Cultivating Immortality with a Cheat Device

The first 3/1 of the plot feels more carefully written, and it escalates faster as you get to the back. . It feels like I just want to finish it quickly, the emotional line is inexplicable, and to be honest, I would prefer Yan Xinghe if the male lead could be changed. . I also don't really like the heroine's statement that she only likes men who can beat her. . Read the heroine's cool article. . Instead, I prefer a weaker male protagonist. . . The heroine's routine of pretending to be sexy is too simple, either fighting or refining elixirs. . They don't even accept a few apprentices to pass on. . Overall it's quite boring. .

It's beautiful, but it doesn't deal with emotions very well.

There are no battle scenes. It feels like they are all commenting on various skills. A little speechless.

"Promoting Puppet" is a big bug for the author~ stand-in

I finished reading it in one go, so cool! Still unfinished!

Finished reading it in one sitting! So refreshing! Super pretty! ! !

It's so good, I finished it in two days

Ah. . . . . I have been following this article for so long, and I have read it several times before, but here is the content after the author gave birth to a child. . . . I don't know if it's because she became a mother, but the heroine in the back lost a lot of energy. In the end, the biggest enemy of the two parties, the enemy of Samsara City, died inexplicably without facing them. The heroine of Yin Yang Temple had no sense of participation at all. What's even more embarrassing is the extra chapter. Everyone is affirming and grateful to the heroine who had no sense of participation in this battle. . . It was so exciting at the beginning and made me watch it over and over again, but why did it suddenly stop like this at the end?

Yu/Zhao Han, what happened? Can you explain it?

It's a bit anticlimactic, the first part is quite exciting, and the second part is also very exciting, but I feel that the story that could have written a thousand chapters has been compressed in half. The last section is all about the male protagonist showing off. Except for the red spirit, the female protagonist's cultivation and combat power are of no use, which makes people feel quite disappointed. What I want to see more is the female protagonist pretending to be slapped in the face all the way instead of being protected by the male protagonist, the red spirit. This is also a common problem in romance novels, but this one is not serious, and the ending is just a little bit. Although the journey is smooth, it is good, but there are too many smooth things, and the pleasure is not enough. If you don't have CP, you should have finished the chapter of ascension. Otherwise, you will be a bit unspeakably unhappy when you see the ending, but you are afraid of regrets if you don't read it.