A bewitching fox spirit & a cold, stern older man (he's a virgin, she isn't; set in a fictional world)
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Blurb:
Bai Jiao is a fox spirit through and through: utterly enchanting and dazzlingly beautiful. But after failing her tribulation, she transmigrates into the body of the male lead’s nemesis’s stepmother.
Her stepson is sharp-eyed, rebellious, and impossible to control.
Her stepson’s father is thirty-six, with a cold, ascetic face. He keeps people at arm’s length and cares only about work.
Bai Jiao, a total sucker for handsome faces, is struck dumb by his looks. She decides that he’s tall, handsome, and as delicious as Tang Monk’s flesh: a rare, potent tonic in human form. Why pass that up?
As for that unruly stepson, he can go cool his heels somewhere else!
Stepson: ???
Everyone in the residential compound knows that Ji Lihan’s new wife is spoiled and troublesome.
She carries a parasol to avoid the sun when she goes out, and even on a bicycle ride she tells the nanny not to let her fall. And one shopping trip is enough for her to spend the family’s entire 2,000-yuan savings!
But later, her rebellious, unruly stepson treats her every word as gospel and does exactly as she says. Ji Lihan, once so stern and unsmiling, turns into a doting husband!
Please add my new novel, The Delicate Little Flower Spirit in the 1980s, to your to-read list. You can find it in my author profile.
Blurb:
A pure yet alluring, beautiful flower spirit & a cold, haughty, fearsome man (both are virgins)
Bai Zhu is a little flower spirit, with an enchanting shape and breathtaking beauty. But she’s delicate and hard to care for: she wilts in direct sunlight and gets sick in the rain.
After taking human form, she needs a parasol whenever she goes out and refuses to walk outside on rainy days. She sleeps only on the softest mattress, and not only does she insist on the finest food, she also needs her fruit juiced.
One day, she transmigrates to the resource-scarce 1980s and becomes a cannon-fodder supporting character in a melodramatic period novel.
The daughter of a deceased comrade of a high-ranking officer, she is kindly taken in by the Lu family. But she abuses their kindness, wreaks havoc in their home, and does everything she can to marry the officer’s son: the cold, fearsome older brother of the novel’s heroine.
In the end, the Lu family kicks her out, and the cold, fearsome man torments her mercilessly.
Bai Zhu can only weep and plead, "I get it, I get it! I’ll leave as soon as I’ve saved enough money!"
The daughter of the Lu family’s deceased comrade has been brought back from the countryside.
Everyone in the residential compound comes to take a look. The girl has snow-white skin, rosy cheeks, and unbelievable beauty.
It doesn’t take long for them to realize she’s even more delicate and troublesome than the Princess and the Pea.
Everyone shakes their heads. The Lu family has surely taken on a huge headache.
But the Lu family ends up treating the girl like a princess.
Even more astonishing, the Lu family’s usually aloof, proud, and famously uninterested-in-women cold-faced terror seems like a different person around her.
Bai Zhu chokes on her food, and the cold-faced terror looks displeased. The very next day, he replaces the nanny.
On a rainy day, Bai Zhu refuses to get out of the car. The cold-faced terror is so angry the veins stand out on his forehead, but he still bends down, picks her up, and carries her home through the rain.
Bai Zhu is so delicate that she needs the softest bed. The cold-faced terror scolds her, then turns around and asks someone to buy the most expensive mattress from overseas.
Bai Zhu has a special talent: even the fussiest flowers thrive in her hands. The several rare varieties she grows become so sought-after that people fight over them. She is even invited to the first national horticultural expo, where she wins the gold medal!
At last, she has saved enough to leave the Lu family~
But the cold-faced terror traps her in his strong arms, his hot lips against her ear as he growls, "Be good. You’re not allowed to leave!"
The man has broad shoulders, a narrow waist, long legs, and a devastatingly handsome face. His abundant masculine energy has long left Bai Zhu drooling.
But getting close to this man brings bad luck!
Bai Zhu furrows her brow and thinks it over. Then, with her pink lips parted, she coaxes him, "How about you kiss me? Maybe if you do, I’ll..."
Damn it, bad man, you’re hurting me!
Theme: Strive to survive, no matter what life throws at you.
Review of the first novel I bought with money The sensory contrast between the front and back is strong. The plot logic in the front is relatively good, but the popularity in the back is very bad, the plot is messy, the male and female protagonists are falling apart, and there are always hints of sex, which is very disgusting. The plot is very different from the previous 15 chapters. It becomes more and more confusing as you go to the end. The plot that could have been completed in 40 chapters has been condensed into 90 chapters. The extra chapter is very long and has no new ideas. You can roughly get the main idea of the following lines just by looking at the previous line. The extras have a sense of déjà vu that is made up of words. The plot is average and very ordinary. After watching the first few, you can probably guess what will happen next. Then, the guess was verified, and the plot was basically the same as the guessed one. It has no heartbeat at all, it's just a mindless sweet & mindless white text, with time-travel routines added. How much were you looking forward to when you watched it earlier, but how disappointed were you when you watched the plot later? It's totally not worth getting into. It's just a superficial attraction. It's all appearance and no core. The plot is really unsatisfactory, and I particularly hate the occasional hints of sex, which is a waste of words. It's far from the romantic counterattack I imagined. Extremely vulgar... Maybe it's the sunk cost mentality that's at work, because I've already spent money on it, but I still watched it with a blank expression. I always thought that there would be surprises later and that the writing would be very good, but a few chapters were not in good condition. But,..., The rest of the movie is still not satisfactory. Some parts are so embarrassing that it almost makes me sick. The plot is getting more and more clumsy, and there are very few counterattacks. Sometimes the plot is purely for describing do. People who watch it have goosebumps all over the place. They are very disappointed. The senses are very bad. People who like period-style plots should be careful. . The heroine's careerism has long been thrown out of the window. It was really a mistake. The name is unique, the copywriting is brilliant, but the plot is messy. It feels like one-fifth of it is a novice plot with a low number of words. In particular, the supporting role of the nanny and the original heroine as the control group were portrayed as "embarrassing cancer" more than once. Very novice writing style. It was very awkward and awkward to write. The characters of the male protagonist and female protagonist also fell apart in the later stages, which I didn't like. The most outrageous thing is that sometimes some deliberate contrasts are interspersed, and the supporting characters are forcibly intellectualized in order to highlight the sweet love between the male and female protagonists, and the supporting characters' lives are deliberately written to be very tragic and unbearable. There is no sense of experience in watching it, and the more I watch the mentally retarded plot, the more I want to vomit blood. The male and female protagonists seem to be quite broken and changeable, especially the love interactions. I always feel embarrassed that cancer is coming soon. It's really a stupid piece of writing. It's really not worth getting into, the expected plot didn't happen, and unexpected and bloody plots do happen quite often!!!!! I can't express my disappointment with this novel in just a few words?!!! All in all, I was very disappointed. The plot was disappointing. After all, I was wrong.
I like it, I feel like I can read another 100 chapters
When will the chapter on the delicate little flower essence be published?
The era of vixens should be ancient times, why is it modern?
Although it feels a bit deliberate to wear it back, it still looks great!
I'm a native dog, I'm so cute
Very nice(??ω??)??
Finished spreading flowers!!! Very nice, recommended
Nice! Looking forward to the new article
Come on! It can be seen that great progress has been made from the beginning to the end.