HP: Shier's Notes, 1971

When I saw this, I found out that I have stopped updating for a year, which is very regrettable, especially in such a sore position. The author's writing skills, plot settings, and character creation are all quite up to par among the HP fandoms or derivative works I've seen, but I still have some shortcomings. This shortcoming mainly comes from the last few chapters. I have to admit that the looming relationship between them during the ambiguous period is very eye-catching, but the further back, the more I feel that the author deliberately designed a painful literature full of personal art, and even in chapters 70 and 80, there are faint signs of going beyond the character creation of the characters themselves. Especially when the update is discontinued in this place, it is difficult for me not to speculate. As a person who is creating stories and characters myself, it is difficult for me not to guess whether the author has changed his view on his CP after a period of time. Maybe even I doubt the possibility of their heir. I can only say that this change is not surprising. But I have always firmly believed that in the creative process, in order to maintain the integrity of the story and "tell the story well," the author must sacrifice something when giving it a soul. Otherwise, the work will easily become a tool for the author's own artistic creation. In this case, the color of the work itself will be eroded. But I still want to emphasize that the author of this article is very good. Whether it is an emotional drama or something else, the plot of the heroine and Hugh is full of tension. But up to now, I can only treat the story of the two protagonists as be, because it happened to be in this position. Although the above expresses my unceremonious criticism, it also serves as a warning to my own creation.

Is there no follow-up? It's so sad. It would be better if they were stuck together, but they are stuck here and there is no follow-up. Is there still a possibility for Sirius and Hill? If there is no follow-up, I think that they can only stop here in this life, stop at that seaside, and their relationship is just, "Next time you meet someone you like, if you are not ready, don't tell her." It's so sad. Yes, readers know that they will definitely be together in the end, but Hill doesn't know, and Sirius doesn't know either.

Will I be able to see the follow-up in my short life...

Tied in one go! Thanks to the author for writing this article. Campus love, which is very youthful and entangled until the fifth grade, is very delicious. We can watch our Rosie gradually open her heart and become sober in her relationship. There are not only emotional lines but also friendship lines with everyone in the same grade. The blurred line between best friends and then lovers is also very good. I am very much looking forward to what tricks (?) Sirius will pull next to win back our Rosie. It must be said that I was deeply convinced when I saw "You Can Never Expect Blake to Grow Up". I always feel that the original character was still an impulsive and arrogant child until he was offline, and once he got up, he didn't care about anything. I hope he and Rosie can have a mature and calm chat at the right time? In short, I beg the author to update it! Give the work ten thousand kisses 😚

I hope you can come back. I hope you still remember us. I hope you still remember Rosie and Sirius. I hope that in this whirlpool, Rosie can find a better self. I can already see her changes and new stages. I will be grateful if I can see more about Rosie's future. The above is just my hope.

It's been 26 years, and I still can't forget you, Primrose's tongue-twisting name, or the hot hearts of the two young people on that summer night 😭 😭 😭

I really hate it. Today I heard Swift's Last Summer again. This song is just like the two of them 😭 😭 😭 I will always be yours 😭 😭 😭

I read this article about three or four years ago, and now I have reached the same level again, but I found that the author has not updated it for a long time. It took me more than a day to read it. Sometimes I couldn't help but smile like an aunt, but most of it was sour. . The feeling of being unable to hold onto the person who is clearly in front of you, the feeling of having to face reality and pain as you grow up, the feeling of being unable to integrate and accept other people's arrangements, the feeling of loneliness, the feeling that we cannot control our destiny... When I first read this article, I had just started college, but now I have graduated. Time flies, happiness is fleeting, and only the bitter feeling remains...

Last updated six months ago... Everything goes dark

I don't know if I'll be able to see updates in my lifetime. It's really well written [hug my thighs]