
The Castle Inn
古堡旅馆
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Khan, I watched it secretly at work that day. Now make up points. The idea is clever. Come on MM^o^
Back to Chu: Thanks in advance for your support. There are indeed not many objective descriptions of the environment and atmosphere. The reason is that I want to use situations to create the atmosphere. Besides, I never intended to have a too weird atmosphere. After all, there are actually other guests in the hotel, not just one person, so I think the light mystery is enough, but I still take note of your opinions^^ Hui Qingmei In fact, I did intend to make the relationship between Lawyer and No. 2 A little blurry. In the design, No. 2 Was already dead. In the end, scientists re-created No. 2, The lawyer. It can be understood that they are the same person. They have the same genes, and No. 2 Who remains in the vine is just an obsession, just like No. 1 Wandering in the corridor. The ending is like this because I have been thinking about whether to write a sequel to describe the incident where the employer found the doctor, laugh~~
The text is very concise and the concept is good. It's just that the frequent switching between first-person and third-person is a bit unaccustomed. Can the entire article be told from the first-person perspective? In addition, the night in the castle can also deepen the atmosphere and gradually reveal tension from the ordinary. Come on! ^_^
Sweat, a mess of typos... I'm sorry... I mean, it feels similar. By the way, Xiao Pai Yi Bian, although it is novel to write the story from both perspectives of the lawyer and me, it can easily lead to misunderstandings. I always thought that this arrangement would have an ending at the end. In addition, the relationship between the lawyer and No. 2 Seems not to be clearly explained. Please don't be offended if it's a bit of a humble opinion.
Ah? ? ? ? What do you mean, sir? ? ?
It looks good, can you thank me for a few more articles?