Transmigrating into Dream of the Red Chamber as Madam Wang

I wrote it too hastily. Is there a tiger biting me later? It's like swallowing a jujube in a hurry. What a waste of a great subject.

She couldn't help seeing Mrs. Shi taking Grandma Liu to the garden. Apart from having two useless sons, she thought the Jia family might be better than Ningguo Mansion and would not cause chaos, but Jia She was not bad at killing people just for Shi Duzi's fan. In order to sit firmly in the high position and enjoy everything, Mr. Shi manipulated his two sons but did nothing to support his grandson and granddaughter. In order to coax Baoyu, he first sacrificed Daiyu and then let his grandniece accompany Baoyu. One Baoyu harmed many daughters' families.

A novel written eight years ago? I think it's pretty good.

Fantasy! ! The attacker actually appeared again! ! !

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Yes, I'm a bit sorry for updating this after such a long time. Damn, how much love debt do you think you owe?

In fact, being reborn as Mrs. Wang is indeed a good perspective. Your novel is a bit confusing. Because there are not many people who travel through time and become the King's wife, Cheng Quan Baodai, so if you can change the article, it will be a great success. My opinion is to change it in the following places: 1. Change the paragraphs, punctuation marks and typos. It will give you a headache. In addition, it is best to remove the words "see the original work" and simply retell the words in the original work or write them in some language that everyone can understand. For example, you can write "Then the Didi Cuiting incident happened." 2. Strictly follow the rules. Don't let Jia Zheng and Mrs. Wang call Jia Dairu by his name at all times. Mrs. Wang should not greet the foreigner at any time. If you can use the maid to convey the message, use the maid to convey the message. If you cannot use the maid to convey the message, there should be at least a screen. Also, the conflict between Jia Min and Mrs. Wang arranged in the book is not appropriate. If a girl who has not yet left the government makes such a mistake, she is more likely to be beaten to death. The conflict between Mrs. Wang and Jia Min can be written as an ordinary sister-in-law conflict. 3. You can add some warm plots. For example, Mrs. Wang can use someone's birthday to invite all the children over, and everyone can play, talk and laugh together. This is very warm and not like the plot now. However, you must also be careful not to make mistakes, such as men and women eating at the same table, except Jia Baoyu. You can create something like Mrs. Wang's loving words to soothe the crazy. 4. Some important plots in the original work have not been left out, such as Yushengxiang, Qingwulixiangyuan, Telling the Heart, etc. Mrs. Wang can be added to both "Qingwu Lixiangyuan" and "Speaking to the Heart", and Mrs. Wang can educate Jia Baoyu as a close sister. 5. In the original work, Grandma Liu was teased when she entered the Grand View Garden because only the Jia family was present at that time. Now that outsiders such as Wang Taifei are teasing Grandma Liu, it seems that the Jia family has poor character. It would be better if my family closed the door and teased Grandma Liu. 6. Jia Baoyu didn't dislike the Four Books very much. He once said that except for the Four Books, they were all fabricated. Of course, he didn't like the Eight-legged Essay very much. What you are writing now about Jia Baoyu's unwillingness to learn the Four Books does not conform to the original work. What he hates is socializing with Jia Yucun and others, and talking about economics and career with Jia Yucun and others. These are what he hates. 7. It is unwise to let Wang Xifeng deal with Ping'er. For a family like the Jia family, as long as all the elders in the family are not dead, it is impossible for a concubine to stand above the main wife. Ping'er is a smart person and understands this truth, so she will only be loyal to Wang Xifeng and cannot have Wang Xifeng's ideas, because it is not in her interests. The future marriage of the concubine's children is decided by the main wife, so except for 250 like Aunt Zhao, no concubine takes herself seriously. Ping'er's behavior is all about self-protection. If Ping'er is really dead, Jia Lian will still find other concubines, so it is better to keep someone loyal. 8. Daiyu should take care of her health after entering Jia's house. Her health is too bad. But Daiyu's biggest illness is heart disease. Didn't you hear her say that she almost never slept a full night's sleep? Now Mrs. Wang has never supported Jin Yu. Mrs. Wang is the most vocal about Baoyu's marriage. Once her heart disease is eliminated, her body will naturally get better. So there is no need to let her cry and bury the flowers. You can also make up some romance between wood and stone. For example, there is an article in which Jia Huan travels through time and builds a Buddha statue for Daiyu. It would be good to say "always stay by your side and enjoy the good times for a long time". You can add some modern elements, such as Mrs. Wang taking all the girls in the Grand View Garden to do Tai Chi every morning. It will definitely be interesting. 9. It would be nice to be reborn a few years earlier and keep Jia Zhu alive. Then let Jia Zhu have more children for you to play with and educate. Moreover, Baoyu has a literary temperament, and it is too difficult for him to become an official. It is better to let Jia Zhu become an official, and Baoyu can get a more noble official position, which may be more in line with Baoyu's personality. 10. It is inappropriate to write about Baoyu visiting a brothel. Baoyu would only go out to drink wine and would not go to bed with those prostitutes. And the maid who uses incense to seduce Baoyu is also fake.

After joining V, I skipped chapters to read. I have a question, can anyone answer me? What stupid things did Baoyu do before, and why did Qingwen suddenly become his wife?

I looked up in the pit... Dad, when will it be updated?

Dad, you have been silent for a long time, is it time to explode?