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He transmigrated into a plot-driven power fantasy and became Lou Yaxing, an elder of the Yuwu Sect: an otherworldly, elegant, and utterly self-sacrificing saint.
How should one describe Lou Yaxing?
Rather than saying he was good at heart, it would be more accurate to say he was overflowing with compassion, especially when it came to raising children. As he put it: "What bad intentions could a child possibly have?"
When he saw his junior disciple pinning his senior disciple to the ground and beating him until his face was bruised and swollen, he immediately locked the junior disciple up without a word.
When he heard that the junior disciple had lifted his junior sister's skirt, he was so disappointed that he hung the boy up and gave him a thorough whipping.
Afterward, looking sorrowful, he told the junior disciple, "You've disappointed me so much!"
Little did he know that nothing was more devastating than hurting someone in the name of doing what's best for them.
But now he's become Lou Yaxing. A self-sacrificing saint? Not a chance. Time to embrace the law of the jungle!
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His senior disciple sobbed, "Master, my junior brother hit me!"
Lou Yaxing lowered his eyes. "Pathetic. You can't even beat someone younger than you? Go hit him back. If you lose, I'll beat you myself."
Senior disciple: QWQ
His junior sister looked aggrieved. "Master, my senior brother lifted my skirt!"
Lou Yaxing yawned. "Did I give you the Heaven-Piercing Sword so you could hang it from your belt? Go cut him down. If you can't hit him, don't wear skirts anymore."
Junior sister: QAQ
Ten years later, Lou Yaxing led his sect through a million-strong siege by the Immortal Alliance and made it the number-one sect in the immortal realm.
Every disciple under his command, man or woman, was a formidable leader in their own right.
But where no one could see, Lou Yaxing was pinned to the bed by one of his wicked disciples, unable to move.
Warm breath brushed his neck, and the man chuckled. "Didn't Master say that if I could beat you, I could do whatever I wanted? Well, I'm going to do you, Master..."
The original story's number-one villain, top X the bottom who taught his disciple to dig his own master's grave
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Blurb: In his previous life, Dai Ling grew up in an orphanage. When the apocalypse came, he awakened an SSS-rank special ability, cured his disability, and formed a top-tier team. He thrived in the City of Civilization.
Then his biological parents showed up and took him back. They also had an adopted son.
Dai Ling gave this family everything, thinking he would finally find the affection he'd always longed for. Instead, they subjected him to endless moral blackmail.
"Your team has so many people. What's the harm in helping our company with a few missions?"
"The company's research lab desperately needs a few first-level crystal cores. You're so strong, so go get some for us."
"Your little brother caught a virus and needs a blood transfusion to survive. You're his older brother. Can't you save him?"
In the end, he agreed to give his little brother a blood transfusion. But his parents and his so-called fiance drugged his food, then cut out his ability core during the procedure and transplanted it into their fake young master. Dai Ling died miserably in his hospital bed.
Reborn, Dai Ling returned to the day he first met them.
The scumbag family was right in front of him. Would he acknowledge them?
Dai Ling smiled faintly. "Of course."
Only this time, things went a little differently.
On the first day after acknowledging his family, Dai Ling was kidnapped. "Mom, Dad, the enemy has captured me and wants three hundred billion in ransom! I'm your real son. You can't just leave me to die!"
On the second day, his kidneys failed. "Little brother, we're a match. All I need is one kidney to survive. We're brothers, so you'll save me, right?"
On the third day, a horde of zombies surrounded him. He knocked on his fiance's car window. "Don't you love me? Open the door and save me!"
His scumbag parents, little brother, and fiance: ...
Can we take back this family recognition?
#Teammates' daily question: Why has the boss been unlucky every day since reuniting with his family?#
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As Dai Ling lay dying in his previous life, the only person by his side was an ordinary man with no special abilities. Even when he found food in a sea of zombies, he always gave it to Dai Ling first.
Dai Ling glanced at the man's handsome, aloof profile and thought, This time, I'll take care of you.
But as he cared for the man, he watched him single-handedly wipe out every zombie in an entire city and froze. So much for being ordinary!
Theme: When life has dreams, the world has hope
I'm quite curious why this kind of monster is male by default. It seems that it is rare to take male supplements. This female character is not very smart, and she starts to care about her appearance at an inappropriate time. So in a sense, this book is quite male-friendly🤨☝
The setting of the monsters in this chapter is good. It is not too simple to make readers think they are fools, and it is not too difficult to understand. The problem that can be brought up is the problem of Jiang's character before. I don't know if I will revise the article. Next time, I can try important supporting characters such as Jiang to explain to other secondary supporting characters. This way, the character will not be ruined in the process of explaining to the readers. After all, Jiang's socialization level seems to be a little higher than Lou hh [Glasses]
The first part is very good, but towards the end it feels like I have been rushing. I also tried hard to explain things clearly, but that was all. It would be better if the final content was more detailed and divided into more chapters to describe more detailed things. Author, would you consider revising the article?
The little girl was thinking hard and couldn't figure it out. She humbly asked for advice. Why is there two thousand words today?
"He Can Like Anyone" 🐶 Sure enough, I knew that Xiaowen packaged herself like a heroine of a bitter drama, but in fact she couldn't do it at all. Every day when she opens her eyes, she becomes a hero, regardless of whether she sees men, women, children, chickens, ducks, geese, or dogs. Going up there is just competition, competition, self-proclaimed palace, and some shameless jealousy every day. I call it falling into my own world.
Will Mo go offline? It's not appropriate to be unreasonable and reckless. I really don't like it [cheek holding] 💔
You found out so early, it seems you are really a reserve for the main table 🐶🌹
I think the description of the details is a bit stiff and the characters don't interact well. For example, it's normal for the male protagonist in the original text to have a halo, but Jiang, as his partner in the previous life, is much different from the young and inexperienced Wen, which is a bit unreasonable. Of course, the previous article did not explain the cooperation mode between the two, which is not completely unreasonable. It's just that the dialogue is a bit like a puppet, not very smart. Later, Mo has to behave more facially, vent a lot of emotions, irrationally, and does not have the qualities of a gold list revealing sect. If this place collapses As for the character design, it goes without saying that if this performance is in line with the character design, then the sect is not that strong, and it is somewhat inconsistent with the setting. And if Jiang's setting is that he has no brains and can only fight, then it is unreasonable to stand between the two protagonists when he conflicts with others. So I think there is no problem with the plot in general, but the interaction of the characters is a bit stiff, not three-dimensional and flexible, a bit like a puppet on a string, reacting for the sake of the plot, as if the puppet's twisting violates ergonomics [vomiting blood]
My bestie, I finally have someone to accompany me 🥺
I always feel that Lou Yaxing is not like a person who is shy when seeing other people's naked bodies. It's so weird. Take another bite. It's so weird. Take another bite. It's so weird. Take another bite. It's weird. Take another bite. It's weird. Take another bite. It's weird. Take another bite. It's weird. Take another bite.