You Said You Were a Little Hard to Woo

The writing is really good. I was really touched when I saw them. There are so many small details that really make me happy. I just want to comment a little bit (don't hit me, please). In the first one or two chapters, in fact, some parts were not very clear (just some sentences were not natural). But later on, it became very natural, like ordinary people speak (not that it was not like before!!!) As for Shen and Zhou, you can actually write about Shen's emotional changes. Mainly when Zhou confessed to Shen, Shen still liked Zhang. Later, you can write about Shen discovering that he actually loves Zhou. It's not the kind of love for Zhang, but you can write about Shen's emotional changes and more of his psychological description. The story of Zhang's father and Zhang's mother was very well written. It really brought out the true emotions of the characters and Zhang's mother's love for Brother Yan. In the end, it also revealed whether Zhang's father was really good to them. Although he was emotionally cold, he would still remember them. When I read it, I was very moved and burst into tears. (Forgive me for being moved by this often) In fact, you can write about the details of their relationship and the image of the character (for example, Zhou, you can write about his delicate and careful treatment of feelings at the beginning) Zhang and Xie are also portrayed very well. Zhang can't say thank you, but tolerates Xie in every aspect. Finally, Xie's mother comes, which also shows that Zhang thinks about Xie everywhere and has opinions about their future, which is also a reflection of his love for Xie. And Xie also loved Zhang very much, which was reflected in many details. For example, he was afraid that his self-esteem would be shattered, so he would go there in batches every day and give some money. Xie later also cared about Zhang's feelings very much. I really like this! Finally, Da Da's writing is really not good, but others haven't discovered Da Da's treasure yet! You have to have confidence in yourself! Also, my evaluation is not very good and may be a bit verbal. I hope you won't suggest it (don't hit me). Come on!!! I hope they can all grow up safely and healthily! (I hope to write a big extra)

Ah, ah, come on, Brother Ke!!

Ahhhhhh! I really like the deputy cp

It was really full of twists and turns. Just when I was about to be pleasantly surprised and thought I was on the right side to attack and receive, something unexpected happened, but in the end I was still on the right side.

Oh my God, please get out

I finally solved it, but it's not the same as it was at the beginning, hey~~

So pretty~ Beautiful~

It's valuable to persevere, cheers for you! But Xie's character setting is really too immature. . . A little bit in love. In addition, maybe we need to pay more attention to the viewing angle issue? Sometimes I can't turn a corner, and the sense of immersion disappears all of a sudden...

Update soon, I can't get enough of it! The main CP is so sweet, I am very curious about the development of the sub CP. However, I found that both pairs of CPs were attracted by each other first.

Finished with flowers Finished with flowers