Dreaming of the Red Chamber Again

I don't know why, but this article has a schizophrenic feeling, with mental inconsistencies. It feels like the author forgets the previous settings as he writes, and often digs holes without filling them, leaving many hidden lines unfinished...

It was written before that Yingchun gave birth to a legitimate son early in the morning, and Sister Feng also gave birth to the son who was aborted in the original work because she was neglectful of the family. Why does this chapter say that they have no son?

It does feel like watching the dark history of idols hahaha

I can't believe it ended like this! Disappointment. . . The plot of the story is incomplete, the ending is inexplicable, the character of the heroine is incomplete, and the setting of the character and experience before the time travel has changed beyond recognition by the end of the story. Also, they arranged for the heroine's friends to cross over at the same time and become Xiaozhuang, the manipulator of all things, just to make the heroine qualified to marry the prince? Or is it to give the heroine the ability to save the original Red Mansion woman? What is the topic of this article? At first I thought I understood it, but by the end, I was completely confused! And the relationship between the heroine and the hero has no beginning, no climax, and no end. They just choose each other because they are suitable, and then they fall in love with each other. Can this be called complete? !

It's so inconsistent. At first it felt like a heroine, but later it turned into a farming novel. It's obvious that the person in front is very ambitious, but the person behind him doesn't want to fight.

I need to give you points, and it's well written. But it's no longer a Red Mansion fanfic. From the beginning, none of the characters, including Daiyu's family and those in the Grand View Garden, felt familiar at all. Daiyu's own personality is completely contradictory. I personally think that there is absolutely no need to borrow the name Honglou and can be changed to Qingchuang Fanren. It might look more comfortable not to borrow the name of Red Mansion.

This article is actually the best among the Red Mansions articles I have read, but unfortunately the ending can be called a dud. If the author's intention is just to give the girls a good ending, why bother to lay out so many overt and covert clues earlier? It's a pity. This text can be better.

Sir, Concubine Min is here, Concubine De has no right to send Yinxiang as a concubine.

The author works hard. Meet Daiyu's brother again. . . The words are still weird, alas. . . He is very good at observing people's behavior and commenting on the filial piety of their parents, but having Daiyu to hold and feed her is really sweat-inducing. . . Daiyu said "not paying attention" and asked what happened next. This pretense seemed unnecessary in front of close relatives. .

Xiaozhuang has never harmed her, but he can actually kill her? ~It sucks!