Isn't It Better to Be a Beta?

In fact, I think this ending is not bad. This part of the plot can also constitute the plot. If it is too long, it may make people tired and can't stand it. However, the author did not control the rhythm well. The previous things are too detailed and too detailed, but the big plot at the end is very rough, giving people a top-heavy feeling.

After reading this big book, I don't think it's a bad one. In my mind, this is definitely a very, very good work, and it's the heroine work in my heart. I took a look at the reviews and I was surprised, very surprised, that few people praised the closely connected plot and character creation of this book. They were all looking for problems with the male protagonist and romance... Although everyone looked at us, we were looking for different points of interest to watch, and I was disappointed with the book friends. I hope everyone can open up some perspectives to read the book. I think it is very valuable to put aside the pursuit of love and seriously feel the family affection in this article. As for who the male protagonist is and what he is like, I don't think it matters. Finally, I would like to thank the author for his great devotion! This is definitely the best novel I have read at the beginning of this year. It has a good growth flow. Apart from Bai Yu, my favorite character in it is Emperor Roland. The character is very... Haha. Is it weird to say that he is lovable? But in the whole text, his emotions and inner shaping are very good. In the eyes of others, the softness of the emperor who has a surly and unstable personality when facing his relatives is very heart-warming. Therefore, I think that if you blindly pursue the love line of the heroine, it is better to look away a little and look at the family line. Whether it is the two brothers, the old Duke, Emperor Cerver... Everyone's love for Bai Yu is very touching, and I am so happy to see it. Thanks to the author for putting up such a work and allowing me to get to know them... I hope the author is in good health and everything goes well. I hope there will never be too much pressure. In my heart, this is definitely a good ending and definitely not a bad ending, absolutely! I wish you a happy life~ (Speaking of which, the author Dada really has a very strong obsession with the word "bai", hahaha. Looking at Dada's other books, the protagonist still seems to be named Bai! What a strong obsession...!)

I thought it would be updated to about 160 chapters, but the ending was too hasty. It felt like a lot of foreshadowing was not used. It gave me the feeling that the meal was gone after just two bites.

Now that I see it, I still feel that the little jellyfish is really cute [Cat Head]. Maybe it had shortcomings at first, it was too stereotyped, but the little jellyfish in the back is really more and more attractive [kiss] [kiss] [kiss] (Well, it's because I feel that I have the same nurturing happiness as the heroine [laughing and crying]) To be honest, the one at the back who I heard was the original male lead feels like he is really suitable to be a subordinate, because he has his own It would be a bit cruel if his pride allowed him to finally break free and then get entangled again because of his feelings. Little Jellyfish worked hard to be worthy of the heroine, but the heroine's baby mainly regards Little Jellyfish as a good friend, so in comparison, Little Jellyfish is more suitable, but now the CP is gone, so hey, I still love Little Jellyfish, soft and cute [Star Eyes]

The ending was too rushed. Friends who are new to this book can just read it as a non-CP book. [Laughing and crying]

After reading it, I read through the long comments and found that many people have great opinions on Commander Chu? It's confusing. In fact, I think the author's writing is quite good. It's in line with his civilian background and he seizes the opportunity to be promoted. Many people are disgusted by his design of the auction house and the confrontation on the rooftop of the palace. Some people think this is a threat and greatly offends the heroine, but I think this is a kind of temptation? And his actions are really not an offence. They can be wiped out by offering insect crystals as an apology. Maybe the author did not intend such a careful arrangement, but I feel that all the choices Commander Chu made were beneficial to him. His promotion path was extremely smooth. Is there anything better than this? Power and status are the foundation of an OMEGE from a commoner like him, and everything else is false. In short, I am very satisfied. The author's writing ideas are very good, and it feels like the IQ of all employees is online.

What a pity. I thought it was interesting to write it in such detail earlier, but I didn't expect it to end like this.

It feels like it would be a good interstellar novel if it were longer. The foreshadowing at the beginning was pretty good. It ended suddenly after the climax. I could write a lot more. Damn TT

Well, I personally think it sucks.

It was finished in a hurry... It feels like it's really not as good as writing the original emotional line. It's obvious that whether it's a small jellyfish or a small whale, it can make more exciting progress... The sexual tension of AO is also the charm of the abo setting.