The Hares Run Free
The hares run free, while pheasants are caught in the nets. When I was born, there was still no hardship; since my birth, I have met with a hundred woes. Let me sleep, and make no sound!
The hares run free, while pheasants are caught in the traps. When I was born, there was still no trouble; since my birth, I have met with a hundred sorrows. Let me sleep, and wake me not!
The hares run free, while pheasants are caught in the nets. When I was born, there was still no toil; since my birth, I have met with a hundred calamities. Let me sleep, and hear nothing!
[At last, the story is complete. Thank you for staying with me all the way. A deep bow, and another deep bow.]
[There may be bonus chapters. Some things haven't been fully explained, and there are still stories to look forward to.]
[My favorite line from Kung Fu Panda. It moved me, and I hope it moves you too.]
Yesterday is history, tomorrow is mystery,
today is a gift,
that is why it is called present.
Theme:
The author has a rivalry with the Korean drama screenwriter
Wow, this episode is very entertaining
The ending is too bloody =. =
Can't stand it
Oops, it turns out the more bloody thing is at the back.
Wow, the supporting actor Zhang Zhidong is really conscientious.
Lover,
The male-to-female ratio in our school is reversed from Noshu.
Woman?
Oh——
It's no different from grass.
I am that messy grass in the wind ah ah ah
In fact, I haven't finished reading the article yet, I just couldn't help but say a few words. Hehe~
Wenwen is very good and Yangyang likes Diduo very much. Although the author's writing style cannot be called sophisticated, he has developed his own writing style. Yangyang especially likes the author's description of scenes, which is very delicate and touching. Interspersed in a relatively relaxed plot, it is very interesting. \(^O^)/~
Then let's talk about the beginning. Since the article is of a slow-burning type (Yang Yang thinks so~), the author takes a long time to get into the mood, so the first few chapters look a bit strange. Yangyang summarized a few possible reasons for the strange feeling to see if it can help the author.
1. There are too many characters, but the descriptions are not distinctive enough.
Since there were too many characters in the opening chapter, and the author did not highlight the characters carefully (or there was no label on each character's head), Yang Yang was not impressed and could not tell who was who (especially for people like Yang Yang who cannot recognize people...). Therefore, it is recommended that the author appropriately emphasize the character description, and describe the relatively important characters in detail, so that readers can deepen their impression of the characters.
2. The plot at the beginning is not coherent enough.
The beginning of the chapter always gave me an intermittent feeling. Maybe it was because the author didn't have a clear mind, so the beginning of the chapter didn't feel smooth to me. It was lumpy, so it looked awkward. When the author edits the text, he can make the plot more complete and detailed.
Above, a little perspective. Haha, continue watching now~~
PS: Has Cong Xuan been in love with Su Xiao before? Don't tell me, I'll keep watching...
In fact,,, the old man who came to promote lactation is finally finished~~Congratulations~~
The number of words, 123,496, is very auspicious. .
The tiles also have shadow birds,
Don't wear a dog leash either.
What? ? ? ? You, you, you, you, you, you straighten the crooked man, you are my enemy... Tears...
The author has a rivalry with the Korean drama screenwriter
Wow, this episode is very entertaining
The ending is too bloody =. = Can't stand it
Oops, it turns out the more bloody thing is at the back.
Wow, the supporting actor Zhang Zhidong is really conscientious.
Lover, The male-to-female ratio in our school is reversed from Noshu. Woman? Oh—— It's no different from grass. I am that messy grass in the wind ah ah ah
In fact, I haven't finished reading the article yet, I just couldn't help but say a few words. Hehe~ Wenwen is very good and Yangyang likes Diduo very much. Although the author's writing style cannot be called sophisticated, he has developed his own writing style. Yangyang especially likes the author's description of scenes, which is very delicate and touching. Interspersed in a relatively relaxed plot, it is very interesting. \(^O^)/~ Then let's talk about the beginning. Since the article is of a slow-burning type (Yang Yang thinks so~), the author takes a long time to get into the mood, so the first few chapters look a bit strange. Yangyang summarized a few possible reasons for the strange feeling to see if it can help the author. 1. There are too many characters, but the descriptions are not distinctive enough. Since there were too many characters in the opening chapter, and the author did not highlight the characters carefully (or there was no label on each character's head), Yang Yang was not impressed and could not tell who was who (especially for people like Yang Yang who cannot recognize people...). Therefore, it is recommended that the author appropriately emphasize the character description, and describe the relatively important characters in detail, so that readers can deepen their impression of the characters. 2. The plot at the beginning is not coherent enough. The beginning of the chapter always gave me an intermittent feeling. Maybe it was because the author didn't have a clear mind, so the beginning of the chapter didn't feel smooth to me. It was lumpy, so it looked awkward. When the author edits the text, he can make the plot more complete and detailed. Above, a little perspective. Haha, continue watching now~~ PS: Has Cong Xuan been in love with Su Xiao before? Don't tell me, I'll keep watching...
In fact,,, the old man who came to promote lactation is finally finished~~Congratulations~~ The number of words, 123,496, is very auspicious. .
The tiles also have shadow birds, Don't wear a dog leash either.
What? ? ? ? You, you, you, you, you, you straighten the crooked man, you are my enemy... Tears...