Blade in Arms

I particularly like Jun Ji. I once got to know Awen because I was amazed by Jun Ji. Now I have come to Huairen. After walking all the way, I finally reached the ending of the story. While this feeling is still there, I want to seriously write a long review. Compared with Jun Ji, I have been reading this article intermittently because it is too painful. From the beginning, I can see the endings of several pairs of CPs, and I can more or less see the direction of the plot development. I feel that Awen really likes and is good at writing about ancient times. I think the biggest feature and difference of this article is that it really revolves around the search for the "Secret of Immortality" and the No Suspicion Sword. It really has been writing about Jianghu. It really sets up a lot of suspense. I didn't expect to create so many characters with distinctive and different personalities. Many people are really both good and evil, and some were originally bad guys from a cult, but after seeing the final little setting, I suddenly felt that everyone was cute. Many people are clearly decent characters, but they also have selfish motives. Some people are clearly villains, but they also have pitiable qualities that make people cry. Xiao Qi is also different from what I thought. When I read it, I didn't expect the reason why he wanted to die before, nor did I expect that the two people's personalities are so contrasting. It's really surprising to see what I thought was a mysterious feud turn out to be the unexpected tragedy of tetanus. It may seem a bit abrupt, but it's really a novel little idea that is hard to think of. There are also some purely personal thoughts. I feel that the shortcomings are that there are too many characters and plots that make the beginning and ending a bit abrupt. For example, the story of Cheng Nian's family is very long at the beginning but rarely appears later. It just fluctuates repeatedly and then suddenly makes up its mind to leave. There are also some hints that I don't fully understand, such as Xiao Lingyu's last paragraph (maybe I am too stupid and I don't understand some of the plot...) And for some reason I always feel that the death of some people and the ending are a bit rushed... But the foreshadowing before and after is really good, and many of the secondary CPs are also very good, such as Qin Zheng and his wife and Gu's master and apprentice, especially Shen Yin, the CP pair are really wonderful, their appearance is unexpected, and the curtain call is embarrassing. If there is a chance, I hope to see the happy life of these two poor people in the if line. Finally, I always feel that my words are not expressive and I don't know how to express my inner thoughts. I hope you will forgive me if I make mistakes. Thank you Awen for taking three years to create this article. It is really not easy to serialize a long article, especially for such a long time span. It is difficult to maintain the idea and mood of writing. But Awen has been silently persisting, trying new things, and working hard to make progress. We can all see this! I also look forward to Awen producing more works in the future. I will always look forward to this ancient granary that I have been waiting for. I hope that the baby who sees the last page in reality and the baby in the book can be happy. Finished spreading flowers! Love you Awen❤️

I have read it several times, and this Wanping article is still the most touching [crying] [crying]

Awen is so good at writing, the writing is so flavorful, and the completeness and coordination are handled very well. Also, Awen does not write many articles, but all of them have the foundation of mature online writing, which is amazing. In fact, I have never quite understood the concept of whether the rhythm is good or not, but here, I completely feel it. The main plot of "The Blade" is very clear, and the mixed subplots and copies are just right, so you won't feel tired at all. Furthermore, the content is detailed and relaxed, and so much can be written in just one hundred chapters. This is not only a concise summary of the plot, the highlights are detailed, and the cutscenes are omitted, but also Awen is very good at leaving blanks. Many things are left unsaid, but people feel more subjectively. The rhythm is endless, it is too strong. We should also praise Awen's fighting, it's so exciting. It's not the kind of action scenes that just slash and kill with a few strokes, but a real, exciting and interesting fight. She won't write about situations where one side is overwhelming the other. Whether it's about equal or disparity in strength, you can always see that the stronger one will make mistakes, the lower strength one will also have highlights, and the even strength ones will go back and forth, and the writing style is really very martial arts style, so refreshing. Martial arts is actually quite suitable for group portraits. The world is chaotic and there are two factions of good and evil. In the final analysis, it is just selfish desires. This is true. Therefore, in Awen's writing, you can hate a character very much, but as the plot gradually unfolds, you will feel pity and sympathy. The complexity of emotions and the contradiction between pursuit and reality are vividly depicted. Moreover, Awen is really good at leaving blank spaces. The blank spaces are very flavorful and strong in writing. You can completely feel the connotations of compulsion, regret, etc. Buried under the rivers and lakes. These are never black and white, but they are infinitely emotional and thought-provoking. The emotional scenes are also very good, and I'm really obsessed with this type of CP recently. Here, you can watch the whole drama, the most emotionally stable two people falling in love, whatever misunderstandings are flying across the rivers and lakes, whatever grudges are deep-rooted, whatever regrets are too late, whatever fate is gone, all of them are taken off by me. We 77 Libao focuses on a healthy love, which starts from the ordinary details in daily life and makes the heart flutter, and finally embraces each other's wounds and shortcomings, and moves towards the uncertain future together. Moreover, between the two of them, one is a max-level boss who has been clearing dungeons for ten years alone in the world, and the other is a boss who is in seclusion and has reached the maximum level of force. Does no one really want to see two highly intelligent and emotionally stable bosses falling in love? ? !

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I like the protagonist's ease and frankness

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