The Age of Nobility

The previous description seems to say that the heroine Yunwen Yunwu is not the best in Egypt in all aspects, but she can be said to be the top 2 or 3. And wasn't the previous heroine's previous life very awesome? How could her sense of crisis and ability to break situations be so different just because she was reincarnated? It seems that others can harm her as long as they want to, and they fall victim to her again and again?

Regarding the passage about the sacrifice being replaced by Polyjuice Potion, the Egyptian priests were all hairless. . . Are you using nose hair? . I find this joke very embarrassing. .

Couldn't that little girl also wear it? ? ? ?

What Jan said was really good. To be honest, your story could have been written better. The subject matter is very novel! The beginning was also very interesting… But then! Maybe it's because you're at work, so you don't care! But I'm so sad. I really like reading Egyptian texts! But I don't like the kind of heroine who gets into trouble. I like to see strong and calm ones! But what you wrote at the end... Makes me sad! I don't know if you haven't seen my comment yet! But I still want to say, if you write articles in the future! Please don't finish it because you are rushing to finish the article, okay? I remember there was a sentence about fine grinding or something, but I can't remember it! But good books don't have to wait! I always keep good books there! Many people like diving, but when they see a good book, they still save it! Please believe me, many of my friends are like this!

The front is great, but the back is terrible! Horus wrote that he was a responsible person in the past, but later he decided to only have children with Malfoy, which was really irresponsible! Love is very important, but for a family that has been passed down for thousands of years, is the heir more important? And wizards still value bloodline so much! He felt that he could use magic to change the child's bloodline, but in fact, when ordinary people talked about it, who the child's father was would still have a great impact on the child. The royal family has a bloodline that has been passed down for thousands of years and does not accept foreign bloodlines. Are the wizards in the past all fools and they don't know how to use bloodline separation? This is not a newly invented magic. The heroine written by the author should be a very responsible person who values ​​her mother very much. As a result, he promised his mother that he would be very good, saying that he would definitely have a child with orthodox blood as the heir from the royal cousin, but then he immediately changed his mind, which was really hasty. To be honest, it is not strange for him to fall in love with Malfoy, and it is not strange for him to have a child, but I think these should be things after he has a royal heir with orthodox blood. He had sex with Malfoy out of nowhere, and then suddenly decided to have a child for him. And asking that child to be his heir is really irresponsible. Hasn't he thought about the consequences of magic failure at all? If the blood separation technique fails, if he turns into Seth and dies in the end. What about his mother? The protagonist seemed silly when doing things later on, and I was reminded of the kind of person in a romance novel who doesn't need anything as long as he has love. According to your setting, an Egyptian woman, especially a future female pharaoh, can have many lovers besides her husband. No one said not to let him and Malfoy be together. He could always maintain a lover relationship with Malfoy after having an orthodox blood heir. This must be understandable to Malfoy, who was also born into a noble family. Even if it is written like this, even if Horus's future inheritance rights are only one child is left. I don't think readers will accept it. We are no longer little girls who don't need anything but love and can only dream. Everyone will understand this development, and my sister is more accepting of it. But the ending of your final story, author, is really terrible! Typical bad ending, really unacceptable! To be honest, I have also read a lot of HP fanfics. Your idea is very novel and the story is very attractive, but the end of the article is too hasty. The ending is a typical bad ending, which is really disappointing! ╮(╯▽╰)╭, The beginning is good, but the ending just makes the readers think they are fools! ! It's very disappointing all of a sudden…

It ended a little hastily Also, what is the background music for the author's column?

Isis is so precocious~~~and she also knows how to not look at anything inappropriate~~~-_-|||

I always felt that the ending ended in a hurry, and Isis was so pitiful. Her birth was entirely due to her mother's willfulness.

When will it be finished? Impatient readers!

Hey, long time no see. Fortunately, I have a deep memory of this article. I don't need to read it again. I can pick it up. I am very worried about Horus after reading this. I wonder if something will happen when I get along with Lucius that will lead to irreparable problems~~~>@<