5 Stars. I am so happy to read this book of iMartial Arts. The completion level is very high.
The author is very down-to-earth and writes a step-by-step, full and compact story. The plot is very exciting, and many of the plots made me happy.
The emotional line pokes me. I just like this model of getting along with each other and supporting each other and working together, and I like this author who is a mother who is so good at everything!
5 Points. The author is so good at writing.
The writing style is very good, the language is tactful and appropriate, and the profound parts closely follow the plot, so there is no sense of preaching. The female group portraits are very touching, and the characters completely poked me (no one doesn't like the sincere and lovely Dusi people. The two heroines in the author's works love each other deeply and are also highly self-possessed). The secret love in the early stage is very well written, and the plots of the heroines' separation and reunion several times are also deeply rooted in the hearts of the people.
The ending was much more satisfying than I expected, and I really liked the hole it left.
4.5 Points. In a nutshell: There is no doubt that the upward attack in Qingleng Year is a fairy tale.
From the perspective of the subject and the subject, Mo Shuqing was not written as a domineering and powerful sister or an iceberg with a strong sense of humanity. Instead, all the advantages were integrated into what I wanted to see: cold, indifferent, restrained and polite, with a little bit of cold humor that added to the beauty. Just piling up adjectives can't describe the charm underneath the skin, so I would like to say that the author's writing style is very good, and the expressions and interactions of many characters are very touching. What makes me dissatisfied is that the author serves too many meat dishes (as far as I know, this is the first book where the author drives less)
4.5 Points. The author's writing is very good. I think the darkness in Ye Chongjing's character, the character flaws of the Ye family children, and the throbbing moments of the heroines' emotional lines are particularly well written. Some of the fragments (Snow Movement, Sad Octopus, and Heartfelt Confession) I can remember for a lifetime. Authors who can write words that are imprinted on my heart, and authors who have the ability to play with words and capture my heart, are great authors.
I like the two female protagonists very much. Neither one has the stereotypical male shortcomings. Xiaoyun is really super cute! Many of the words describing the heroine's behavior, demeanor, and interactions made my heart beat fast. It's not easy not to be affected by any of the protagonist's actions throughout the whole process! After all, I am a mean and strict reader, and the protagonist will get angry if I disagree with him.
4.5 Points. The early stage is a bit like an outline, and the writing tone is too casual, but it gets better in the middle and later stages.
I really like the plot of being reborn to make up for regrets, and the ups and downs are just right. However, I am quite disgusted by the plot of the two having a grudge during the misunderstanding. When I saw that part, I thought that the 0.5 Points must be deducted.
The character design is of course a fairy tale: the cold immortal x the tenacious little white flower. The motivations of the characters are all clearly written. Except for the paragraph "The senior sister didn't want to drag down the junior sister after her plan to kill senior brother Jiang Linchuan failed, so she deliberately said hurtful words to push her away" which is too old-fashioned and cliché, everything else is reasonable and surprising.
5 Points. It's so good. I can write a sentence out of thousands of words. My wife is very good at writing. The plot is exciting, all the foreshadowings have been taken back, and the heroines are also very cute... After reading it, you will feel that the author has handled all aspects very well, the writing style will never be frivolous, and the dialogues between the characters are many thought-provoking, but they are not too heavy to give you a stomachache. Btw As far as stereotype labels are concerned, the characters of abstinent sister x soft girl are enough to attract me.
5 Points. When I opened it four years ago, I didn't expect that the world view would be so huge. I believe the author made a decision before taking action, thinking before writing, and thus came up with such a work with a rich setting and exciting plot.
Themes of love rivals becoming lovers and rebirth and fate are commonplace, but novels that highlight the struggle and hesitation of characters' emotional changes and the uncertainty of the protagonist finding another way after rebirth are very rare. Even rebirth is like a blind man trying to grasp an elephant; even two people who are attracted to each other cannot come together so easily. The author's willingness to write these details gives the characters soul and gives the readers a unique reading experience, which shows his sincerity.
However, there are some flaws in the development of the love line in my mind, because the change in Xiaohong's mentality comes too late, but too sudden. The two are not contradictory but cause and effect each other. She seemed too unenlightened in the front, so that there was not enough opportunity for her instant enlightenment, and there was no sense of gradual progress; her enlightenment seemed to be an epiphany, which was too light, so the avoidance and hesitation in the previous article were redundant and heavy. As one reader in the comment area said, "It would be great if a brave person like Xiaohong could recognize her emotions earlier."
But no matter what, the flaws are not hidden. Compared with many novels I have read, the emotional line of this book is already fully buried.
Another thing to praise is Xiaoliu's character design. Halfway through reading this novel, I was obsessed with Xiaoliu and thought about it day and night during the author's hiatus. She has a great heart yet still has a small tenderness. She has the unearthly temperament of a fairy in the sky and the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of a mortal here. She is so vivid and attractive. To this day, I still feel that Xiaohong is not worthy of Xiaoliu (after reading it, I was surprised to realize that this pairing is a bit like cat and dog literature), but as long as Xiaoliu is happy, mom fans only want her to be happy (.
I am particularly satisfied with the design of the heroine, one is gentle and strong, and the other is smart and cute.
I really liked it when I read it back then, but if I reread it now, I might think it has too many men. So 4 points.
5 Points. I gritted my teeth with pleasure. The two protagonists confirmed their relationship very early, but what is rare is that they have been in a state of getting along since then. In a love relationship, the words they speak are still the same as the "original them": Lirao always jumps when a sore spot is poked and talks angrily, but because she cherishes her lover, she will quickly fall into introspection; Zhirou's anger seems heavy and indifferent, but it is this anger that carries a lot of tenderness. Neither of them has a good temper, but they are trying hard to get closer to each other. The next moment they are impulsive, they feel pity, and the next moment they get angry, they feel guilty. Isn't that how people are! When a person enters a new relationship, it is not like passing through a watershed that can erase all the scars in the heart at once, but repeatedly looking directly at the ruins and rebuilding faith, having someone accompany you every time you lick your wounds, and slowly and gently being redeemed.
So [solemnly], thank you very much. It's really good. The plot is a little weaker, and the tribulations in the last few chapters are a bit deliberate. The disputes between the Cangshan sect are a little loud and heavy, but the characters are very special and vivid. I like it very much.
The experience that year was 5 points. The writing style is very comfortable and the characters are very lovable. I like Zhen Ruoyi very much. Short but concise, it is my favorite harem novel so far.
5 Points! I really, really like the style and detailed conception of this article, and the characters are also very close to my liking. Confess to the Twelve Princesses and Xiao Yi. Although the ending is quite laughable, it is still explained clearly.
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