Magical Girl in Yokohama

The biggest problem with this article is that the setting of the world view in the later period is too large and cannot be recovered, and the emotional lines are very blurred and complicated. There are many main characters, but apart from the original characters, there are not many well-drawn and three-dimensional original characters... To be honest, the curiosity about how the plot will develop in the early and middle stages and the feeling of what the heroine will be like are well described. The character of the heroine is also interesting. There are few articles about the Magic Circle world view. This article does have the feeling of the original work in terms of world view. But this ending... I can only say that it was very nihilistic. Maybe it was the idea conveyed in this article that "building a bond with someone is useless and will only bring pain" that made me feel very confused and uncomfortable. The heroine hopes to be loved, but I don't think she got love. After reading it, I will only have doubts about how this child is still alive. On the other hand, the world view is obviously unclear. It has a magical girl plot, and there are a lot of content that can be described and described, which is refreshing just by looking at the setting. However, there are too many emotional lines, and I don't know what the use of writing emotional lines is. Instead, it gave me a feeling that after watching it, I didn't know what these characters were doing, and I couldn't understand their emotions at all. It made me feel better not to watch it. The most novel thing about this article for me is the interaction between magical girls and the Magic Circle worldview and other worldviews. I was very interested in the emotional line at the beginning, but the more I read, the more boring it became. The ending also gave me a feeling of forced deus ex machina. The heroine died a long time ago, and she did not get redemption. This ending is not so much that she was relieved, but that she collapsed too many times and had no strength to continue and had to let go. I really find the heroine's character interesting and like it, but the emotional line really makes the original character unattractive. I can't understand why the heroine wants to be with them. It's better to say that they are just tools to increase the heroine's pain. It's not that the writing of this emotional line is bad, it's every difference. Not many of them are like this. If you read too much, you will know how it will end later. The homogeneity is really high... If this article is based on the emotional line, then the limelight of the main line will be completely overwhelmed by the secondary setting of the world view. If it is based on the world view, the amount of text will be too much. The emotional line will take over the main role. And the last few chapters really gave me the feeling that the pace was too fast...

I felt that there were too many things involved in the end, the plot was very complicated, scenes came one after another, and there was little description of the characters. In fact, I was really looking forward to seeing what they thought about Ayaka from the perspectives of Dazai Chuuya, Odasaku Gojo, Natsu Yukei, etc., But in the end it all passed by in a flash. == I really like the ending. Ayaka liberated herself. It's great to be happy www

So the extra story is about Ayaka and her wings (without the embarrassing Shura field version). It would be great to have a new world modifier that can be used as a memory eraser. Ayaka (laughing) Posting Mami sister is too much like a cat acting like a baby www. I am Mami sister, I will agree with it, and I will give it a hard rua (sneakingly reaching out to touch Ayaka)

Did Ayaka have another memory that was erased subconsciously when she eavesdropped on the conversation between Dazai and Chuuya?

I don't quite understand, so Ayaka was still an ordinary magical girl before, but she created a new world after turning purple sand once? In this world, Ayaka's soul gem is part of the wish-fulfillment mechanism, and is it integrated with the book? Now this peer comes in and, eh? Has this "fake" world collapsed? Are the people there real or fake? In chaos...

I feel that the emotions in the last ten chapters have become a lot duller and a bit boring.

Chuuya suddenly mentioned that Pattus grew up quickly. Was he just making a lie? Chuuya here didn't have a dog at all. He found out that Ayaka thought he had a dog, so he lied to her and then found a similar one.

So the first side story is about Saiga's body recuperating at Engami's place, and the second side story is about a happy world line.

I'm still unhappy. Chuuya deceived the heroine from another world for selfish reasons, and then threw her back to the mirror world. As a result, the heroine couldn't go back to her own world and couldn't see Chuuya in her own world. Can she be a human being?

I stayed up late to catch up and finished watching it! I hope that Ayaka, who is truly sad, can find happiness