Fifth Junior Sister

The first long review should be Both are articles about cultivating immortals. They have a grand structure, tight rhythm, climaxes, follow-up, and self-consistent logic. The three views are very consistent with mine. Night candles in Changyuan, fireflies and snow on solitary peaks, ancient formations from all directions, and spring seeds in Jumang There are mysterious legends, coincidental events, and carefully considered naming; there are battles between immortals and mortals, battles between clans, and life and death; there are all kinds of fluff, and there are spouses with different appearances and temperaments; there are charming male and female nuns; there are conflicting decent villains; there is the struggle for survival in decline, there is the joy of being proud, there is the calmness of returning to nature; there is love, friendship, and family... Yukun Chimian, a picture of life slowly unfolds in front of him. The trial in the secret realm is also a connection between the inside and outside. The balance of men and women in the text must be as good as possible, Nantang Yezhu, Yingxue before and after, Xie Xiao and Xie Qingliu, Yue Xiao and his mother, Ye Sishao congratulates Wuhuan, the elder sister avenges her lover, and even Nantang Yezhu's love, etc. From my perspective, there is almost no uncomfortable place between men and women in the whole book, and I admire the author very much. After reading this book for the first time, I felt agitated and confused. What I'm slightly regretful about is the writing style, which has both parallel prose and rhyming, but it feels a little less ethereal and calm, and feels a bit too hard. However, different scenes require different writing styles. This is too demanding, but it is already very good. Nantang Yezhu's emotional description is really in line with my fantasy of love. I think the narration part can be a little more otherworldly, haha

It's been a long time since I've seen a male and female protagonist with such an upright outlook. I started watching it with a bloody mentality of torturing a scumbag and taking revenge. It wasn't until I saw the almost innocent justice in the female protagonist's heart (this is the mentality of a cultivator!!!) And the male protagonist's hard-working smile to please in order to survive despite being so strong, that I felt that this work was interesting. At that time, I felt that the male and female protagonists were at least normal people...! (This is really rare in novels qwq) The relationship between the male and female protagonists at the beginning is not the inexplicable love at first sight, but the two people use each other and accompany each other at the beginning. Until the male protagonist sees the female protagonist die for the first time, he also feels a touch of regret and inexplicable heartache. This really pokes me. At least the relationship between the two people is developed in real terms, not the so-called male protagonist is the female protagonist. The female protagonist's character is also very down-to-earth, unlike other novels... How should I put it? The way the male and female protagonists get along is really like a real old married couple, without some misunderstandings and bloodshed. The two of them will also quarrel and be jealous of each other. This male and female protagonist really has the right temperament for me!!! There are many things involved in the plot that I just skimmed over. Some personal thoughts: some unnecessary plots are a bit too long. The world view is not the traditional system of cultivating immortals (this is actually nothing, but some settings are difficult to justify and become very stream-of-consciousness by the end). There is nothing else. In the last fifty chapters, when the male and female protagonists are slightly tired of aesthetics, other sub-CPs appear (such as Yingxue, I really like it), which will save my spirit. I truly feel that the existence of a deputy CP is really necessary!! Having said that, I have to say that Lin's setting is really good. She is not the only heroine who is true, kind, and beautiful and loves her very much. In the end, some people said they couldn't understand it. In fact, most of the authors explained it. I understood it anyway. There were some things that were not explained (such as why Yingxue got gold lines), but fortunately, it didn't hurt in my opinion. These are my thoughts after reading it so far! I hope the author will work hard and keep it up! Don't follow the crowd and write nonsense. I really need such a male and female protagonist with upright views qwq

I think I like Lin Qingyuan better. This girl is really good. Although I don't write much about her, I think she has a really charming personality. She is also a good partner with Yingxue. As soon as she appeared on the scene, I had a hunch that she and Yingxue might develop hahaha

To be honest, it's hard to find this chapter sweet... Because the process of the heroine's resurrection is described as if she just doesn't want to be resurrected because she is having a conflict with the male protagonist, rather than there being an objective process that needs to be overcome that makes her resurrection difficult. In this way, it seems that the heroine delayed the treatment of Yue Xiao's mother and Yanhua's marriage ceremony because of the so-called temper tantrum, and even missed the last meeting of Senior Brother Xia and his wife. It seems to be an inexplicable sense of selfishness. You must know how helpful Yue Xiao and Yanhua were to her. If she is It is really incomprehensible to delay these things purely out of "subjective and angry" behavior; another point is that I don't remember where it was described that the heroine knew that there were no monks on the third star. Why is it that there are monks in the two immortal realms in Jiuhuan San, but there are no monks in the third star? It seems that there is no description in the text, but the heroine explodes so decisively, as if the considerations are omitted for the grandeur of the scene. I'm really sorry if I missed it, but I was really confused when I saw the heroine explode the third star; the heroine did save the world, but I really couldn't figure out these two points. Furthermore, it is really a pity that there is no side story, especially the character Bae Yuanxi does not have an independent side story or a follow-up to the heroine after she wakes up.

I thought there would be an extra episode!!

It's a very interesting article, with a very broad layout, without the limitations of ordinary love and hatred in ordinary articles. The heroine of other articles, Golden Finger, is probably a bug. The heroine of this article is probably a bug-level buff. Although she is also very strong, this buff is really the ultimate heaven-defying one. I want it!

It took me a week to finish it. This article about cultivating immortals is the first novel I have fully subscribed to this year. I have to say that it is very well written. The ordinary skeleton of cultivating monsters and upgrading has written a soul-stirring pattern of flesh and blood. When I looked at the author, I said, good guy, I have also subscribed to the previous "Catching a Son-in-Law under the List"?

Ah, the ending should be about the fish pond waking up, and am I the only one who cares about whether the money tree has been destroyed?

The first long review should be Both are articles about cultivating immortals. They have a grand structure, tight rhythm, climaxes, follow-up, and self-consistent logic. The three views are very consistent with mine. Night candles in Changyuan, fireflies and snow on solitary peaks, ancient formations from all directions, and spring seeds in Jumang There are mysterious legends, coincidental events, and carefully considered naming; there are battles between immortals and mortals, battles between clans, and life and death; there are all kinds of fluff, and there are spouses with different appearances and temperaments; there are charming male and female nuns; there are conflicting decent villains; there is the struggle for survival in decline, there is the joy of being proud, there is the calmness of returning to nature; there is love, friendship, and family... Yukun Chimian, a picture of life slowly unfolds in front of him. The trial in the secret realm is also a connection between the inside and outside. The balance of men and women in the text must be as good as possible, Nantang Yezhu, Yingxue before and after, Xie Xiao and Xie Qingliu, Yue Xiao and his mother, Ye Sishao congratulates Wuhuan, the elder sister avenges her lover, and even Nantang Yezhu's love, etc. From my perspective, there is almost no uncomfortable place between men and women in the whole book, and I admire the author very much. After reading this book for the first time, I felt agitated and confused. What I'm slightly regretful about is the writing style, which has both parallel prose and rhyming, but it feels a little less ethereal and calm, and feels a bit too hard. However, different scenes require different writing styles. This is too demanding, but it is already very good. Nantang Yezhu's emotional description is really in line with my fantasy of love. I think the narration part can be a little more otherworldly, haha

It's a pity that there is no extra episode!!!