
The Ultimate Stepfather Is Raising Kids Online [Book Transmigration]
极品后爹,在线养娃[穿书]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 122k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
45Chapters
652Favorites
6.0Score
196Nutrient gifts
2.7kClicks per chapter
107Comments
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Reader comments 19
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Ah, this... Is a bit fast. I want to see the extra chapters of each of the three children and the follow-up QAQ of the protagonist.
The previous chapter said that the Duan family did not have enough food to eat. Now they even bring out wine. Is that beer? Didn't you know that wine is made from grain? Even if it is just fruit wine soaked in high-strength wine and some fruits, does the wine cost free?
Writing skills need to be honed and refined... Once I get to the key points, I just write the reactions of the people around me without details. It makes it seem like doing things is easy, and there is no sense of reality at all. The best place to write is the dialogue and communication, so this part has the most, but the writing is not brilliant, it is a bit boring, and the character creation. Xiaoqin is actually quite likable if written well, but the psychological description is a bit God's perspective, and the rough description in various places makes the character unable to stand up. Well, in fact, the whole text has this tone. It feels like it can't be improved by just one or two places.
?????????????????????? The set of templates has a strong sense of déjà vu... The dedicated onlookers←_←
? I thought it was a bit ridiculous to find the tools, but there are still people watching??? Are you all so free?
Ah, is this the end?
Tong Yalan is a teacher??? I really don't see it. Although I can't reason with unreasonable people, it will always be done without irritating people, right? She also said that the child was right, what the hell, she was so blatantly partial, how could the school let her become a regular student? Although the dean's handling of the situation was not good, it was really laughable for a teacher to dare to be so presumptuous in front of a dean.
Why don't you create a side story for the babies? The author is great
So this Tong Yalan is the heroine?
I don't think Tong Yalan is the heroine. I always see her. It's nice to be beautiful alone without CP.