Tales of Old Chongqing

The plot of the whole article develops smoothly, without being pretentious at all, and it is very interesting!

I came here wearing a vest. The first time I sat on the sofa where I wrote an article, haha. Well, be serious. "The director announced to leave work early" -> "The director announced to leave work early" Do you think it would be better to change it this way? I read from the first chapter to the last chapter (well, I went back to write a message.) The words were refined, and I saw such an inappropriate point. I have read a lot of film and television works during the Anti-Japanese War, but I have read very few articles, and selections from textbooks account for a large part. The text has the same feeling as the text from that period in my impression. The heavy social background and the fate of the little people reflect an era. The words are refined and the words are concise. My foundation is shallow and I can't say anything too profound. But I can feel that you have conceived the whole text very carefully, and this attitude is especially reflected in the details. What impressed me most is the use of verbs and the use of the cat to reflect the character's emotions and promote the plot. Between the lines, the events and background echo each other naturally and smoothly. It's so well written! As I write this, I suddenly think of a shortcoming. I feel that the character's personality is not very clear. I feel that the character of the old man is the most three-dimensional and full-bodied. He first appeared in the conversation between the two, and later faced the order of his wife to continue his marriage. He acted seriously like a big family, and even carried tea money to tell novels in the poor days. As well as his later attention and attention to the details of his wife, they all reflect the Ke family background and the identity of the character who were directly explained. In comparison, the personality traits of the two main characters did not bring me such strong feelings. The words and deeds of the two people, carefully arranged, indeed effectively promoted the plot, but there seemed to be less commitment to the characters' personality traits. In the first chapter, in the conversation between the two, their arguments and Wanying's kicking Watson reflected their characters. Later, Xu Qing's words also brought out some of the backgrounds of the two, and together with what the previous two people said, they reflected their characters. I can feel the attitudes and reactions of the two people when facing difficult days and difficult circumstances, but I don't have a deep understanding of the character traits of the characters themselves. This may also be the reason why I have a relatively shallow foundation, but I always feel that the characters can be portrayed in a more profound way. Well, let's put it this way, I feel that the novel has successfully portrayed different people from wealthy families who suffered hardships during the Anti-Japanese War, their reactions to the sudden changes in life, and the impact of the war on such families. However, the character creation is not rich and in-depth enough. It seems that it is possible to change the name. I hope that Lingzi can create characters with their own characteristics, just like people in life, who cannot be replaced at will, and have the characteristics of literary works: they have outstanding characteristics of themselves. By the way, my message may not be accurate enough, and there may be some mistakes, but this does not hinder my expectations for you. My expectations for you will never drop. I hope that we can all write better and better, no matter how good it is. I hope that we can all write at least one classic work, no matter what the subject matter is, no matter what style it is. As a country like ours, there seem to be very few people writing about such themes, but I really feel that the content contained in such themes, even if there is no love/love, there is more to be discovered than a simple romance story. There is a short story that I recommended in my article, but I left very few words below. Although the love story is touching, there is nothing deeper for me to explore and explore. Ha, I'm really happy to see your article. Come on, Lingzi! ↖(^ω^)↗ [The title is correct this time, phew...

Take the works of famous writers as the direction, come on, you will write better and better, come on!

This chapter explains a lot! The use of verbs in these chapters is very expressive! Give me a thumbs up!

Every plot, every sentence is great! Sprinkle flowers!

It feels very much like that era, and it also feels like writing about that era in textbooks! Concise and concise! Score, come on!