Snow Laden Across Ten Thousand Mountains

The world is a big dream. When I see the ending, I always feel like I have passed my whole life in a trance. It seems that it is always difficult to get what you want in this world, so everyone prays to the Buddha just for a possibility that may not be achieved. Whether it's Ajin, Qingniang, Chu Buci, Yan Hui, or Ziyelou Siyu, Chu Yunchen, Bian Yan, or even He Shu This world has allowed me to meet all kinds of people. Everyone is no longer a single and stereotyped NPC, but people who have their own lives, their own stories, their own loves and hates, and are willing to put aside their selfishness for those who love and hate. What touched me most in the whole text was Yun Que who led Hai Dongqing to fight to the death; Qing Niang who pretended to be a herbal gatherer to accompany Ah Jin in order to prevent her lover from pushing her away; the saint who was selfish but only wanted her sweetheart to remember her for ten years; and Qing Yunjun and Yan Hui who parted ways but never changed their ideas. This is an undeniably good story. It also allowed me to see a lively and lively world. The friendship in it is more moving than love and hate. It is rare to see such a novel nowadays. Thank you to the author for bringing you the dream of Jianghu. I also wish the author a happy new year and getting better and better.

I finished it all in two days, it's so late, this article really hit my XP 23333, so I still wanted to write something as a souvenir. Overall, this is a very good martial arts novel. I finished reading it without realizing it while being poked at the damage caused by the battle. I devoured it all the way through, but there are still some regrets in it. 1. The writing style is good, but occasionally there are too many redundant words in some paragraphs. Most of them replace the word with another more classical word. Although it makes the writing style more prominent in the martial arts style, it also affects the reading fluency and camera sense. The choice of words can be polished. Another similar thing is that there are a lot of synonyms in a paragraph, and they appear repeatedly in different patterns, which can also seem a bit sloppy. In fact, with the author's great skills, many things can be stated in a few sentences. I personally feel that there is no need to emphasize the same image over and over again, such as "Qing", "Su", "Suddenly/Suddenly/Suddenly", I feel a little ptsd after seeing it, hahahahaha. 2. The structure and foreshadowing of the article are very meticulous. This is my second favorite point about the entire article. In a 70k-word long novel, it is easy for mechanical generals and gods to suddenly add settings and other abrupt plots, but the foreshadowing of this article is laid from the beginning of the article. There are foreshadowings everywhere, and in the end they are all properly taken back one by one. It is handled very well, and it is comfortable for readers who care about logic. 3. The group portraits are described with flesh and blood, no one is dispensable, and there is no villain who forcibly subdues his intelligence. The transformation of the characters and the unraveling of the knots are all traceable. But perhaps due to space limitations, so many characters in this article basically only have two-sided descriptions, 1 appearance + 2 reversed two-sided personalities. Even the two protagonists did not get a good three-dimensional portrayal, which is a bit regretful. The characterization here refers to the complexity of people. Too many characters are too "perfect" to the point of being shallow. Of course, this is a critical blow to my XP, but it is indeed a limitation for the characters themselves. Taking the two protagonists as an example, I always feel that both Chu and Qin are too perfect, especially Qin, who seems to be a carved victim, so that I always want to see the dark side of her heart. I don't know if the author intentionally doesn't write too much or the focus of this article is not here. For Chu, her family was exterminated when she was young, and after she escaped, she was imprisoned for the silence of the day, and was later rescued and trained as a chess piece to find the secret treasure. I always felt that she would be more paranoid and obsessed with finding the truth or resurrecting her sister. She was too gentle. This feeling became stronger as the ending approached. It's not that Chu's dark side and paranoia were not explained, but they were always explained very briefly or more obscurely. The most prominent one was Liu Mingzhi. I always felt that his death was too gentle. Considering that he was one of the culprits of Chu's genocide, he should have been tortured, but in the end his death was not so painful. There is also Mrs. Chu. She is the mastermind behind everything and can be said to be the culprit of Chu's genocide. However, there are very few entanglements between her and Chu, which always makes me feel that something is missing. As for Qin, she lacks complex descriptions compared to Chu. From the beginning of the exchange of thoughts, her every move is hung on Chu, but she does not reflect her own will. This does not mean that she must have her own purpose or anything, but she is such a smart person. I always feel that she will use the existing intelligence to make more actions, rather than just advancing according to the environment. 4. The discussion of the intention is what I regret the most. In fact, when I write this, I feel that my requirements are too high. 233333. This article is really good, but after reading it I felt it was a pity and I couldn't help but want to comment on it. I remember that the author mentioned in the essay that the central idea of ​​this article is "dream". There are many, many plots in the article that compare the appearance of "dream" with each other. How dreams can make people intoxicated and reluctant to wake up and believe in reality. However, it is precisely because of this that the in-depth discussion of dreams has not been carried out. It's like you can give 10 examples to explain one thing, but you can also only dig into one example. This article gives me the impression that it is the former. Although it lists many different kinds of intoxicating dreams, it does not describe in depth the multi-faceted impact of dreams on people. Dreams have many layers. They can be physiological, reflecting a person's subconscious, or they can be group consciousness, and they can even subtly change a person step by step. Due to space reasons, most of the article only presents the results of the influence of dreams, but does not describe the most important process of influence. How people are imprisoned in dreams like frogs boiled in warm water until they can no longer escape. Most of these descriptions are omitted. Finally, I would like to thank the author for such a good article. I really read it eagerly for two days in a row. Hahahahaha. I look forward to writing a new book! (Ps: My favorite in the whole article is undoubtedly the character design of the two protagonists. They really hit the XP. I love the battle damage so much. I really can't love it more XD)

I almost finished reading it in one sitting. I was so convinced of the author that I wished I could meet him sooner. The most common allusion science popularization is the wife herself. It's so cute to make notes for herself. It's great to be able to use allusions logically and patiently make notes. [Like] Ah Jin and Qing Niang made me scratch my head when they saw it, but in the end it was Yan Hui, Chu Buci, Chu Family Master, Liu Yiyi, and Zi Qi who sighed. The author's characters are all very three-dimensional, and even the saints and priests in a few strokes are vividly drawn on the page. This dispute between rivers and lakes is like a dream, and there will be many sighs due to the fate. The title is Ten Thousand Mountains Carrying Snow, chasing after the Jialian Snow Mountain. In fact, when I first saw this point, I thought that Xiao Chu would escape into the snowy mountains and never meet Qing Niang. I didn't expect that the scenery was always in the mountains. I didn't expect to use this character to reveal the side of Master Shen Gu. It was very clever. What a group portrait, it's so heartwarming to see these sisters. Finally, I wish the author well. This is a great book. Take good care of your hair. I'll wait for the next one [Cat's Claw]

If there really is a parallel time and space, I hope Zi Qi can be with the poster he likes 😭

I would like to see you in the south, and see you in the light. When you meet the wrong person at the wrong time, all you can do is sigh [hold your chin] I can see that my wife really likes love, but I can't help it 😭

It's so uncomfortable, I can't love you 🤔 scattering flowers [cat's paw]

I feel so uncomfortable watching it, my sister makes me so upset [bursts into tears], so does my sister like Yun Que?

I wanted to buy sweet-scented osmanthus and drink it with me, but it didn't look the same. Young man wandering around

Happy New Year! This book is really, really well written.

Happy New Year, peace and prosperity