I Hear You Want to Win Me Over

I've finished reading it. I've only read the leader's book before, and I really like the Ke series, so I read this one. I liked the beginning very much, a natural disaster creature that is stronger than human imagination, but has a pure love brain. I like this setting very much. However, I was a bit disappointed in the middle and latter parts. Maybe there were too few words, there was no expansion, and there was not enough foreshadowing. I felt that the parts about cultivating immortality and the other side appeared a bit abruptly. The setting of Ho Luo being single-handedly executed seems a bit redundant. As for what was said in the comment section before, which one is He Luozha or Zhuchen's scum, I think there is no such thing as scumbag or scumbag. As for Zhu Yimeng, I also think her decision is okay.

I still feel that Ho Luo was Ho Luo and Ah Xing was Ah Xing at that time. The rest is another story.

It's obviously very beautiful in front of me, so why do you want to belittle yourself? Why the final change of style? If you want to write about fast travel, you can just open another book? Wouldn't it be better to do both without delay? How good it is in the front, but how uncomfortable it is to be punished alone. In the few chapters of Fast Travel Small World, I suddenly felt like I didn't believe in love. He actually paid it off. I thought it would be solo star chasing later. On the contrary... It's even more uncomfortable. Choked. Not as good as be. After reading this, I imagined that later on, Zhu Chen caught up with Shan Zhu and even caught up with Shan Zhu. After meeting again, the two were indifferent. Zhu Chen understood that Shan Zhu was not He Luo. What he wanted was not Shan Zhu or the former He Luo. What he wanted was that he would never come back. Alas, it was so well written. I read it with all my heart during the holiday and it was really hard to let go. That's it, I'm looking forward to the next one~ (I also want to see my wife write about Ke, which is obviously great!)

In fact, the front crotch pattern is really pretty, so I didn't realize it was a quick wear [dog head. Jpg] The background is explained later, but the style of painting suddenly changes and the sense of inconsistency is too serious. The integration of cultivation and restraint is not very good, which makes me feel helpless. The two aspects look good when viewed separately, but they look awkward when pinched together. The most important thing is that there are too many bugs, too many, which have seriously affected the reading experience. The sudden change in the story style did not make me uncomfortable, but the typos drove me crazy to the point where I wanted to give a negative score, so I resisted. Damn, if you have the chance, come and fix it as soon as possible. A good story shouldn't be hurt by typos. Finished spreading flowers!

Reminding me of a certain article I read, the protagonist gave up on the "subject" that was fused with Gong's memory and even his soul, and finally found a world with almost the same development in a parallel universe, and chose to meet Gong again. It made me want to cry. Both paths are not the same "him" anymore. For me, maybe I don't think the problem is developed enough.

I don't know why, but after reading it, I always felt a little uncomfortable. I felt that they were no longer the Xing and Aluo in my mind at the end. The place that made me shed the most tears was when Arrow was about to start the three-week project. There was a lot of foreshadowing that Arrow would not let himself enjoy the results of the next week's project, but he still chose to start over for Ah Xing. Although I know that Ah Luo and Ah Xing, who have recovered their memories, are no longer in the same world, I still feel sad because he chose to leave.

The setting is very attractive, and the science fiction (fantasy?) Elements are also very interesting, but the emotional line did not impress me. How did Xing fall in love with He Luo? It feels very abrupt. Sometimes the relationship between these two people is like a fictitious relationship, like children playing house, and the friendship feels like it is floating on the water.

I can feel the author's strong wish for completion wwww How to put it, I can't tell the difference between this ending and He Luo's decision to trade himself for A Xing, and then A Xing chooses to separate from the origin of the planet/commit suicide by killing himself. Which of the two endings is better? They are not dead, they seem to have a future, but after all, they are not the monsters who pursued love wholeheartedly, and people who know that monsters are only chasing love, but are content with it, and cannot let go of humans, so they walk the tightrope between humans and monsters. But after all, they were both sick from the beginning, and they could only grow twisted flowers on the twisted soil.

Woohoo~ This is not what I want! A single plant is no longer Ho Luo After a long time, Zhuchen was no longer the second week's Asing. He Luo in Er Zhou Mu is not the Ho Luo that Zhu Chen needs to fall in love with in Zhou Mu The person Ah Xing is trying to fall in love with is Er Zhoumu He Luo In the end, Zhu Chen fell in love with Shanzhu who never moved forward. Everything has changed! Fairy tales are all lies! The changing Zhuchen loves the changing single plant... Will this kind of love not change? Woohoo~

It feels like two articles, followed by an extra chapter