The Sword Crosses the Green Mountain and We Meet Again

The author's advance receipt is in the background, let us invite them out: Easy Healing Article: "Don't worry, I have my own rhythm" "I will quietly watch you act" Nian Xiangxing Cyberpunk group portrait article: "Tower of the Sublime" takes on the script of the affectionate villain The Flower of the High Mountain

I felt a bit dull after reading it, and originally wanted to give it up, but after enduring it, I couldn't help but write some comments (just some personal thoughts, I would like to put my armor first to show my sincerity. After reading the whole article, I feel that the logic is reasonable, but there are some weird things. What I want to ask is, since Su Miaoyuan and Su Huanan are biological sisters and belong to Penglai Island, wouldn't Miaoyuan pass the news to Huanan, who has been looking for Xiaoqiu for many years? Secondly, it is very strange that when Su Ling rescued Uncle Mu, where did Uncle Mu's symptoms come from? Did this strange disease appear out of thin air in a small village? There is also Ding Lingquan. This person teamed up with Li Muge to kill with such vicious motives. In the end, he did not eliminate the root cause and insisted on keeping Xiao Qiu and a sword. Moreover, I barely agree with the theory that it was a coincidence, but why did she keep Li Yanqing in the end and become a big problem? This person's portrayal gave me the impression that he was very strange, weird and contradictory. Moreover, the young owner of the village knew the truth, so why did he hide it from Xiaoqiu in the middle and even at the end? It was obvious that they already had a mutual understanding and had a common enemy, but the logic that everything seemed to be serving the plot made people feel so deliberate and artificially arranged. Including the third volume of Qiu Yi's exchange of feelings, the direct cause turned out to be an unknown person's reckless confession that caused a sea of jealousy. The young village owner and the unknown person were so different that they had the nerve to hint many times, and there was a buff like love at first sight in between. Logically everything makes sense, but when I read it, I felt like: Ah! The emotional scene encountered a bottleneck, so a tool was needed to push it. It was so deliberate that it felt uncomfortable and ingenious, like a painting with predetermined lines just waiting for someone to fill in the colors. I like the protagonist group very much. I hope the author and teacher can make the story more vivid in the next book hehe. I think it's a good book, and because it's so good, I hope it's even better, so I couldn't help but finally review it! It's all just my personal thoughts... It is indeed very difficult to perfectly integrate the branch plot with the main plot.

This is a heartfelt martial arts novel. The best thing is that the author is always in sync with the readers. The unit drama format guides the readers to experience one "script killing" after another. Whether it's martial arts, machinations, or suspense, the worst thing I'm afraid of is that the author himself is enjoying the grudges, leaving the readers confused. Although it is a relatively common revenge story, each unit is very immersive, and there are some fresh and bold ideas that make the whole novel unconventional. Renyuan Village is particularly well written. The doctor who seems to have nothing to do with the main plot connects the whole line of solving the case. The reason why the kind-hearted doctor was killed was not only the tradition of favoring boys over girls in the backward village, but also the ignorance of the villagers who helped the oppressor, and the patriarch's privileges above the law under the clan system. Of course, there was inevitably a trouble-making second generation who was greedy for life and feared death, and relied on his privileges to cry out to catch thieves. The world of martial arts seems far away from modern society, but it is clear that these phenomena have not disappeared today. The mechanism imagination of Baiyingmen is also very unique, with the ups and downs of breaking through levels and the ingenious conception of magical instruments. On the one hand, I feel that it should be impossible in ancient society, but on the other hand, I feel that I have to respect the wisdom of our ancestors. The only flaw is that the reason for the apprentice to betray and massacre the entire sect is a bit thin. It would be better if this was connected with the main plot. Looking at the whole story, it seems that it just creates a reason for the fifth-ranked person in the martial arts competition to join the top four team. The climax of the revenge drama comes from the discovery that the enemy is actually an elder who has been treated tenderly since childhood. The author manages this background of grudges and hatred very well. The escape and ambivalence of the protagonist are also human nature. Often the least defensive people have the weapons that are easiest to betray, but those who one day can kill with familiarity will eventually be killed by familiarity!

One person's evil thoughts can destroy so many people, hey

Dad, do you still remember the competition between Xu Yinzhi and Alin?

The writing is really good. I seldom read martial arts themes, so I tried to read it. I was gradually attracted by the author's writing step by step. I really like the interaction between the protagonists, and the plot is also very attractive. Otherwise, I would not be able to watch it. The characters are very rich and three-dimensional, and each has its own characteristics. I am a little uncomfortable with Qiu's mother and Lin, but I also know that there will always be a mixture of sadness and joy. I rarely write reviews after reading novels for so many years, but the author you write is really good. I look forward to your next book. It would be better if there were immortal heroes in the future

The deputy cp is too sweet, too sweet

I've recently become obsessed with radio dramas. It would be great if this book could be made into a radio drama!

Dad, do you still remember the competition between Xu Yinzhi and Alin?

I've finished watching it, it's a good read, Lin Ximu is really upset, our five-person group is soooooo

But in the end, the concentric poison of Han Zheng was not solved [Cracked]

Must give a thumbs up. I have read hundreds of articles, and this one really touched my heart.

The writing is very good, and the martial arts writing is also good!

Very delicate! ! Looking forward to the author's new articles! ! !

Looks good, the ending is full of flowers

Both of you, master and disciple, have a special liking for the four words "getting what you want" [dog head]

Finished spreading flowers! So beautiful! ! ! ! !

It's the end of the story, it would be better if other supporting characters also have their own story lines.

I have finished reading it. Overall, the flaws are not hidden, and the plot is smooth. Although there are some logical inconsistencies in the middle, I can continue reading. The emotional transition between the middle and later stages of the protagonist is not very good, but the secondary CP is smoother. I think the best characters in the whole story are Lin Zimu and Qiu Zhen.

Well written! I really like Teacher Xiaofeng's articles! It warms my heart to see it! Looking forward to the new article~Come soon in August~

Congratulations on the ending, may the lovers get married and stay together for a lifetime.

Looking forward to Teacher Xiaofeng's new article! !

When will the author write a story about Su Linjing and his junior sister?

Did I not look carefully? Who is Qiu Wangshu's father?

Looking forward to it, will both of them wear wedding dresses?