Pride and Prejudice: Falling for Colonel Brandon [Fanfic]

I don't know what to say, but I feel that the female protagonist is really not lovable and has no advantages. She lacks the same hobbies as the male protagonist, seems a bit reckless and deficient in social interaction, etiquette, etc., And is a bit impulsive and lacks thinking in doing things, which is quite embarrassing. In addition, Marianne's role is completely absent, and it is less interesting.

She's not as good as the heroine of the original book. Oh my god.

Ah... I feel so depressed after watching this. The heroine doesn't like the heroine in the original work. She herself is not as good as her...

Even now, I don't think I can accept traveling alone with a man, especially if my family doesn't know the itinerary. It won't be a big shock. I will only choose my family, or my fiancé or female close friend if my family knows the itinerary. In addition, He Liya's handling of emotions is so disappointing. If you want me, just go up and slap her twice. Why the hell do you think so highly of yourself? Who will stop without the world? Don't let me think you are like the savior. I'm sorry for this and sorry for that. You demolish one wall to make up for the other, but you hurt the really important people. , I have pain in my heart, I just fell in love with George, it is not friendship or family love, I am stupid, I don't analyze whether it is acceptable for George to marry someone else if George is still alive, whether I will be sad, and then simulate how I would feel if Colonel Brandon married someone else, I can't even imagine this, you have zero IQ!

The writing is good, but I forgot to write about the appearance of my beloved Marianne? Willoughby moved my heart quite a bit in the original novel, especially the long conversation between him and Elinor, but he was very unbearable in it hahahahaha

How did He Liya recover so quickly? ! Damn, she was said to have thick nerves, but she was unexpectedly fragile before. She was so fragile that she could sleep peacefully all night after having a high fever for a few days. Is high fever so effective? Can it absorb negative energy? ! This is a lifelong nightmare for anyone. Only when you are with someone who can really make you feel at ease can you recover very slowly. Some people even have to use a psychologist to help! Please simulate it in your own mind!

What a pity... Confession like this but no response! In fact, I can understand the heroine's mentality to a certain extent... But when encountering such a thing, I can clearly tell the colonel what I am thinking! The colonel is really not smart enough to confess his love at this time!

Okay... I just want to say I'm a little disappointed when I read this chapter... The heroine suddenly got pregnant.

It's really frustrating for the colonel's proposal to be interrupted like this! Being missing means there is still hope! ! Liya, your reaction is so intense that it would be misunderstood! ! ! Colonel, you have to seize the opportunity to comfort me! ! ! Author, don't be a stepmother, why did you explain the male partner like this? ! ! ! !

It is indeed too hasty. I hope Silence will like not to end it so hastily, even if I have to wait another half a year! Don't rush the ending! I feel like the chapter on Silence is only halfway through, so don't finish it just for the sake of finishing it! It's not easy to write such a long novel, so don't end it in an anticlimactic way!