[Because I didn't have a clear direction when I started writing, the plot and character development along the timeline couldn't be made to work. I revised this story many times and scrapped 300,000 to 400,000 words, but in the end I still went beyond the free-reading period and had to make it paid. I failed the readers who had been waiting, and I sincerely apologize.]
[After studying storytelling techniques and sorting out my ideas, I created a new outline that reflects what I originally wanted to express. Although it retains some elements, the core of the story is now completely different from this one, so it can only be published as a new work. This story has therefore been abandoned.]
[There is a pit ahead. Please turn back. I bow again in apology.]
New novel: "Sword Immortal Pei Muyun," starting Sunday.
Blurb:
[Sheng Xiyi] transmigrates into a book and is taken in as a disciple by an old Daoist.
A hundred years later, he is known alongside the original novel's hero, the savior [Shi Qingdeng], as one of the two strongest cultivators in the cultivation world.
They are also close friends.
The kind who are secretly in love with each other.
But then a prophecy of salvation includes Sheng Xiyi's name.
--If the two of them do not sink themselves into the Abyss, the evil dragon will destroy the world, and the Three Realms will be doomed.
The two plan to sacrifice themselves together to save the world, but before they can, Shi Qingdeng suddenly dies.
The Three Realms are doomed.
*
The day the evil dragon appears.
The cultivation world's number one beauty steps onto the Immortal Altar, using a spell to buy them time!
The cultivators resolve to fight the evil dragon to the death!
Lightning flashes and thunder booms. The evil dragon roars into view in the clouds and spreads its claws!
---It snatches Sheng Xiyi and flies off.
The cultivators: ...Wait, isn't the world supposed to end?
The number one beauty: That's all the evil dragon can do?!
Onlookers: So, have we settled who is more beautiful, Daoist Sheng or the number one beauty?
Sheng Xiyi: This aura... Is the evil dragon Shi Qingdeng?!
*
Inside a cave, the evil dragon takes human form and makes a move on him.
Sheng Xiyi chooses to lie flat.
Because he once placed a curse on Shi Qingdeng.
A curse that would make them both unable to control themselves if Shi Qingdeng ever fell for him.
Well, that was a case of bringing it on himself.
---But as that familiar presence drew near, it smiled at Sheng Xiyi and said:
"My older brother just died. Why aren't you wearing white, sister-in-law?"
?!!
CP:
Bottom [Sheng Xiyi]: A cool, aloof beauty with a salty disposition, too lazy to fight, but ruthless when he does; a decisive and distant Daoist.
Top [Shi Qingdeng]: Multiple personalities; I'm me, my younger brother is me, and my younger brother is my rival in love; a domineering, compassionate, handsome dragon god.
* [Fake love triangle], [one-on-one, mutually doting couple, happy ending], [mutual pining], a [sweet redemption story] that toes the line of melodrama.
**Content warning: [Fake love triangle] -- The top shows symptoms of dissociative identity disorder and eventually integrates and recovers. The top believes the other personality is his stillborn twin brother [but he isn't].
* My stories feature [a top who loves the bottom very much, and a bottom who loves the top very much]. If you can't accept that, this story isn't for you.
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Theme: Treat mental illness properly. Seek timely treatment and recover soon.
If I still have this character, can I open a pre-collection and collect it? Just prepare to watch this again.
Don't be fooled. You can update it after the epidemic is better. Just don't be fooled.
How are you feeling? Curiosity, like, pity, ugh [crying]
Come on, I like you. I will read whatever you write.
I guess it's been a long time since I updated it, so I automatically solved v.
Crying cat cat head, it's been a long time since I saw how to solve v
Why solve v, shocked
Emm, luckily I watched it to the end, otherwise I would have been depressed.
I think there is something wrong with this monk, like an undercover agent from the West. I feel that he is inducing other people in the team, and the target is Brother Deng. He still wants to induce Brother Deng to recognize the Buddha and become a Buddha (the kind from the West)
Brother Deng, I hate you for being a piece of wood! I'll just be stunned. Long Er is so cute. He looks like a little Er.
Although, I always feel that this bald ass has bad intentions
If I still have this character, can I open a pre-collection and collect it? Just prepare to watch this again.
Don't be fooled. You can update it after the epidemic is better. Just don't be fooled.
How are you feeling? Curiosity, like, pity, ugh [crying]
Come on, I like you. I will read whatever you write.
I guess it's been a long time since I updated it, so I automatically solved v.
Crying cat cat head, it's been a long time since I saw how to solve v
Why solve v, shocked
Emm, luckily I watched it to the end, otherwise I would have been depressed.
I think there is something wrong with this monk, like an undercover agent from the West. I feel that he is inducing other people in the team, and the target is Brother Deng. He still wants to induce Brother Deng to recognize the Buddha and become a Buddha (the kind from the West) Brother Deng, I hate you for being a piece of wood! I'll just be stunned. Long Er is so cute. He looks like a little Er.
Although, I always feel that this bald ass has bad intentions