[Western Crossover] Social Anxiety and the League Are Incompatible

I really like the description of the emotional line in this book, especially the part between the Red Son and Lord Superman, the song about the night outside Moscow played on the piano, and the monologue of Lord Superman. Sometimes the short length is more brilliant. The only flaw is that due to some important foreshadowing that had to be skipped in the early stage, it seems that the relationship between ee and Da Chao has been developed at 4 times speed, which makes it look unnatural. The ending was not very friendly. It was originally just a honeymoon trip for ee and Dachao to throw away some of the troublemakers, but in the end it became ee's one-man show. The flesh-and-blood characters described in the previous article: Mrs. Yang who runs the convenience store, Teacher Black Bolt who is responsible for the students' headaches, Bruce, who is the third member of the single father chat group - I believe they have become ee's friends - have all become "soulless" transparent people in the sandbox, and are not mentioned again until the end. About their follow-up and emotions, they all disappeared like the wind as if nothing had happened, and were never mentioned again. Simon, Puppy, Bob and Leah only appear in a dozen or even dozens of lines when the world collapses and they have to escape. Probably still affected by the interruption, it opened high and went low. The plot lines in the early and mid-term are really exciting. In Caleb's branch line, the animation and comics of the Lord of Destiny are very interesting. In Ophelia's branch line, the stories that happened on the three continents made up of them made me laugh constantly; I like Simon's branch line the most. The relationship inherited by the three father and son is very well described. I was deeply impressed by the differences and conflicts before and after Simon's fate was changed. The five years of traveling like waking up from a dream are quite romantic. From the later stages, these distinctive stories no longer exist, leaving only the rush to finish. Some foreshadowings have not been revealed. What is the x academy in Leah's memory that scares her? Who was her friend who escaped from X Academy and was captured again? There are too many stories about her that are not expanded upon. In addition, there are many doubts: in the previous article, Simon is a shining soul recognized by the Lord of Destiny after changing his destiny. At this time, I thought that this Simon was just one of many parallel worlds that chose a path without falling. However, at the end, it was shown that this is a sandbox world created by the Lord of Destiny. Simon, Bob and Caleb are part of the Lord of Destiny. So is Simon in every parallel world a part of the Master of Destiny, or is Simon in this sandbox just an example? Ee, congratulations on getting rid of your fate. Now you are a family of eight. I believe you will live a life that may be annoying sometimes, but will never lack laughter. Ps. I am very curious, will there be another Kryptonian orphan landing on Earth in this parallel universe more than ten years later? What story will happen between the two Kryptonian orphans?

Perfect! It can be said to be the masterpiece of fan fiction in recent years. Born out of the original work, it also combines the essence of British and American dramas, various laughs and hell jokes from the fandom. At the same time, the author's own thoughts and explanations are introduced. Sometimes it feels like what I am reading is not a fan work but a published book. I really hope there are more types like this in the novel world! Instead of simply focusing on all kinds of inexplicable love, Hongzi's part of the plot is simply integrated. (But there are too few daily parts, 1551, I want to see some incompatible daily routines)

The last time I watched Chapter 98, I paused it, so I didn't really feel like catching up. A few days ago, I saw the end and started reading again from the first chapter. The previous chapter is quite interesting. The detailed relationship between Avocado and Superman is actually a bit interesting. I mean, for the first time, the reader's perspective coincides with the perspective of a passerby in the article. The relationship between the two protagonists suddenly develops by leaps and bounds without everyone knowing about it. However, I am not criticizing, but I recalled the plot of the two getting along. In fact, there are traces to follow. In addition, the article is very different. It was very obvious that the Lord of Destiny had watched Superman for a long time. I thought that this world had been restarted, a world that the Lord of Destiny carefully cut and stitched (animation + comics, the essence of both), so although the two had no memories of the past, love flowed in every look in their eyes, even though the two people's identities did not even match up at the beginning. Starting from Chapter 99, the writing was actually a little rushed, and the impression was that the plot line was explained in an ordinary way. I didn't expect that the world is a sandbox. I think it would be okay to reveal this with the red super... I don't know if there is a problem with my understanding. It should be that the lord is ahead of the red super, right? Is the world of Lord Superman also a sandbox? However, it was later said that only two souls, Superman and Ophelia, were born in the sandbox, which left me quite confused. In other words, all the characters who appeared before are all low-dimensional souls limited by the sandbox world. The only ones who can break free and are not cut from avocados are Superman and Ophelia. Speaking of Ophelia, the incident of taking Ophelia away actually happened at the end, which I didn't expect, and it's also very interesting! Finally, I originally wanted to say that Guoguao wanted a job that did not require contact with people at the beginning of the novel, but it turned out that after taking over the Book of Destiny from his own perspective, he was still facing a large number of people. It was so miserable... As I was typing, I suddenly realized that they really weren't lying... To the Lord of Destiny, these are just stories, paper people... But people can also have feelings for paper people. Fortunately, in the end, the paper person became a spirit, and Avocado and his whole family immigrated beautifully, yay!

[Chigua] You can't tell the truth after spending money here

I want to see the future talk, I really really need the extra story, Martha, Jonathan picked up the little superman of this world, the future Zhenglian, and how the children grow up [Let me be healthy] [Let me be healthy]

Teacher, are you considering updating the daily routine of "Destiny Family"? [Poor] [Poor] [Poor] Family fun is really super annoying

Extra, extra, please do some extra, please, please do some extra, please...

The first half is particularly attractive, the characters are very interesting, and the son and daughter also have a sense of presence. But the development of the second half felt chaotic, and to be honest, it was a bit baffling.

Finished spreading flowers! ! ! Are there any extras? I really want to watch them.

This is the second update... Please give me a sequel.