Young Master Xie's Trip to the Countryside

Finished spreading flowers! To be honest, the sudden ending surprised me. I can't see them in such good condition, but I always firmly believe that their story is not over. On the contrary, they are in another world, and the story will never end. This is my first time writing a long review and I don't know what format it should be, so I'll just follow my own heart. 1. Writing style If I want to comment on an article, I think the first thing to do is the writing style. This is my first criterion for eliminating articles and the most important thing to me. There is often a saying that "there are many mistakes, but good writing can be broken." I really love my wife's writing style. It's hard to write well in campus articles and express your feelings. Because the subject matter is common, the tags are often mixed. Many times when I click on an article with a title and copy that suits my heart, the content is a bit off. The subject matter and writing style of newcomers may not be able to attract a large amount of traffic, and the hard work may not be proportional to the harvest, but I always firmly believe that the ones who can stay are the truly suitable people. It is better to write about things that you don't like and are not suitable for, so it is better to create a new universe with the people you truly love. Madam, you are really great. I want to express my gratitude to you. This is my first time to follow an article. Thank you for telling this story and not letting me experience the dramatic ending of overturning the first time I follow an article. I hope that your future will go further and further, that your future will be full of flowers, that the characters you write will always be vivid, and that everything goes well for you. 2. Plot To be honest, this article is not perfect. Its plot is very smooth, probably because of the first book. The plot setting gave me a very simple feeling. Maybe my wife wanted to write a simple story from the beginning, but some plots were really too hasty. For example, the ending here is indeed a bit rushed, and the big conflict is clearly explained, but it is a bit too sudden after all. Maybe the wife is considering a spin-off? Another example is the speed of time to catch the train. In the first few chapters, it was just a birthday, and soon it was another birthday, and the final exam was just after the promotion. The contrast with the previous chapter is quite obvious, as if the high-speed train suddenly stopped and started to move, and in a short while, it reached the other shore half a map away. But as the first book of Cookie and Madam, "Bankruptcy" still gave me a big surprise. The characters and plot are all within a reasonable range, and there is no sense of distortion. It reads like a story that will happen around you, rather than a castle in the air. 3. Personality There are many plots in the article that are quite heart-warming, and Xiaoli always expresses them from the bottom of his heart, wishing he could give all the good things to Chenchen. Unlike Xiao Li, who showed his good intentions openly, Chen Chen's care was not exposed, but he would unconsciously grow his hair for Xiao Li's first sentence, could see through Xiao Li's lies and take him home, and protect Xiao Li's face in front of his grandma. As expected, gentleness is always hidden in the details. Comrade Chen Chen must be a qualified wife. The characters in "Bankruptcy" are not perfect paper characters. Xiaoli is irritable and straightforward, while Chenchen is delicate and restrained. The two often have disputes because of this, but this is also in line with reality. After all, how can there be existences in life that perfectly fit each other without running in? The only regret is that I always felt that it was Xiao Li who was chasing bravely, while Chenchen seemed a little passive, which was a little sad for me who likes both parties to go in the same direction. 4. Summary I highly recommend this cookie! Look! Don't miss it if you pass by! Flaws do not hide the virtues, friends! I love Mrs. Huanyishu so much! The first book is on this level, and our wife definitely has a promising future!

Kissed!!! Woo woo woo

Check in at the second famous scene! Wow wow wow, it's so sweet here

It was recommended by a friend. After reading the first chapter, I went back and read the plot introduction to find out what it was about. I always felt like I was confused at the beginning and didn't know what the protagonist was going to do. I hope the author can explain the story clearly, because most readers only need to read the first chapter to know the cause and effect.

My wife's writing style is really great, and she has a boss-like feel! It is recommended that if you have time, you can study the plot, character design, etc., And make some innovative plots. You can also learn from major websites. You really have a bright future. I wish my wife that her next book will be soaring!!

Is this the end?! It's too bad just to see my little brother in high school falling in love

"Exquisite" is a big bug for the author ~ it should be "straight"

I feel like Xie Li is just a little kid who lacks love and care.

It's so sweet, qwq. I originally wanted to comment on the latest chapter, but after thinking about it, it's better to check in on the famous scenes. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I am so moved by this scene!!! The wdm thank you gift is real!!! I love my wife so much!

Let me catch a bug first. In Chapter 3, when one of the "ones" was handed to Chenchen, in Chapter 5, the disgusting words should be followed by upper and lower quotation marks. In Chapter 9, I gave up the game and "went" to sleep. In Chapter 17, you are not "allowed" to quarrel with me in the future. The quotation marks are after correcting the words that I think are wrong. Since I said it would be updated soon, I just followed it up. This is my first time following an article. It's really good-looking, I like it very much. It's my favorite campus novel so far this year. Chenchen's character is really awkward. Sometimes I feel like it's not Xiaoli who's angry, right? I don't care, I'm annoyed too hhh, Xiaoli is brave and not afraid of difficulties! Come on! Teach this little country wife a lesson! I'm really looking forward to the next development!