*A free practice story
*[Bold, spirited demon lord seme x cool, silver-haired, beautiful bionic demigod shou]
Blurb:
Everyone says that Lou Xun, the demigod of the Immortal Alliance's Banshen Tower, was cold and ungrateful. His friends and family protected and loved him, yet he repaid their kindness by killing them all before fleeing and disappearing.
Everyone thought he had died to escape justice. They were just about to shout, "He got what he deserved!" when Lou Xun appeared at the Ascension Platform, sliced half the face off a mechanical courtesan with one sword stroke, and claimed the top prize.
Everyone: ...
Lou Xun: ? What were you saying just now?
After that, things took an increasingly strange turn.
They accused Lou Xun of betraying those who had been kind to him. He promptly hacked into the multimedia system of the Central Building in the mortal realm and put an immortal envoy's own confession on a loop.
They accused him of betraying his master and destroying his ancestors. The very next day, Lou Xun took over Mingyue Tower, the foremost technology tower in the Ninth Heaven, and asked who was qualified to be its master.
In the end, all they could do was mock Lou Xun for being single and unwanted.
To their surprise, the Demon Lord, who had been wanted by the Immortal Realm of the Ninth Heaven for two hundred years, immediately showed up to propose marriage.
Everyone: ...
They racked their brains for more insults, only to realize that, before they knew it, no one was joining in anymore.
Tens of thousands of believers bowed before Lou Xun, and the high-and-mighty gods of the Nine Heavens paved his way. He rose from being denounced by all to standing above all living things.
He became the last god of the neon age.
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Later, everyone finally realized that the deep-seated conflict between the immortal and mortal realms had become impossible to resolve.
At last, people saw that beneath the neon lights of technology were not only gods, but also bionic people seeking freedom, super artificial intelligence, and ordinary people struggling to survive.
In a topsy-turvy world, the numb and indifferent finally awakened as if from a dream. Only then did they clearly see the demigod who had once emerged from silence:
Lou Xun.
He had been a bionic person all along, with silver hair and snow-white skin, sharp as the finest sword between heaven and earth.
From the very beginning, he had cut through all the silence and cried his answer to the world.
If the world is unjust, misunderstands me, deceives me, and hates me, what should I do?
Then
Make my body the blade, and my blood the banner.
*World setting:
Demon Realm - Mortal Realm - Ninth Heaven
*Social hierarchy:
Bionic people - Mortals - Demigods - Immortals - High Gods
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Reader's guide:
1. The balance of romance and plot is 4:6.
2. One-to-one pairing, older seme, mutual devotion.
3. Cyberpunk refers to high technology and low quality of life, as well as the commodification of people and their resistance. This is just the broad backdrop of this story, and most of the cyberpunk details are things I made up.
4. This was my first book in 2022. I started writing without an outline and soon couldn't continue, so I left it untouched until now. But I've always loved this story's protagonist so much, so I picked it up again.
I'm still an inexperienced beginner, and I'm doing my best to write because I love this story and the readers who follow it. I hope you'll be patient with me. Feel free to question things, leave lots of comments, and chat with me!
5. This story has plenty of problems. I'm using it to learn how to write, so thank you again for listening to me tell my story.
Theme: The heart born of technology bears the engraved name of humanity.
"Children's phone watch" doesn't work, it's so cute. I'm going to melt. I'm imagining the love between cats and dogs. It's so cute. It makes me run around in circles 🥺
Teacher, are you just going to make one extra episode... I haven't had enough
Lou Xun: Your farm is ringing Chongfeng:? Lou Xun: You're a loser. Chongfeng: Your farm also rang. Xiao Changxuan came in randomly: That was the death of our half-immortal cow 😚
It was said in Chapter 11 that the human world does not have such high technology, so Xiao's enemies should be people from Jiuzhongtian. If Lou Xun is not dead, then his creator may still be alive. Xiao may also have the intention to find this person when investigating the spiritual bionics. This person should be a big boss. According to my previous experience in reading novels, big bosses usually appear as inconspicuous little characters in the early stages of the article. So I blindly guessed that it was the young doctor who performed surgery on Xu Yanran in Chapter 11. There must be a hidden reason why Xiao suddenly drew a line with Lou. What the hidden reason is is not yet known. Judging from Xiao's performance in this picture, the act of drawing a clear line should not have been in his original plan. There must have been some variables that made him change his plan. At present, it seems that Xiao is relatively comfortable. The only thing that has changed is his relationship with Lou, so I can speculate that the reason why he suddenly drew a line is because of Lou. I guess there are three reasons. One is that he regrets it and doesn't want Lou to get involved, and what will happen next is very dangerous; the other is that he finds that Lou has more influence on him than he expected, and it may affect his subsequent plans, so he wants to make a clear relationship; the last one is that he and Lou have been together before, but this led to bad consequences, and he doesn't want to make the same mistake again. Lou already knows so much, and considering his identity and character, he will definitely not escape unscathed, so the first option should be unlikely. And in Chapter 30, Xiao said that someone who liked him personally made butterflies and bells for him, and he still keeps them. That person should be very important, I think it should be Lou, because in Chapter 37, Xiao revealed the news about their previous acquaintance, so I prefer the third type. The second person should have a small part, but not much. Judging from the current situation, this meeting will probably go wrong. Xiao Lou and I estimate that they will be separated for a while. Xiao will definitely not tell Lou the real reason. Therefore, the two of them will not be able to reconcile before the end of Salt and Pepper Sheep Hall. My heart hurts. The next map should be the place where Xiao's family or Lou stayed in Linyi in the north when he was a child. It will probably be reconciled after the investigation of the new map is in the middle and late stages. Here in the north, Xiao should be regarded as the "Imperial Capital Tianzhong", as well as more information points on spiritual bionics, and the builder of the building may appear. If it was the place where Lou stayed when he was a child, he would probably add some background information and some past events about Lou, and there would be information about the spiritual bionics. He should also talk about the reason why Lou was hunted down, what happened to Lou Yan, and why the blood splattered on Sendai. The next map should go up to the Nine Heavens. There should be a lot of scenes in the Wanshan Tour here, and some things about the Nine Great Families will probably be revealed through him. There should be a huge shady story about spiritual bionics, but I can't figure it out yet. (Personal reasoning, don't spray if you don't like it [hold your chin]
Why is it so cruel and uncomfortable? What makes me look down now is the ending of he [changed]
Wan Shanyou, who knew that his idol was his relative, knelt down with a plop, and his face was full of smiles. He was so cute, almost adorable. . . [Three-flowered cat head]
It's a new year. I wish Lou Banxian, the author, and the others all the best and good health 😚
"Moon Hug" ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, yes our Lou Banxian is the super invincible and thunderous and beautiful big moon 😚
The head of the Xie clan, the oracle, and the leader of the rebels. I was stunned for a moment before I realized who they were referring to. I felt that everyone had grown up, and it felt like my son had just grown up (? [Let me be healthy]
"Mortal Half-Immortal" Woo hoo hoo, I remembered the sentence that impressed me most when I first started reading this article. Looking back, I saw that more than a year has passed, and I feel that time flies so fast [Tickling my chin]