A Master's Bearing

I feel that this article is a bit messy compared to the previous work, especially the part where the Bronze Mirror reverses the world and the two Xie Jinyuan. The names are too confusing and sometimes it is difficult to distinguish between "Xie Jinyuan" and "Lingshan Taoist". I don't quite understand when the heroine returned from a hundred years ago to a hundred years later. I also don't understand why the Bronze Mirror was given to Qinghe before, and why the hero wanted to protect the Zhongzong... And after the cause and effect disappeared, everything experienced by people like Qingyin Qinghe was erased. So are they still them? Also, the story line is really interesting, but the main text feels underdeveloped. The emotional line relies entirely on memories, but in the current period, the two people actually barely have a moment of heart-to-heart talk until the end. It would be nice if my wife could read it again from the beginning and fix it...

Come on, you will definitely be popular!!!

Wuwuwu, why is it gone? Also, I feel that there is a little less ink in the area where Muji fell off the horse. Although the overall look is relatively condensed, there are some important sections that can be expanded and written more carefully? Reading experience for the author's reference

When I see it, it's gone. I just want to buckle it????? To be honest, this article is much inferior to the one with the male protagonist. The main reason is that it only follows the plot without taking into account the emotional line. Moreover, this kind of interweaving method is really uncomfortable. It has an inexplicable feeling that the male protagonist is affectionate. Especially in the memories, the female protagonist does not seem to be deeply affectionate. In summary, reading this article, I feel that both the male and female protagonists are tools for the plot. The author just wants to follow the plot.

The author is really serious in writing the article. There is almost no word count, so the pace is very good. The whole article is very compact. But this book feels too short, which is a bit regretful.

After all, Master didn't provoke anyone. . .

All lovers in the world eventually become brothers and sisters, so the hero and the princess may be cousins. . .

Is this really the end of the story that I have been following for a long time? . . Is there a side story for the male protagonist from the Daluo Immortal period? Wow, oh, oh, is that really not emotional?

It always feels like the author hasn't finished writing. . . I originally thought that we could continue to see how he reversed the suffering of the past life and finally returned to the God Realm and the two of them were together for the last time. . . .

Why can't you kiss a dragon with its body, plus it has horns!