I Can't Believe I'm Not Human Anymore!

I don't know if it's the author's lack of perseverance or some other reason. I started reading the Evil God and then moved on to this one. Both of these books have one characteristic: the rhythm and writing are good at the beginning, and the world view, scenes, and foreshadowing are relatively large. However, in the middle and late stages, they begin to completely fall apart, and some of the wording is quite embarrassing. So you don't have the patience to write? It was still a novella according to the outline, but I couldn't control the momentum of writing a long novel, so I could only end it in a hurry, and there was no time to wrap up the foreshadowing. Or rather! The front is ghostwritten, and the back is written in large letters? This is my feeling after reading these two articles! I don't give negative scores, and I rarely give negative scores. I still want to see if other completed books have the same rhythm.

It's amazing that this novel doesn't even have a kiss

After reading it, I want to leave a long comment. I like the copywriting very much, but the writing style is not good. I read Qianfang Gaoneng, and probably read three copies of Qianfang Gaoneng. I think it was the first unlimited work that scared me into a cold sweat, especially the moment when the delivery man opened his eyes. But then I didn't finish it because it was a serial and it was too long. This article feels that the foreshadowing is not very deep, and the description of the battle scenes is not good. I feel that it is not as good as the high-energy writing in the previous article. And I think more work can be done on the emotional line of attack and reception. The high energy in front seems to be the emotional line for no reason. This is also a bit far-fetched. Moreover, I felt that the article was a bit too blunt, especially the part where I suddenly decided to enter the entertainment industry, which made me a little embarrassed. To put it simply, I like the subject matter very much, but the author needs to improve his writing skills. This book originally seemed to have a great world view, but the plot and writing style are a bit unsustainable. The more you write, the more progress you will make~ I hope you will write better articles in the future! Come on

I've finished reading it, and after thinking about the last chapter, I still want to share my thoughts after reading it. (Involving spoilers) When I read the text, I thought it was quite cute. After reading some more, I found it to be really good. Anyway, I quite liked the ghost stories and thought they were quite immersive, so I planned to read the whole thing. However, I was really disappointed later on. It felt like the chapter from the moment the protagonist entered the entertainment industry started to just use the outline to perfunctory. It seemed that the author didn't really want to write, so he just followed the program to write the plot perfunctorily. At first I felt that the movie was so cute and cute, but later I felt that it was so silly that it didn't look like the protagonist or an ordinary passerby. It was obvious that the golden finger was quite wide open, but I could hardly feel the power of the movie. The characters were not very three-dimensional, and they looked like actors with no acting skills going through the motions. The reason that kept me reading was that I wanted to see how the author dealt with why Shou got such a big golden finger and was loved by Gao from the beginning. I thought it would be the reincarnation of some ancient monster or the reincarnation of Gong's old acquaintance, but it turned out that the destiny of heaven was set as the reason, and it's the same as saying it or not? My head is really pounding and I just want to ask, why do you choose to accept it? Then I hope the author can be calmer when writing the article. As for the Tian singer and the female store manager, the names of various supporting characters changed. Anyway, after reading it at the end, I didn't know whether the agent was named Chen Feng or Zhang Feng by the author. It was quite affecting the viewing. Maybe it will be confusing if there are too many characters and too many dialogues, but this is the first time I have seen such confusion. In addition, I saw other readers also mentioned the problem of live broadcasts, that is, the audience's writing is too stubborn. The gradual live broadcast is for the audience to accept this magical world, so the description of the audience should also go from disbelief to a little bit of belief at the beginning, and the barrage should gradually become a conflict between believers and disbelievers. As a result, the author is all about writing that the audience will not believe it anyway... The official attitude is also very confusing. I still hope that the author can think more about it when setting it. This setting is not logical. Then there is the entertainment industry talent show. There is no conflict, no plot ups and downs, and no emergencies. I feel that there is no need to write several chapters because there is no plot... Finally, I want to say one more thing, the confession of attack and acceptance. Because that part is already in the outline, it feels like the confession has gone through a process without any disturbance. I feel like the author likes to write something like "the relationship heats up again", "admiration for XX more", "XX becomes more famous"... I can't remember exactly how to write it, but it probably means this. I feel that these words are very similar to writing essays when I was a student, because it is only 81,000 words and I can't go into details, so I just use summary words to explain, but the novel keeps repeating these words. Of course, you definitely don't have to change it according to what I said. I just want to express my opinion after reading it. I don't want to complain about it. I hope the author can improve in his next article. By the way, I feel that the author's horror stories are very immersive. Can you try to write some supernatural and fantasy plots? I hope the author will work hard?

Ah, the boss fights in these two chapters made me embarrassed hhhhh

I hope they will always be happy

"Difficulty" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ male