Can My Junior Disciple Still Be Saved?

After reading it, I was really touched. I want to praise the author!!! How could the first story depict the characters so vividly (I shed tears of envy). The language skills are also very strong, and the sentences are very beautiful, making people feel as if they are actually there. It's really a treasure. This genre has been very popular in recent years. I've seen a lot of works by great masters, but the author makes me feel that it's on par with those great masters. Really, I feel that if the plot is expanded and the characters are more fleshed out, it can be compared. Moreover, the author writes the characters and stories very well. It really struck a chord with me. It won't be the same as other people's works. It can be seen that he is a very thoughtful person. Because he loves to bring us such beautiful novels, I really love it! (???) Come on, the future is promising~ The next great person is you! (???_??)? Come on This is the first time I write such a long comment, because I am really lazy, but I met Da Da, whom I like, and I think it is worth it hahahaha. I wish Da Da, this hidden gem in the ocean, will eventually be discovered. "The edge of the sword comes from sharpening, and the fragrance of plum blossoms comes from the bitter cold." Da Da! ε(*?ω?)_/?:?☆

It's well written and it's free.

I feel so warm that I want to cry. I wish them a safe and smooth life, wealth and happiness.

I started reading Dada's articles in 21, and I feel that Dada's writing style is particularly fresh and clean, like the smell of mud mixed with grass after the rain (I don't know how to describe it, but I have this smell in my mind every time I read it, hahaha) Come on Dada, I will always support you.

The first article on Jinjiang is free, the writing is very good, short and concise!

I really like the protagonist in Mrs.'S novel! A God who is gentle, considerate and kind-hearted!!!!

I really like this episode. The characters are so full-bodied.

It's almost four o'clock when I finished reading this book. It's a bit late, so I'm writing this review now. I feel good about this author's cutting-edge work. The characters are all flesh-and-blood and the writing is light, but there are still some flaws in the plot. I decided to write a long review from the beginning of reading this book hh. Will I pass into the book because it is the first long review of this book~ (Just kidding. But there is a saying, if I pass into this book, the first thing I have to do is to rub the mud off Xu's face in front of everyone, I want to see Ma Mei and blow everyone's ww. (ﾉ∇︎ ) In fact, there are still some holes that have not been filled in this book, but the writing in the first book is not familiar yet, which is understandable. Let's talk about the protagonist first. Xu has a very well-established image. Who doesn't love the gentle and approachable senior brother? And he is also quite smart, not stupid, and can react later when Qi takes advantage of him. And a person who is so afraid of pain is actually willing to dig out his spiritual roots for the sake of justice for his junior brother. I think the image of Qi is particularly well established. He has been tortured by Chu Yunliu since he was a child, from fear to numbness... And then he was pushed off the bottom of the cliff and suffered. It is so heartbreaking. In fact, I think Qi Hong, as the protagonist of the original book, could have gone deeper into his character, but in actual reading, his psychology is still a bit shallow. I think the most touching part is the part about Xu falling off the boat to save his relatives. It was so well written that I felt like I was transported into the book at that moment, my heartbeat was racing. The process of Qi falling in love with Xu was quite obvious, and she was the only one who used actions to treat him well. My favorite scene is when everyone gathered together in Weiyang Pavilion to seek justice for Hua Shen and Hua Shen. I felt so soft when I saw it. Such a good group of people... The group portrait is invincible! Followed by Hua Rubi and Shen Yijie, this couple played a great role in advancing the plot. And their relationship is really embarrassing. A person who wanted to protect the common people was slandered as a traitor and was thrown to the bottom of the cliff, silently slaying demons for mankind below. After many years, I faced my lover but couldn't say a word. Hua Rubi is also a very brave woman. The part where she went to seek justice behind Shen Yijie's back made me heartbroken... Especially when Xu heard what the woman said, this society is so unfair to the lower class. Then there are He Xingzhou and Jiang Rongge. My first impression when I saw these two names was that they were so artistic, Xingzhou and Rongge. Moreover, some of the small interactions between the two in the article are also very sweet. Both of them also have justice in their hearts. I feel that Yang Ge is the kind of bright and lively senior sister hh, and Xing Zhou is like a calm senior brother, who matches me. Let's talk about Shen Shuiyun. He is really kind to Xu and has a deep friendship. In fact, I thought he would be a tool to promote the protagonist's feelings () but I didn't expect that he is also a person of flesh and blood. Ma Chichi's life experience is very miserable. No one has cared about him since he was a child, but he is actually such a person who values love and justice. Even though his father doesn't care much about him, he still cheats and kidnaps him for his father's sake. In everyone's eyes, he has a role to play in private, and I really like this kind of character. Finally, let's talk about some pitfalls~ This is the author's first book. As a first book, this book is really well written and has few pitfalls. And after reading the author's later articles, I really made great progress. 1. There is a bit of a problem with the life experiences of the two protagonists. It seems that Qi's home in the mortal world is not mentioned in the whole book? Could it be that Qi has been the same person since childhood? It's so painful. There's also the possibility that he didn't travel through time. He actually doesn't miss his modern home at all. I don't see him thinking about it in the article. The only home mentioned seems to be the original owner's home. And where did the original owner go after being possessed by him? 2. Didn't the beginning of the chapter talk about how miserable Chu Yunliu's life experience was in the original book... But it was not mentioned in this book. Actually, there is a saying that I don't know whether to say or not () I think Master is so cute. After he was caught doing bad things and was caught, he softly called me Senior Brother... And he is also a peerless beauty. Even when faced with an old devil who admires him, he will use his beauty to get what he wants, so scheming. But it's really outrageous that he was so cruel to Qi. 3. Xu's relationship with Qi is not obvious. He fell in love just because Qi took care of him when he was injured. It's a bit hasty. It would be better to say that he felt very sorry for Qi after reading the original work, and that he is a "father fan", and then go into the book and slowly fall in love with it hh. In the end, I want to say that these pitfalls are nothing! After all, it is a short story, and it is normal to leave blank space in short stories. In fact, the author's writing style is not gorgeous, and there are no long paragraphs of psychological description, but it is very touching. Xu Zeran's kindness to Qi Hong was hidden in some inadvertent actions. As the protagonist of the original book, Qi Hong has a heavy sense of destiny, which creates a very clever feeling with Xu Zeran's outsider's perspective. Although the data of this article is not high, I feel that it is like a dusty pearl. You need to calm down and slowly taste and rub it to feel the warm luster. The more I wrote and thought about it, the more I liked the book. ｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

Every character has flesh and blood, a very heart-warming article 😭

I don't know how long it's been, maybe a year, maybe longer. I still couldn't walk after seeing the relationship between the brothers, so I watched it again.