The Long, Long Road to Immortality

But please consider opening Tongtian Huanyu after you become a little more mature. I think Tongtian Huanyu is a brand-new world. As the source of the sky, it has a brilliant civilization. Big, wow π_π

But I still want to see the universe and the world that belongs to my uncle. How about you reorganize the outline and open the next volume? The name is Tongtian Yuanyu

I followed this article step by step and it has become a must-have for me before going to bed every night. I have to say that the author's updates are really good and very reliable. They are updated every day. It's really great. It still feels a bit weak. The uncle's magic power is very high, but it can't be seen. I don't know how the uncle knows so many things silently. The explanation is a bit vague. I feel that the ending is a little rushed, but most of the holes have been filled in. In addition, Zhao Ning's resurrection is very obvious, but it seems that Master Shishu's is not so obvious. In fact, in the final analysis, I just want to ask for a side story hehe.

Can I continue writing the part about Tongtian Huanyu? I feel like I am still in a hurry to finish the book. If I keep this momentum, I can continue writing the part about the universe. Extras can also be written, such as the specific past of Qin and Zhao Ning.

Wow, I really like the character of Little Fairy Zhao Ning. In some aspects, she is even similar to me. I also like to be alone. I can do many things myself and don't like to trouble others. Uncle Master, I really cried to death. It's really great. It's been a long time since I've seen a male protagonist who is willing to sacrifice himself for the sake of peace in the world. The character of the uncle is something I admire. He is really a man of glory and glory. Nowadays, most writers in Jinjiang would rather betray the world than let the world betray me. Or they just travel through all kinds of things. They are too impetuous. There are very few who really calm down and write down-to-earth local immortality novels. , So it becomes more and more rare to see such a grand world of immortality in this article, hahahaha. Finally, I saw that the author is going to write another one next year. I am really looking forward to it. I really like Zhao Ning's character in this article. The only thing is that there are too few emotional lines, wow, it is not enough to read. Then I hope that the next article can add more emotional lines, and the male and female protagonists will grow together instead of separately. Come on (●°u°●)??"

After reading it, I felt a sense of loss. It was really well written in the early stage, but in the later stage I was too distracted to read it, so I only read the truth briefly. This article had a great impact on me... I may not be able to read it for a long time.

Why is Yue Shengxian Meng Congyi? There is really no foreshadowing. Woohoo, I think it could be Meng Congyi pretending to be Shengxian. The two of them really have nothing to do with each other.

Finished reading. The first thing I have to mention is the author's update---it's very good. I have read a lot of fairy tales (the articles mentioned here are good writing, clear logical thinking, self-contained world rules, and a grand world view; the characters in the book do not purely revolve around the heroine, but have their own reasonable reasons for existence, and survive and fight for their own interests. They are convincing with flesh and blood; scenes such as fighting skills and wars are described in detail and vividly with a lot of pen and ink instead of being talked about in general... Etc. Etc.) This book has its own excellence and makes people want to read it. But as the author said, the writing is full of crime-solving stories that tend to seek the truth... And the overall tone is very depressing... There is too little description of the male and female protagonists' hearts, and there are even less supporting characters. We must know that human thoughts and emotions are rich and complex. How can we reveal the inner world of the characters without writing? Directly into people's hearts? However, the description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is quite good. The length is not very subtle and restrained, but it still gives people a deep and passionate feeling! In fact, the first thing I collected was the author's "Pictures of Immortal Worlds". Good guy, I clicked on it and saw that there was only an introduction! Is it true that only JJ has this kind of advance notice? When it comes to cultivating immortals, I almost only read long novels with more than two million words. The author said that he will write another long novel, so I am very much looking forward to it! The author continues to keep your mind at ease! You can even continue to add more, and your long novel is waiting for you. In addition to the world of cultivation, I think authors of the fairy world after ascension can also try it (O(∩_∩)O haha~)

A hundred chapters were skipped in the middle. It was jumped when the big map was cut, that is, when we arrived at Jiuzhou. In fact, it is necessary to give readers some time to change the nodes of such a large map. For example, it is like ascending from the world of cultivation to the world of immortality. The protagonist goes from being a prodigy to the immortal world, and his status changes again, and the protagonist becomes a weakling again. There is a psychological gap, and the readers have to adapt. Then when it comes to this article, it's a little more complicated. First, Master Qin died, and then Zhao Ning and then the reincarnation disaster. He lost his memory and started over. It was full of debuffs. At least for me, it was a bit confusing and a bit confusing. It feels a bit like amnesia gags. I really hate amnesia gags, so I skipped dozens of chapters first. After skipping one paragraph, the plot couldn't connect later, so I just skipped a few more paragraphs, and finally jumped directly to the end, so it ended. But I am obsessive-compulsive, and I have to buy it after skipping. If you don't have this habit, skip it and forget it, so the completion score will be less.

I haven't read such a long article in a long time. The elements are quite complete. In fact, it's quite to my liking. Otherwise, I wouldn't have read the whole article. But sometimes I feel that the pace of the story is very slow and sometimes very fast, especially the final ending is actually a bit rushed, and there is no sense that everything is connected. The truth is even a bit "huh?", And the per capita whispering master. I'm not very good at expressing comments, so I'll just make a few complaints. Overall, it's okay. I hope my wife will write better as she writes more, come on!