The latter half isn't very well written. The author is still experimenting. Whether good or bad, these are my babies, so proceed with caution. Thank you, everyone!
My other book in the same genre, a post-marriage romance about transmigrating into a book, The Man I Couldn't Get Was the Male Lead, So I Married the Second Male Lead, is now underway. Synopsis below.
"Waaah, can someone give me a second male lead? I'll work hard, make money, and support him!"
Wan Yi had just posted that comment when she transmigrated into a book that very night. She became the male lead's unattainable first love and the newlywed wife of the foolish second male lead. The original owner had married him because she'd lost all hope in the male lead. Wan Yi, on the other hand, was a hundred percent satisfied with Lou Jichu. Why torment herself over the male lead? Was he even worth it?
Aside from having far too much energy, he was great in every other way.
With a rich, handsome husband who was cute and obedient, Wan Yi was living the good life. One day, she was walking hand in hand with Lou Jichu when they ran into the male and female leads bickering. Faced with the male lead's meaningful gaze, Wan Yi looked disgusted, turned around, and dragged Lou Jichu away, not forgetting to complain to him:
"Come on, Chuchu. Those two seem to have something seriously wrong with them."
The original male and female leads: "..."
*
Lou Jichu recovered ahead of schedule, but since the time wasn't right, he decided to keep pretending to be a fool. He managed to fool everyone except Wan Yi.
When the others found out, they all rushed to curry favor with him. Wan Yi, however, had vanished, acting like a heartless woman who'd slept with him and run off. Anxious and angry, he finally found her in the audience at the university welcome gala, screaming at the stage:
"Aaaaaah! My baby's so cute!"
Lou Jichu glanced over. A youthful boy was dancing, flirting and acting adorable without a trace of embarrassment. He cursed the performance as unbearably affected, then grabbed Wan Yi by the arm and pulled her up.
"Who's your baby? Who's cute?"
The crowd turned to look. The impeccably dressed man, looking every inch the polished professional, pointed at the stage. After a long pause, he blushed and said something that left everyone dumbfounded:
"How are they any cuter than me?"
Wan Yi: What the hell are you talking about?
*
After finally bringing her home, Wan Yi was cool and distant, even clamoring for a divorce. Not a word out of her mouth was what he wanted to hear. Every sentence drove a knife into Lou Jichu's heart.
"I told you, you're not my type. I like the whiny, clingy kind who knows how to act cute."
Before she could finish, the man's face turned livid, a clear sign he was about to lose his temper. He just wanted to silence her incessant chatter. Wan Yi instinctively tried to step back, but Lou Jichu sighed. In the end, he couldn't bring himself to force her. He bent down, rested his chin on her shoulder, and rubbed against her placatingly, softening his voice as much as possible.
"A Yi, will you kiss me?"
A sharp-tongued, hard-hearted heiress who turns cold without warning VS a straight-laced, iron-pumping CEO forced to become a clingy crybaby. The idea came to me in March 2021. I have a screenshot.
Reading guide:
1. Both are virgins, one-on-one romance. The author's blurb is terrible, so just read the story, sweetie.
2. A romance-focused sweet story. The heroine is a fair-skinned beauty.
3. Please kindly point out any plot holes or errors in the professional details. No writing advice, but discussion is welcome.
4. 80% of the novel is protected from spoilers. The rest will be available after 72 hours.
The Man I Couldn't Get Was the Male Lead, So I Married the Second Male Lead is now underway. Please add it to your library!
Sui Huan transmigrates into a novel as a background female character. She's friends with the male lead, Xu Siyi, but the two will gradually drift apart after a misunderstanding caused by the heroine's return.
Looking at the sunny, handsome male lead, who was exactly her type, Sui Huan began hatching a little plan. Even if the male lead and heroine were destined to be together, she refused to believe in fate. At least she had the advantage of getting there first, so she might as well try to win him over.
She put her plan into action and soon began pursuing the male lead. Then one day, the heroine kicked and injured the eye of Sui Huan's cat. Sui Huan went over to demand an explanation, and Xu Siyi was there too. Caught between them, he was at a loss and blurted out:
"It's just a cat."
It was raining hard that day. Sui Huan slapped him, and her rose-tinted glasses shattered.
*
On the day she broke up with Xu Siyi, Sui Huan was stranded at a bus stop. A car pulled up a short distance away, and a tall, refined-looking man came over to her with an umbrella.
Sui Huan's mind was a muddle. She imagined all kinds of possibilities, but all he did was take her home.
After spending half a month at home recovering from an illness, Sui Huan had a change of heart and accepted the blind date arranged by her family, stepping onto the path the original owner was meant to take. It wasn't until they met that she realized the man she'd bumped into by chance that day was her intended husband, Zhao Weiqing, the current head of the Zhao family.
According to the story, after the original owner married him, the couple treated each other with respect but had no emotional attachment. Sui Huan was perfectly happy with that arrangement too.
It was raining again when Xu Siyi came back to beg her to take him back. Sui Huan stood by the window with her cat in her arms, enjoying the sight of him soaked through and looking miserable. Zhao Weiqing draped a coat over her shoulders and asked, seemingly offhand:
"You're not going to see him? He'll get sick if he stands outside in weather like this all afternoon."
Sui Huan almost laughed. Unfazed, she replied, "He's just a man. Does he think he's worth it?"
*
Rumor had it that Zhao Weiqing was cursed with ill fortune and ruthless by nature. Before he even turned thirty, he was the only one left in the enormous Zhao family. Sui Huan wasn't sure if she'd discovered a side of him no one else knew, but aside from occasionally shocking her, Zhao Weiqing was flawless in every way. A marriage of convenience like this was a real windfall.
She often thought that spending the rest of her life like this wouldn't be so bad.
But she didn't notice the way Zhao Weiqing's gaze toward her was growing increasingly strange. Or rather, from the very beginning, there had been more between them than just a marriage of convenience.
Then one day, the two of them had a disagreement, and Sui Huan ignored him for several days. Feeling neglected, Zhao Weiqing thought she'd cast him aside just as easily. He dropped his gentlemanly facade in front of her, took hold of her chin so she couldn't avoid him, and asked the question he'd kept buried in his heart:
"Am I just a man to you, too?"
Theme: Become better versions of ourselves, and better partners, as we learn to get along.
Mistaking the Villain for the Gentle Second Male Lead
Crossing the Line
The Dark Moonlight Turns Lazy in a CEO Romance
Ambition
After Dumping My Fiancé, I Switched to a Sweet Romance Plot
The Fake Heiress's Plan to Save the Real Young Master [Book Transmigration]
I Couldn't Get the Male Lead, So I Married the Second Male Lead
After Going Bankrupt and Marrying the Male Side Character, He Refuses to Play by the Rules
I Can't Resist the Obsessive Male Lead's Advances
I have been unhappy with Lou Jichu for a long time. It is not you who is pregnant for ten months. It is not you who cannot sleep because of pregnancy. It is not you who has no appetite and does not want to eat because of pregnancy. It is you who has backache because of pregnancy. You will only say that I listened to A Yi. You only thought of tying A Yi with the child. You have no idea how difficult it is to be pregnant. You are an idiot.
To be honest, it is really selfish for the male protagonist to use his child to keep the female protagonist. What is the difference between using a child to tie a woman and the Xuzhou man who tied a woman with a chain? How many people have unhappy marriages but sacrifice their own personal happiness for the sake of their children. I really get angrier the more I think about it
I think it is actually better to separate, so that the heroine is no longer wanton. That is to say, in novels, most of the endings in reality that are so concerned about gains and losses are to compromise.
Sure enough, men are all the same. Only women can understand the pain of giving birth. Only a woman can understand the toll it takes on the body after giving birth. All the fruits of love are said to be used by men to kidnap women. Only a woman can empathize with a woman.
Damn, let alone the heroine, I also think Chuchu is better, much more attractive than Lou Jichu
Oh my God, I have seen such a bad story about a wealthy father's first love and an illegitimate son again. It's like eating your favorite food and finding hair in it. It makes you sick. Nine out of ten people who wear books and write articles use this kind of bad story.
The male protagonist's attitude towards children is so painful to watch.
You didn't even send the flowers in person, why did you leave them here and here?
Dog man, stop talking. Isn't it good to be a mute?
Okay, although I also prefer little fools like the heroine, let's look at the performance of the male protagonist next.