accepted the limitations of that era. And the charm of demon slayer lies in the charm of human nature. . So I can't understand why it is written like this? I like relief articles. But at the very least, you must conform to the logic of Demon Slayer. All in all, the first few chapters of this article performed well. I finally understand why in the first battle, you were very confident that you wrote well this time. Looking back, it turned out that you wrote well that time. Later the rhythm became more and more strange. Both the excitement of writing and the war aspect need to be grasped. This does not mean that killing the enemy is the best result. Because seconds mean nothing to watch.

When you can use illusion to deceive everything in the world, this illusion is reality

Wu Tuo died very uncharacteristically, and he didn't make any idiotic remarks that were specious. That's great! Looking forward to the extra episode ovo

Big brother won't die 💪 Does Haru-chan know about the existence of Lianxue? After all, if you love eating melon, you should be able to take a bite like this.

I am so handsome by Haru-chan again. When I say "It's over", I will inexplicably think of Boss Tan who died because of his incompetence. Haru-chan is so handsome!

No procrastination! Wumei is still too arrogant, but his psychology is really good haha Fugui Yuyu is still as upright as ever hahaha