I Fed the Deeply Devoted, Paranoid Evil God

It's tasteless to eat, and it's a pity to throw it away. This is my opinion on this article. Interesting settings and cute interactions, but the author's writing skills are still not enough. The plot is really poor. It's too far-fetched for my liking. The secondary characters are too stereotyped. The finale also left me speechless. The description of the horror scenes is detailed enough, but the atmosphere is a bit weak... In short, it feels like spending money is a bit anticlimactic. Is it because of the double game? As for a certain plot alone, I still like it very much, but the overall situation is really not very good. I like the small plot of going to the fragmented world.

It's tasteless to eat, but it's a pity to abandon it. The world line is too big and the whole situation collapses. The resistance of human groups in the apocalyptic situation is almost useless. The whole story is driven by the protagonist alone. The emotional line is also inexplicable and the ending is too fast. It's a very good idea. It's better to just have this development system without adding the apocalypse. The villain is cute, but that's all.

It's a mess, the emotional lines become more and more perfunctory, and what follows is all written. It's the first time I've seen a novel where Gong doesn't have his own name until the end, and he still disguises his appearance to Shou. They are only together because of the plot arrangement, and there is no sense of sincerity. The ending was so rushed, so many chapters were lost in something that could be written in less than a hundred chapters. The author's writing is obviously not bad, but he actually gave out a foot wrap!

I finally finished reading it, and I felt a little disappointed. I went back to the details page to read it, and found that there were only more than 800,000 words. The theme of this novel is really good. It is easy to write three to four million words. I don't know if it was because of too many bad reviews in the early stage and the recent epidemic that made people upset. The ending seemed very rushed. I can feel that the author laid a lot of groundwork in the early stage but failed to achieve it. This ending may be good for the world and the protagonist in the book, but as a reader, I am really curious about the battle in the rice field world, the adventure in the doll shop, what will happen when entering the Elysian World, even the five-star dish rewards, the secret of the building where the villain is located, and whether there is any metaphor in the fact that the author keeps calling the room number on the fourth floor as 30. These are all invisible. I still like this novel, but it is a pity that it could have become a classic. . . Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to the author. The world he writes is very close to reality but also adds a lot of kindness and integrity. The tricks he gives to the protagonist in the early stage are not too outrageous. This kind of ability that can only be used at a cost has not been seen in a novel for a long time. Personally, I really like Madam's supernatural novels, and I hope to see more of Madam's wonderful works in the future.

I feel bad. It hurts to watch. I think it's okay for the author to describe how the protagonist is calmer and smarter than other residents or SWAT police (after all, the protagonist's halo, it doesn't hurt to stand out). However, I always find this description uncomfortable. The protagonist is talking about how to do it in his heart, such as the resurrection of a corpse doll to kill people. The protagonist says that I must go in, especially The policeman thought: What's the use of coming here? The description here highlights that the protagonist guesses that the monster has a limit on killing, and there are rules for killing. If you break this rule, you will kill people unscrupulously, which will be very dangerous (he is very speechless. At this time, you, the protagonist, can't spend 30 seconds talking about your guess, it's not like there is no intercom. , It's not that the network is closed and cannot be contacted, why are you so retarded?) I believe in the protagonist's aura, but I don't think those special police officers are so retarded. I believe in the water quality of our country's military (it makes me really uncomfortable to see it!!!) There are obviously many situations where the protagonist can express some of his conjectures, I feel that the residents, Professor Tian, the SWAT captain, etc. Have all been severely reduced in intelligence and are seriously inconsistent with the character image (forgive me for being arbitrary and only seeing these, I can't stand the article anymore, and I can't stand it after reading this T_T) I just feel that some plots are very blunt, and some things are obvious It only takes less than 30 seconds to say it, and the effect is completely different (at that time, the protagonist did not have no prestige. Whether it was fighting monsters in the corridor of the community at the beginning and slashing the monster's arm, or later being pulled by the monster into the dream to rescue other people, these things have greatly increased the protagonist's prestige, such as this time The corpse doll suddenly kills people. It is because of these various plots that Professor Tian allows the protagonist to enter the building without the help of the special police, especially when government personnel are involved (even if I didn't watch it later, it is not the end of the world, nor is it difficult for the government to maintain the world's network. (Persistence), I think this part of the description is too blunt and does not fully demonstrate the characteristics of the government. Just the participation of special police is not enough (maybe the author described this part in his heart)) I just feel very uncomfortable. Why is it like this? It is obvious that it can be said but there is no time to say it. Those special features The police are not idiots who only know how to attack. I don't like this kind of serious deception of the people around me. What's going on in the protagonist's mind: How do monsters kill people... Ah, I'm going to try it. Then how the supporting character is in danger and is on the verge of death, and the protagonist appears in time to save the public (so speechless). This is something I can't accept no matter what! ! ! Forgive me for complaining in the middle of the night (there are many things to complain about)

Is there really no one to scold you for being so watery? I caught up on it as soon as it came out. The update was too slow, so I picked it up. I finished it today and tell me what you wrote about it? What was explained clearly? Where is the emotional drama? I only saw two people who had no feelings at all and fell in love in a hurry. In order to develop the plot, I was convinced that I spent time and money to read a weak and stinky literary circle. That's not how money is drawn...

It feels like the protagonist's journey to becoming a strong person is over as soon as he starts. The setting and plot are pretty good, but the follow-up to the emotional line is too rushed.

I finally finished reading it... This is the first time I have seen such a weak emotional drama. I didn't know his name until the finale. It took more than 200 chapters to talk about it. I can still write so many chapters, one from the perspective of the morning light and the other from the villain's perspective. Things that are obviously done in one chapter must be so long-winded. It makes me impatient. I really don't recommend it!

The front part feels pretty good, but what's written on the back? It's too late

The idea is really great, but it's a pity that the foreshadowing was not completed. The doll copy/Elysium/Straw/are all basically brushed off in the last few chapters, which is a pity.