Your Face Is Like the Moon and Should Be as Before

The completion of this book was all thanks to Xue Luo's love brain. I personally felt that Yurao's character design in the early stage was pretty good, but in the later stages it became increasingly difficult to understand. It felt like the character design was neither good nor bad. I have to thank Xue Luo's love brain (｀?ω??)

After reading it, many details of the story that were unfolded before were not explained clearly, which is a bit unsatisfactory. The punishment that the bad guys should receive in the martial arts novel is also unclear here. The scenery is well written. Jiang Lirao is not worthy of Xue Zhirou, she is coy. Zhirou's love brain is the key to the continuation of this relationship. Relying on Zhirou's love, she can control her infinitely and defend Xiao Xue Ming's injustice.

Why is Jiang so harsh on Xue, but he is not cruel at all to the bad guys who bully her and doesn't want to take revenge?

They finally got married. Xiaojiang's parents died young and there was no one around her who loved her wholeheartedly. Until she met Xue Luo, Xue Luo would understand her pampering, tolerate her bad temper, and protect her all her life.

The writing is really good, but there are still a few shortcomings. If Xiao Jiang can have a fuller growth curve of his own, and the two people love each other more clearly, then I will refresh the copy hard and write another hundred chapters! ! In that case, I would like to call this article a work comparable to The Witch's Clothes

The beginning is amazing, but the middle part is a bit weak, and then it picks up a bit in the later part. Overall, it's very good. Lily's martial arts novels are so rare. Lirao's character was particularly distinctive in the early stages, but it's a pity that it didn't last until the end. The knife thought there would be a big event later, but it ended hastily. The writing style is very good, especially the description of the scenery. It is very picturesque and has a great atmosphere. I will continue to pay attention to the author's next article, hoping it will get better and better.

But it's settled, and the old man still needs to step in, hahahaha, so that the two of them can feel at ease [Rainbow Fart]

It ended like this? The early stages of this book are really good, the writing is very good, and the characters of Xiao Jiang and Xiao Xue are also very interesting, not perfect but attractive. As a result, in the later stage, it felt like the two of them were still standing still. They were still quarreling before they had finished working together, and they were both insisting on their own opinions. It was really tiring. Moreover, those who have harmed Xiao Jiang have not been punished at all. I really don't understand.

[Rainbow Fart][Rainbow Fart][Rainbow Fart] When will those old men die? I am speechless.

Why is this Valley Master not dead yet?

I really can't stand it anymore, it makes me feel aggrieved

Haha, it made me furious

Not having the ability to protect yourself is really a disadvantage [holding your chin]

Baby Lirao is not afraid when touched

Write another paragraph, I can do anything QAQ

Wait, I don't understand. What's wrong with Xiao An's neck? ([Spreads hands]

So many updates already

Baby, your wife is missing

Haha, I guess it was my uncle who tapped the acupuncture point.

Ah, ah, ah, I feel so frustrated, kill, kill, kill

Why are you exposing yourself so much? [Afraid]

It's not easy to eat Zhirou once.

I love it so much. The author is looking forward to your next book.

Does it look like the end?

It's over! ! ! Congratulations! ! !

Fuck you, keep writing. I want to read another 50-yuan one.

Are there many extras that can be written?

If I don't write a side story, it's hard to solve the itch in my heart [gritting my teeth]

It ended so quickly, sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,

I really want to watch the extra qvq