[The story will be marked complete starting with Chapter 23, updated 2024/5/9!]
[My first completed novel. I can only promise that it has a complete structure and all the foreshadowing is resolved. No other guarantees, QAQ.]
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[1]
Seven years ago, Yu Chunyu, a criminal police officer, finally captured an international crime syndicate he had been tracking for ten years. He thought it was all over, but that very night he was murdered. The only clue left at the scene was a blood-red letter T.
It was a sign that an even larger organization, also called T, was lurking in the shadows.
His son, Yu Qiu, witnessed it all.
Threatened by T, Yu Qiu dropped out of the police academy and went into hiding. He gave up his dream of becoming a criminal police officer. He had a bright future ahead of him, but in an instant, it all fell apart, forcing him to disappear into the crowd.
Seven years later, cases began piling up in Linjiang City, and the letter T appeared once more. Yu Qiu was exposed to the T organization again. Like a fog that followed him everywhere, it lingered at his side, as if telling him, "I've finally found you again."
Yu Qiu woke from nightmares countless times, asking himself: What kind of organization is T? What does it want? Why is it targeting him?
To protect Yu Qiu, the police assigned Lu Chifeng, deputy head of the city's criminal investigation squad, to guarantee his safety.
Rumor had it that Lu Chifeng was handsome and cold-hearted, and that everything within several miles of him froze over.
But on their very first day together...
The supposedly cold-hearted Lu Chifeng followed Yu Qiu and slammed him against a wall, his voice carrying a vulnerability that took Yu Qiu by surprise. "...Why did you suddenly disappear seven years ago?"
Yu Qiu touched the stars on his shoulder and smiled. "...You look good in uniform, Officer."
Seven years ago, Lu Chifeng had been Yu Qiu's boyfriend at the police academy.
[2]
Seven years ago, Lu Chifeng was a famous rich kid in Linjiang City. Then he went and enrolled in the police academy, where he got himself a boyfriend.
His love life was anything but smooth. His boyfriend, Yu Qiu, suddenly vanished without a trace, and everyone said he'd been dumped.
Then, seven years later, they met again.
Yu Qiu reappeared, and a string of horrifying cases followed: a campus suicide, an international human trafficking ring... and the letter T, which appeared at every crime scene.
Yu Qiu and Lu Chifeng solved each case together. Only then did Lu Chifeng realize that during those seven lost years, the person he had once loved had been carrying a terrible burden and fighting the darkness all along.
The mystery of T was finally unraveled, and the mastermind behind it all emerged from the shadows...
In the end, it turned out to be inextricably connected to Yu Qiu.
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A seemingly gentle but actually sharp-edged, unshakably righteous receiver whose dreams were shattered but whose principles never changed x a large-dog criminal cop who is cold and distant on the outside, but gentle only with his receiver
[Please note]
1. I'm not a professional, I'm not a professional, I'm not a professional.
2. There are lots of liberties taken; this is an alternate modern setting.
3. The romance is about rekindling an old flame; the plot follows the couple teaming up to take down the big bad.
4. The protagonists are absolutely righteous.
5. First published in July 2022, then extensively revised in January 2023.
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"I Became the Dark, Rival's Precious Little Pig"
Sunny receiver x brooding, crawling-on-the-ground seme
True-love warrior x true-hate warrior
*The seme has a secret crush (and might be a little unhinged)
[1]
Linjiang No. 1 High School had a pair of rivals everyone knew: Lin Huaizhu and Sheng Mingguang.
Lin Huaizhu came from a prominent family. His family was rich, and he had grown up in a loving home, bringing light to everyone around him without reservation.
Sheng Mingguang came from a poor family. His parents had abandoned him when he was young. Even though he was smart and handsome, he was ruthless, had a bad temper, and was not someone you wanted to mess with.
Someone interviewed the two rivals.
Lin Huaizhu: "Sheng Mingguang? Who's that?"
Everyone: ...?
Classmate A: Whoa, they really are rivals. He won't even mention the other guy's name.
Classmate B: As expected, ignoring someone is the ultimate insult.
Classmate C: President, that's a brilliant move. Sheng Mingguang must be furious. (thumbs up)
Sheng Mingguang: "Lin Huaizhu? I can't stand him."
Everyone: See? They're definitely rivals.
[2]
And so it was that when the new semester began, these two rivals became deskmates.
Lin Huaizhu's WeChat profile picture was a little pig.
Sheng Mingguang walked past and said, "I hate pigs."
But that very night, Lin Huaizhu woke up to discover that he had turned into... a pet pig!
Wait, how had he turned into a miniature pig?!
As he panicked, he suddenly heard a gentle voice calling to him.
"Little Pig, I'm home."
Lin Huaizhu: ...?
Wait, why was that Sheng Mingguang?!
Sheng Mingguang came closer and closer. Lin Huaizhu felt a large hand gently stroke his back. Then he was lifted up and met those usually gloomy eyes.
But now, those dark, sinister eyes were brimming with possessiveness.
"Little Pig, your daddy looked so beautiful today."
"He's still as beautiful and dazzling as ever, captivating everyone who sees him."
Lin Huaizhu: O_o?
Why did he have a bad feeling about this...
The next second, Sheng Mingguang murmured,
"I really like Lin Huaizhu."
"How can I make Lin Huaizhu look only at me forever?"
Lin Huaizhu broke out in a cold sweat.
QAQ Help, there's a pervert...
[3]
Sheng Mingguang had a beloved pet pig.
But his little pig had come down with a strange illness and seemed sickly every day.
Then, one day, all of a sudden...
The little pig perked up. Before Sheng Mingguang could even celebrate, he realized something about it was strange.
It liked human food, especially spicy food.
It liked milk tea, and it had to be a cup of Four Seasons Milk Green from X.
It liked red and kept oinking until Sheng Mingguang knitted it a red scarf.
It liked...
Everything Lin Huaizhu liked.
A bold suspicion surfaced in his mind.
He narrowed his eyes, looking both delighted and dangerous.
[Reading guide]
1. If I'm lucky enough to get a contract, I'll update according to the rankings before it goes premium, 7,000 words a week; daily updates after that.
2. The receiver has a slight everybody-loves-him vibe. He's doted on by all, and there's no angst. Happy ending! The goal is a light, adorable, sweet little story. (fist pump)
3. The author has an incurable pig obsession and is already lost in their own art. Just leave them be. (Hey...)
Theme: Justice will never fall.
I finished reading this book overnight, it was so well written! This is my first jj comment for you. Hehehe, it is all my personal opinion. There may be many wrong things. Sorry, it contains spoilers, so be careful. I feel that the plot line of the entire article is greater than the emotional line. Basically, all cases cannot escape "family affection", or to be more precise, "blood ties". The book "Tokyo Tower" runs through the entire article, and "Don't make your mother sad" has become the obsession of many murderers. According to the timeline, the earliest blood relationship started in Suzhou and Hangzhou. His parents only loved grades and gave up on him after he failed the college entrance examination to have a second child. I guess at this time his impression of "family" was shattered and he no longer believed in "blood relationship". Later, he chose Su Mu and gave up Su Xueshan, which may have something to do with this. These relations, and those words that Su Mu didn't hear clearly when he was dying, might be what Su Xueshan expected, they were about a father's words to his children. In my opinion, the Suzhou-Hangzhou line is a circle, going around and around, and finally returning to the word "blood". Such a living environment makes him paranoid, which leads to the second line Su Xueshan, the son of Su Hang and Sato. I have a very complicated impression of this person. On the one hand, he has indeed solved many cases and saved many people. It seems that he really cherishes Xiao Qiu in his heart. When I was a younger brother, the scene that impressed me the most was when Xiao Lu said he saw a suspicious person following Xiao Qiu in high school, and Su Xueshan secretly solved the problem behind Xiao Qiu's back. I think at least at this time he really wanted to protect Xiao Qiu, including Xiang Song's car. The shot and the trembling hands after the shooting proved that his inner conscience still existed; but at the same time, he was a villain. Starting from Lin Yan, he could not escape the word "blood" in the end. For Wen Qin's last words about him before his death, he gave up all honors in the police circle and went to Su Mu lives a life of licking blood on the edge of a knife. My evaluation of him is mixed, maybe a little better. Su Xueshan has spent his whole life pursuing blood ties. He longs for his father's approval. As a villain who is not that competent, he is pathetic. The third line is Su Mu, which is also the line I regret the most. When he first appeared, I thought he was Su Xueshan's biological brother. Later, I just thought he was an ordinary kidnapped child who grew into a dragon. It wasn't until the description of the eye shape appeared in the article that I was shocked that he turned out to be Xiao Qiu's biological brother. As for why I regret it, Su Mu was the child of a policeman. Before the age of 8, he had a happy family with the love of his parents and a lovely younger brother. Although he was just a child But he is gentle and considerate. If he can grow up with Xiaoqiu instead of being abducted, he will most likely become a policeman. He will solve crimes every day, stick with his brother, and find little trouble for Xiaolu. But what such a child goes through after being abducted is something I dare not read (yes, I can't read this chapter, and panic when I am happy). A small child, his memory is blurred, and he can't even remember his own name. Su Hang dyed on this piece of white paper. When he went to see his younger brother, he just felt like a rat in the gutter. I guess his hatred of rats was partly because of this, because it was very similar to himself. Maybe he also hated himself. Killing his parents seemed to avenge his young self. I think he should feel aggrieved because he could not experience a happy life like Xiaoqiu. But at the same time, as Xiaoqiu said, Su Mu had killed his parents after killing them. Feeling guilty, even in the end, he let everyone go, and just wanted to die and be with Xiaoqiu. There were too many contradictions in this person. He was a sober lunatic, and maybe he still had a little bit of "blood connection" with Officer Yu, which made him let go of Su Xueshan and Guo Xin'an in the end. The fourth line is about the protagonist Yu Qiu. Because the bright line is hard to see, I don't know if there is this line when it is written in large letters. The following are all my guesses. Xiaoqiu has lived a happy life since he was a child, but all his nightmares started on his 19th birthday. The T organization, the death of his parents, the warning and protection of Bureau Qin and Su Xueshan, frequent house changes, and being unable to go out. These factors caused him to have a mental breakdown. He relied on medicine to survive, and the study he was once most proud of was no longer possible. Yes, but these were all traps set by his "blood" brothers. He was trapped by Su Mu and Su Xueshan, one in the open and the other in the dark, and spent these painful seven years. When Xiaoqiu was kidnapped by Su Mu, she obviously lost her memory, but she believed him the moment she saw him. Su Mu will not hurt him. This is the magic of blood relationship. In the end, Xiaoqiu does not recognize Su Mu as his brother. I think it can be regarded as breaking the chain of "blood relationship" and untying the knot in his heart. The above are all my personal opinions. I hope that I can continue to work hard, write better and better, and write more and more books [Compare Heart]
I always feel like Su doesn't look like a good person
The author wrote really well. Although the whole book made me feel a little depressed, this kind of depression is the normal state of life. There are really many regrets. The bright life that Xiaomu could have had, the high spirits that Xiaoqiu could not return, the glorious glory that Xueshan could have inherited... There are really too many, but what can be done? From the perspective of God, we cannot truly feel the pain they are in, and they all need to be responsible for their own choices. I always feel that what the author wants to tell is not just a story of blood, but also a story of education. Xiaomu was eventually assimilated into a devil by the education of Suzhou and Hangzhou, but Xueshan failed to resist the fetters of blood, and Xiaoqiu did not harbor any malice even after living under T's surveillance for seven years. I know that the current society emphasizes repaying kindness with kindness and repaying evil with evil. It is crazy literature, and it is to find the faults of others to stop internal friction. This view has been brought to the treatment of family relationships, and family education common in Asia has a suffocating sense of contradiction that cannot be escaped or let go. It is a common tragedy for us that a dragon slayer eventually becomes an evil dragon. Thank you Xiaoqiu for the warning. Xiaoqiu did not reconcile with his heroic father in the end, but he also recognized his father's glory and did not destroy his conscience. We can choose not to forgive, but we should not tear off other people's umbrellas. Xiaoqiu's last question in front of the grave is very meaningful. For a long time, we seem to have a standard answer that is difficult to achieve. Life is very long, I hope you will not regret every choice you make; life is too short, I hope everyone can embrace the sunshine
It's been a long time since I've seen such a satisfying and beautiful article. The author is really awesome. It's my first time to write an article and it's so good!!!!!!! Do you have writing experience? This article is the first time I wrote notes to sort out the relationship between characters. Haha, because when I saw Su Mu, the "sole survivor of the year", my mind was a little confused. I kept thinking that he was a victim and a survivor, but why is the current direction so bad (such as a series of performances of hijacking Lin Yan's car). I originally thought that Su Mu was about the same age as Su Xueshan, but it turned out that he was only a little older than Xiao Qiu. One of the great things about the author's writing is that there is very little nonsense in the whole text, and the hooks are so buried that you can't even see the hooks. That's awesome!!!!!!! To be honest, I saw Chinese realities such as family relationships, women, and education in the article. I think these are also things the author wants to express and discuss. I am very grateful to the author for giving me a deeper understanding of how to write novels. The article is well written, in-depth and not superficial. A little humble opinion (although I think it is only a matter of time before the author's talent improves his creation): 1. Some lines are not explained so clearly, such as Lao Tian; 2. In terms of plot description, for example, what is the use of Li Shi's modus operandi in "Shen Ren"? I feel like it would be better to relate to the characters' experiences? 3. In terms of character creation, I think it can be more three-dimensional. The author has a strong ability to tell stories, and the details in many places make the text more realistic, but it still lacks the fluidity of time. That is, I feel that the characters in the article are static. The characters do what the story tells, and there is no sense of surprise. Can there be some things that cannot be seen from the reader's perspective? Make the characters more alive. 4. The flow of the narrative is a bit confusing in some places. It may be that I was too hasty and busy and didn't have much time to polish it carefully, because I think the author is quite busy. And the more I wrote the ending, the more excited I became and I couldn't wait to finish it all at once, haha. Finally, the author is really great. Can you share some of your daily writing experience? [Cover your face and peek][cover your face and peek][cover your face and peek][cover your face and peek]
It's too short and it's not enough to read. It's very attractive in the early stage but I feel like it's written a little too hastily in the end.) The emotional line is a bit lacking? I don't think the characters are so prominent. But the plot of the case is very well written. I like it very much. I'm looking forward to the author's next novel [Let Me Kangkang] [Let Me Kangkang]
It would be nice if the writing was better. The plot of the case is okay, but the writing is average.
Nowadays, some "depression" groups will discuss how to self-harm and commit suicide. Even if the group owners are here to help each other, these discussions are prohibited. There will also be people chatting privately. You can't tell whether they are really sick or just here to cause trouble.
I feel like the two of them are not in the same genre of writing. One is about crazy love and sadistic love, and the other is about blood feud.
Hahahaha, even though the duck is cooked, the mouth is still hard.
The reunion part was well written!