★ [Cozy in the beginning, plot-focused in the middle and later chapters, and the ending feels a little rushed. I'll give the whole story a thorough revision when I have time.]
[Check out my older, completed novel: The Rich Guy in the Comic]
[Blurb]
Xu Zizhen transmigrated into the cultivation world with a sign-in System. Faced with vicious monsters, evil demonic cultivators, and hypocritical orthodox cultivators, all he could do was stay alive by signing in at the beginner village and carrying out despicable acts like stealing candied hawthorns from children and tossing firecrackers into the village chief's cowshed on New Year's.
Saving up enough money to marry a husband was the biggest goal in his life. Emmm... That little cultivator from Qingfang Mountain was exactly his type. Just looking at him made Xu Zizhen's heart flutter.
There was a little cultivator at Qingfang Mountain with rosy lips and pearly teeth. He met his nemesis during the Qi Refining stage, a wild and cheeky fellow.
Later, Qingfang Mountain produced a Venerable who had reached the Mahayana realm, an overwhelmingly powerful expert only one step away from ascension, who doted on his wife without limit.
P.S. During all those years I “kept out of trouble” in the cultivation world, it was mainly because the people I met were all pretty well-behaved.
P.S. Unexpected things may come up while I'm writing. If anything makes you uncomfortable, please stop reading in time. Until we meet again, let's part on good terms and refrain from insults or harsh words.
[My ongoing novel] The Strong-Looking Me with Weird Tastes [Quick Transmigration]
Su Ran: What's our specific mission?
System: Every protagonist needs an enemy who teaches them to grow on their way to success.
You can use any means, including but not limited to humiliation, suppression, smearing their reputation, and showing contempt, to spur the protagonist to work hard and reach the pinnacle of life.
In return, we receive humiliation points.
Su Ran: What are humiliation points for?
System: They can be exchanged for points at a 1:1 ratio, which you can use to shop in the system store.
Su Ran O(∩_∩)O: Got it √ (Humiliation points = points = cash)
A worker works with all their heart. Even when a worker dies, their soul lives on.
System 888 and its work-loving, money-making Host Su Ran set off on a diligent journey of transmigration, working hard to milk every last benefit.
① The fallen, deposed crown prince is my darling
Su Ran defended his country for fifteen years, commanding a million troops and governing forty-one provinces. Everyone knew that Prince of the North Su Ran wielded immense power, showed no respect for the emperor, and lorded it over the court, yet no minister could do anything about him.
As crown prince, Song Qiyuan had no powerful maternal relatives and no support in the inner palace. For twenty-eight years, he walked on thin ice, never forming a faction or daring to make a misstep. In the end, he still couldn't escape the treacherous power struggle. He fell into a conspiracy, was deposed, and confined to the Imperial Clan Court.
Su Ran needed to rescue the fallen crown prince from the Imperial Clan Court so he could milk him for even more benefits. He looked at Song Qiyuan, kneeling with his head bowed on Su Ran's lap, tears clinging to his lashes, ears like gleaming pearls, neck fair and beautiful, his whole body battered and fragile.
Su Ran's expression: Confused and complicated.jpg.
Su Ran's inner thoughts: Make him... make him cry!
With no hope of survival, Song Qiyuan could only entrust his last chance to the Prince of the North. Having crushed all his dignity, he pleaded, “Y-Your Highness, please... please take pity on me.”
Seeing someone so wretched and pitiful, Su Ran not only kept a straight face, but inwardly clamored for things to get even more intense: Emmm... Thanks for asking. It took living two lives to realize I'm not sexually indifferent.
Seeing someone so helpless and vulnerable, eyes rimmed red, Su Ran felt no sympathy at all. Instead, he was itching to bully him: Emmm... Thanks for asking. It took living two lives to realize my tastes are seriously weird.
Later...
Grown-up Song Qiyuan worked hard at overtime.
Su Ran, inwardly screaming that he was doomed but still looking disdainful on the outside: “That's it? That's all you've got?!”
Song Qiyuan gritted his teeth and kept at it.
System earnings notification: “Humiliation points acquired, plus 1, plus 1...”
② The illegitimate young master is my darling
(To be uploaded once it's written)
[My ongoing novel] The Rich Guy in the Comic
After browsing comics for a while, Fang Yan clicked on The Frail Little Lamb Can't Escape. The lamb was soft, sweet, pure, obedient, and incredibly easy to bully, while every villain who tormented him was utterly despicable. Fang Yan... automatically put himself in the villains' shoes. But the next moment, after working himself to death from exhaustion and staying up late, Fang Yan transmigrated into the comic he'd just read, becoming the first villain, a man with a face full of flesh.
As the owner of a film and television company worth over a billion, Fang Yan began a new life.
While other film companies were still making tragic romance dramas full of sobbing, “Don't go, don't die,” he gave the order to make domineering CEO romance fantasies:
“First, my name is not...”
“Second, I...”
When other film companies followed suit and began making domineering CEO romance fantasies, he gave the order to make dramas with strong female leads:
“Don't cry in front of my tombstone. You'll soil the road to my next life.”
“Never say those three words, ‘I'm sorry.’”
When other film companies followed suit and began making dramas with strong female leads, he gave the order to make transmigration dramas:
“Hydrogen, helium, lithium, beryllium, boron, carbon, nitrogen, oxygen, fluorine, neon.”
“Reinforced concrete, steam engines, generators.”
When the other film companies followed suit yet again, he had them start making heart-wrenching tragic romances:
“Don't go, don't die...”
“The stars fill my eyes, and even the spring breeze can't compare to you.”
Later generations of media would say: In Fang Yan's era, every film company trailed behind him, eating his dust!
Theme: Be honest, brave, and kind, and face a thousand hardships without losing sight of your principles.
Reborn: Conquering Entertainment by Filming Short Dramas
Supreme Betrayal
There's No Getting Out of This Job
Reborn: The Chef God's Delicious Daily Life
The Cat People Battle the Blue Star Natives
A Life-Winning Farmer in Ancient Times: Construction and Farming [Space]
Holding a Vase Role Script in a Male-Oriented Novel [Quick Transmigration]
Daily Sign-In to Conquer All Worlds
Blue Cloud
An Angler Reborn as the Villainous Male Lead Who Loves Without Reciprocation
Reborn as the Sweetheart of a Big Boss
An Unprofessional Villain [Quick Transmigration]
It feels like the rhythm has changed from a walk to a 100-meter race. I feel lonely for no reason.
Although the pace of the article is a bit fast, I still like the feeling of the rhythm in the front. The feeling in the back does not seem to be consistent with the honest people the copywriter said I met... Anyway, I was in a hurry later. I felt that we separated after not getting along very much. It was a long time after we were separated. Oh, emmmmmmm. Overall, the topic selection of the article was quite good. I thought I would sign in. I learned some good things, but the pace was too fast, and there was not much foreshadowing. Then they separated for a long time, and I didn't feel any emotional development. I couldn't understand their mood of wanting to reunite quickly after separation. Anyway, I feel that the writing level is very good, but the content is really too rushed, and it ends in a hurry, which feels a bit...
If you want to see Qi Yue meet his love rival, let's do a side story!!!
How can I put it this way? I feel like the two of them are not quite compatible, or that Gong's image has not been established, while Shou's image of having friends and righteousness has been established. I have no friends at all, no thoughts, only feelings. If Shou only had Gong in his heart, this would actually become a very sweet article. But the problem is that Shou doesn't only have Gong in his heart. He has many, and he would feel very bad, because Gong only has him in his heart, and feels that the love between the two parties is unequal. Moreover, Shou knows that Li likes him and is so close to him. I don't believe that he can't tell, and Lou, and I don't believe that Shou can't tell. So actually Shou doesn't care, and he thinks it doesn't matter, so he is very close. But this is actually unfair to Shou's lover, because Shou doesn't actually put his lover in a special position, but a position similar to that of a brother. In fact, this is also a view of love, and I can't be wrong. But I have always felt that feelings should be fair. Shou has great love in his heart, and Gong should also have other loves. If Shou puts Gong first, Gong should put Shou first. One person cannot become another person's appendage. I just wanted to end it and Shou wanted to travel around. I had no idea what to do. I just wanted to accompany Shou and go find experience. Wouldn't Shou feel guilty? Has he forgotten what he experienced? Or does Shou know that Gong will forgive him? Shou will actually sacrifice his life for his brother if his brother suffers. But Shou actually doesn't think about what Gong will think or whether he will feel uncomfortable. As mentioned earlier, Shou Dui Gong said that if he died, let Gong find someone else and live a good life. He said that if Gong died, he would also find someone else to live a good life. When I saw this, I felt that the two people's views on love were actually inconsistent. I feel that maybe the view of love in the world of cultivators is more free and easy, after all, you have to live for so long and experience so many dangers. Understanding is one thing, thinking is another. The feeling is that the feelings of attack and reception are not equal. In fact, according to the analysis of Shou's character, next time he encounters danger, he will still rush forward without attacking, and then Gong will continue to work hard to find Shou. If this situation continues, it feels like the two of them will break up sooner or later. What I have explained above is just to pave the way. If I get reckless next time, let Gong's waiting will not be painful. Let Gong change his mind. If Gong doesn't change his mind, they will break up sooner or later. But doesn't this feel a bit unfair? Shou has always been the kind of person who is free and unrestrained, chivalrous and righteous, and feels like a miserable wife who stays at home. Even if the wife does not feel that she is suffering, it cannot change that what she is actually experiencing is a drama of suffering. The scary thing is that Shou may have made a few more brothers outside. So I don't think the two of them are compatible. It would be much better if Shou's adventures could bring offense, but the problem is that Shou is not someone who thinks that much, so he won't bring offense. It's actually quite painful to analyze it this way. What I said was a mess, and this is what I think. I feel like I'm still not suitable for reading this kind of article. My wife's writing style is very good, and her adventures are also well written, so I was able to finish reading it. But the emotional line made me particularly confused. I don't care if the two of them appear in articles in large proportions. After all, as long as their hearts are together and only a small proportion of them appear in articles, it's fine. But the problem is that this emotional plot develops first, and the heart that makes me feel hurt is not at all on Gong. In other words, many people are affected by it. If it is a true brotherhood or something, and the feelings are affected by many people, I think it doesn't matter. But the problem is that they are not brothers at all. Even if they are called brothers on the surface, I don't think they are brothers. I was very confused about the emotional line. The previous comment said that Gong also kissed someone else. I read it later and it has been changed. But I think it would be better to let Gong kiss someone else. In other words, it's not about kissing someone else, it's about letting the attacker have his own life and his own brothers, instead of putting the receiver first. And in the end, when I went to Yunyu, I didn't just go wherever I wanted to go, but it was probably a matter of discussion between the two of us. In fact, if Shou doesn't have other feelings, I think it would be good for the two of them to put each other first. But in this case, you have this kind of life of your own. If you don't have your own life, it will actually be very painful. As of now, I feel that this is the best article without CP. Okay, I wrote a lot of messy stuff. Don't worry, madam, let's vent. In fact, I feel that what my wife wrote should be that the two of them sincerely agree to like each other. Mainly because I went through some details, and I felt that my understanding might be a little different from what my wife wanted to write. Don't pay attention to what I say, it's all nonsense and has no logic.
After Chapter 46, the collapse was so severe. What a pity
The whole article is shorter than I expected. The slow farming in the early stage is really interesting, and then it develops rapidly in the later stage, and the progress takes off. However, the length of Fu Yun's chapter at the end is too short, and I feel a little anxious to finish it. Although but! Still very beautiful
The pace behind it is too fast. The first half is really interesting. This should be a full-length novel with 7 million words.
The first part is about Shou Shou's adventure of returning home, the middle part is about what to do if Lang Shou makes him disappear, and the latter part is about the old man's revenge and beautiful love, hahaha, the ending is full of flowers.
It's so easy to catch up later, it's like fast forwarding hundreds of thousands of words compared to the previous one.
It's not that fate is not kind to you, it's that the author is not kind to you. Smile.