Pregnant in a Paranormal Game
他在灵异游戏里安胎
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 267k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
66Chapters
13.9kFavorites
8.1Score
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49.5kClicks per chapter
928Comments
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... I really shouldn't have bought the full story. It looked pretty good at the beginning, but I bought it all after entering v. As a result... The character design of Shou became weirder in the later stage. You said it was you who seduced people, and your pregnancy was also due to your body structure. But when I found out that I had a child, I took Shou into the game to raise the fetus.
The ending was caught off guard, and the tone rose all the way at the beginning, but then it was caught off guard and started to get unresolved, but after all, it's better to finish it and spread the flowers.
This article is... Hard to describe in one word I want to watch horror unlimited streaming, but I don't have it. Even if I want to see sweet love, I don't have it. The copy is very descriptive...
I always feel that the plot has been written to death, everything is too absolute, that is, how should I put it, the original setting at the beginning was all about the direction of the sweet story, and then the character design of Shou gradually became too absolute, contradicting the original setting of the story, and the story is no longer easy to develop. Unless I write a It's a super long story, otherwise the character design has not been released and will be finished quickly. Unless it is directly be, it feels contradictory to the beginning. Well, it just feels a little contradictory and the character design is also somewhat contradictory. The story narrative is good, but the character design comparison, there may be some mistakes.
Can't it be sweet? This sufferer felt something was wrong, and felt very selfish, unsettled, and disgusting. It seems that it is not very calm, has no b-character, and is not amazing at the beginning... If the ending is like this, it doesn't mean much, it is just cheating on feelings and money...:)
This sentence is shocking
Not bad, beautifully written
Anticlimactic feeling No, it's very watery in the middle
A lot of bad sentences and a lot of typos
Finished spreading flowers, looking forward to the author's next article