Tracing the Current Back

The ending also has a feeling of "let's do it", and helplessness. I don't know how to describe my feelings. I feel like I have been polished by the world, and the edges have been smoothed away, leaving only powerlessness and vicissitudes of life. I feel very sorry for the ending. It would be nice if my wife could improve the ending in the future as her writing skills improve. Finally, the flowers are sprinkled! Looking forward to my wife's extra story

To be honest, this article is already a very good one compared to the current Danmei work industry. But I personally think the ending is too hasty. Of course, some authors have this style, which is understandable. Let's talk about a few highlights first: the entire article uses a flashback narrative method, with narration interspersed throughout. The author's writing is smooth and the timeline is very smooth, so the reading experience is good. The character creation is quite rich, but I personally think that the image of Lao Gu is the weakest in the whole novel. The author writes very well about Shi Tingzhou's psychological changes as he grows older and more experienced, including the attitude and tone of his brother's conversation with his brother, his weariness with the war, the collapse of his beliefs, and his identity transformation. Ye Yuqing, Zhuang Shiba (I really can't remember the name, my own fault), and my brother's partner are well portrayed. The theme the author wants to express is very profound: (Personal understanding) There is never an absolute word in this world. Good and bad, good and evil, justice and injustice, development and war... To put it simply, in terms of the war between Sword Man and Blue Eyes, one faction is the main war faction headed by Yi An, and the other is the development faction headed by Shi Tingyun (the general's name has been forgotten). The author depicts the conflicts between several people in detail, and the writing is really good, and it is also in line with Shi Tingzhou's image as he grows older and improves his merits. Especially the part about the collapse of belief is really good. Having said that, if the main war faction had not taken the lead and struck preemptively, that war would have very likely happened. Everyone has seen the ambition of Mo Shisha from the Battle of Daocheng, not to mention that they have also evolved into forms such as Sword Man and Blue Eyes. Hmm... Overall good, here are some suggestions. Author, you have dug a lot of holes for yourself. I remember when you wrote about the child next to Zingzhou who was scolded when he first tested the cedar branches, didn't you mention that at the end of the lighthouse, Tingzhou gave his back to him? Why didn't you write about it? Also, Ye Yuqing didn't mention what his next move would be. Xiaozhuang's final ending is not mentioned either, there are many more like this, but they are gone. This ending is a bit too hasty... Personally, I suggest adding a side story about the cohabitation life of Lao Gu and Xiaozhou (I really want to see it). Thank you for such great work, keep up the good work.

I went to Guangzhou alone to watch the concert of my favorite person. When I sat down in the infield and saw the lights on the stage, tears suddenly fell down. Who can understand? This is a period of youth that started in my second year of high school.

The warrior who slays the dragon does not have to become an evil dragon, nor will he be corrupted by the wealth and indulgence of the royal city. The brave man will always be the brave man who goes forward for the justice in his heart. This is really good. They are all very gentle people, and they deserve to be treated with tenderness (so nice, my body is warm) Also, long time no see. If I hadn't looked through the history on a whim today, I wouldn't have known you had updated the bonus episode (huffing) (can't get angry)

To be honest, I think I can try to write a second part, because I think the first part is actually a very pale ending. In fact, it neither solves the conflicts nor changes the superstructure. It has many hidden dangers. If people will feel that it is broken, I think a large part of the reason is also the ending. You can feel the contradiction behind it is still on the verge of breaking out. I think it would be great if I can continue writing the second part.

Watch it again, such a heartwarming extra, continue to wait for the update 🥺

Love it, love it, is this an if line? Is there any follow-up today? 🥺

[The pits that we have to work hard to fill]: "The Disqualified Town", "My Years Undercover in Xianmen", "The Song of the Wind" [Recommendation Index]: 8/10 [The hole being dug]: "Rose of Zurich", "Congratulations to the Bridegroom", "Dark Forest", "Glass Debt" [Recommendation Index]: 7~9/10 [Completed pits]: "Retrospective", "The Wind Ninety Thousand Miles" [Recommendation Index]: 6/10

The author left some holes that he didn't fill in, and the ending left me stunned, but it was really well-written.

I stayed up late to finish it. The first part was very interesting, but the ending choked me up. It ended in a hurry. I thought I would explore the origin of the creatures they had been fighting, and other unknown places on this continent (?) In fact, when I watched it, I always felt a bit disconnected, as if human beings are not the native inhabitants of this continent. They are like people who took a spaceship to find a new home with an environment similar to the earth. I know very little about this continent (?)