The Empire's Legend

How ugly. I know some people will say, why bother watching it if it's ugly? Respect the author. But ugly is ugly. It tastes like chewing wax.

Thank you Chu for your opinion In fact, I don't know how to write emotional articles, and I don't know how to depict emotions. I just tell a story and what it contains. I am used to letting readers feel it for themselves. I always feel that everyone sees things differently, laugh

The entry point is very good. It is rare to see a story that chooses that era as the background. It also describes the weirdness and ups and downs of the palace struggle. Ah~~~ In the dark and vast era, heroes and beauties appeared one by one. I like it. Maybe the author has his own considerations? I personally feel that the whole article is a bit more plain. If it is a legend, it is best to have that sparkling feeling. You can refer to Qiu Li's "Sword Soul and Qin Heart" and try to write a story as beautiful and exciting as possible. Highlight the main line of Diranka's love and exaggerate it more, because tragedy (actually, this legend is not a tragedy, after all, it has an imaginative ending) is always expressed through profound contrast. The previous flowers were just for the moment of tearing; the previous happiness was only to express the despair and helplessness of being destroyed. Haha, please don't be offended if you talk nonsense. Looking forward to seeing your new works

Not bad, a very masculine article.

I really like this epic beginning. Collected, take a look.

Thank you, Mr. Moji, for your appreciation. Why is the fire kid so sad~~

Yes, I speak Cantonese There are too many characters, and I don't want to write too long, haha

The ending is very interesting, but I feel that many characters are only exposed and not written anymore, but the story is fully told.

Do adults speak vernacular?

I like this kind of heroine!